Oh. My. Gosh.

Someone reviewed..

AND IT WAS NOT A FLAME!

You don't know how happy I am..

I am more than ecstatic...

RedWarrior702: Thank you, for being my first reviewer. Even I slightly don't know where this is going, I just have small goals in mind, and it will go from there.

Anyways, I have gotten past my 100 views goal, with only 1 review... (actually, I had 100 before the review, but it still feels good typing that.)

I forgot to say how Suicune looks like.

He always wears blue, has blue eyes, and has (long) black hair that goes down to about his ears.

Sha-bang, here is your lovely chapter 4.


"So, away from the battle and assassin subject, where is my brother?" I asked Arson, walking down the General hall to the main part of the castle. He just shrugged and kept on staring straight ahead. He always looked in front of him, I never knew why.

"Why do you look in front of you all the time?" I asked curiously.

"So I wont trip and fall on something." He joked.

"No, I am serious. You always look in front of you, like someone is going to jump in front of you."

He shrugged. "I guess its just genetics, or my father."

"Speaking of your father, where is he?" I ask, looking around the corner that we are going to turn, only to see Arson's father and mine, discussing something. I jumped back and stood against the wall, Arson right beside me. I looked around and saw a familiar place in the wall.

"Knock on the wall across the hall." I whispered in his ear.

He changed forms so he would be quieter, and as soon as he changed forms, I heard footsteps coming from around the corner. He changed forms again and knocked.

The wall slid open, behind it, a Umbreon.

"Hi, Shadow." I whispered, and jumped into the space into the wall, right after Arson.

I slid the wall closed, and listened. I heard the muffled voices of my father and Arson's father, and I struggled to make out what they were saying.

"Make sure she..." I heard my father's voice and shank back against the other side of the small hallway.

"Hi Shadow." Arson said, sitting down and crouching because of the low ceiling.

"Hello Mr. General." She replied, licking her paws. "So how is Venom?" She said between licks.

"Fine." I said. "Can you take me to my room please?"

She nodded and started walking down the hall normally. Arson and I had to walk with our bellies touching the cold floor, because we were too big for the small hall.

"How did you know about this?" He asked from behind me.

"I used to explore these halls when I was a cub. I liked being the only one to know about these." I said, resisting the urge to flick my tail.

"Well then how did the exile know about it?" I heard Shadow growl from ahead.

"Because she lives in the halls." I hissed at him.

"Touche..." Arson mumbled.

When we finally reached the hallway that was outside my room, Shadow opened up the wall and let me and Arson out.

"So where is Venom?" I asked her when I got out, and before she had a chance to shut the wall.

She thought for a moment. "Last time I saw her, she was at the river taunting the cubs."

I sighed and flicked my tail in annoyance. "Alright..."

Shadow closed the door to the wall. I patted Arson on the shoulder.

"She didn't kill you, nice job." I said.

"Thanks.." He mumbled. "So should we go get Venom?" He asked me.

"Nah, she will be fine." I turned away and started walking down to my door.

"I don't care about Venom, I am worried about the cubs..." He sighed. "She has a sailor's mouth, and I don't want to think about what their mothers would do if they heard her."

I giggled. "So you do care about 'sailor's mouth Venom'?" I opened my door, to my surprise, Venom was on my bed. "Oh, hey." I waved to her.

"Shouldn't you be getting ready?" She asked.

"I already have my bags packed, I just need the Moonlight Dip*." I said.

"Well you might want to get it now, just in case."

I snorted "Fine, mother."


I will end this chapter here... Its short... But I am tired...

As for what Moonlight Dip is...

Explaining now...

"Equinox's live off of Moonlight mostly. They can eat human food regularly, but will soon die if they don't get enough moonlight. If you can find the right ingredients, you can make Moonlight Dip, a special sauce that adds the right amount of Moonlight to your food."

So yea...

I have decided to bend the rules of Fanfiction a bit...

I am very bad at ideas...

So I will make a OC chart...

But not this chapter, I have worked hard enough with school coming closer and closer...

Anyways Please R&R...