Ok, this is an author's note.
I'm probably going to take this story down. I thought I could do it as a linear, chapter-by-chapter story, like Where the Sun is Always Shining and What Happens in Vegas Gets You Shot in the Head, but it just isn't doing it for me. I posted the first few things I wrote to gauge a reaction, and I agree with everything said. Rigby is coming out awful.
Rest assured, I'll post this back up underneath the same name, with the same Rigby, but make her less Sue-ish and more human. Shift the focus to her environment and interactions with the other characters. Alas, this will probably mean no romance. I am a big, big fan of Courier/Boone (Boone/anyone, really. I love that guy), but I'm not willing to sacrifice the quality for that. If I can make it work, I will. But no promises. What I'm planning on is making a series of one-shots grouped underneath the same story, and two of those are already published: Divergence and NCR Infamy Gained!
TD;LR I don't think Look at all the Lonely People is very good in its current state, and I think you guys deserve something that I'm confident in it. I'm sorry to those of you who liked the direction it was headed, but I didn't. I'll make it up to you. Pinky swear.
