Good morning :)
Ok so this is the second chapter of birth of the Phoenix child. I hope you enjoy. I'm aiming to make my chapters over 2,000 words each.
PS. Hey what do u know, if I tell you not to review u review and if I ask you to review your don't, bull yeah reverse psychology
PSS. wow I'm such a nerd, I can spell psychology without the help of autocorrect
PSSS. Enjoy
Chapter 2: the black swirly thing
Picking up the box I open it to see a cloak, a black river stone and a stick, confused I reached forward and as my finger touched the items in the box, they leaped out of the box, as if by magic. I gave a short yelp as the stone flew into my left hand, the stick into my right and the clock fashioned itself around my neck. As soon as all the objects had touched me though, I felt at peace and as if to show its agreement, what I suddenly realised to be a wand shot of bright, green and silver sparks out of its tip, nearly blinding me.
Soon after I realised, as the slight haze blocking my thoughts retreated, that my relatives might of seen the very brights sparks. As soon as I thought this, however I heard my uncle vernon start yelling "boy what have you done!" I started to panic, I need to get away from here I though panicky, as soon as I did however, this black, swirly portal appeared and without even thinking, I jumped in, hopefully never to return.
Before Eragon has found Saphira's egg, somewhere in the middle of the spine, roughly 130km (roughly 60miles) from where Eragon will find Saphira's
"Ouch, that hurt my head" I said, as I slowly got up from where I had face planted into the ground after I had jumped through the portal, I clutched my head where i could feel a bruise forming. Looking around, I could only see trees, huge trees 200 feet tall and as wide as ten men, shocked, confused and scared, I tried to find anything to help me find where I was, when suddenly a cold wind blew through the trees and made me shiver. I wish I had some proper clothes I thought feverishly as I hugged myself, as I closed my eyes I suddenly felt more weight on my body and as I looked down at myself I saw a nice, fake leather jacket and jeans, like I saw some people wearing last week as they walked down private drive.
"What the hell!" I exclaimed as I saw what I was wearing, "how did I get into these clothes?", I felt so confused when I saw the wand was glowing, "magic" I whispered to my self suddenly understand. I felt happy and elated, "I can do magic!" I exclaimed into the darkening forest around me. I was brought out of my happy mood when rain clouds started to form over the forest and the wind started to whisper through the trees. I looked around as all of a sudden a thunderous crack sounded and as I saw lightning flash in the distance, I knew it was time to get out of here. Thinking, I remembered that so far, whenever I have done magic I have been thinking and wanting to do something. So I steadied my self and, fully prepared for failure, I started to think Tele...
(Bet u thought I would leave it here as a cliffs, hehe, but I'm not evil)
...port! *crack!* there was a loud, startling crack as I was sent forward, I could hardly breathe and it felt like I was being squished down a long tube until, finally there was a second crack and I was sent sprawling onto the ground, feeling like I was about to vomit I turned myself onto my side and not having any energy, vomited. Disgusted I shuffled away from the mess and then, once I was a significant distance away, collapsed from my kneeling position into unconsciousness.
Time skip: 4 hours, the storm has ended
"Owww my head" for the second time today I felt myself coming out of unconsciousness with a sore head. I felt really exhausted, as if I had run a marathon and I had a migraine the size of a mountain and I am soaked and chilled to the bone. What happened? I though confused as I struggled to get onto my feet and looking around. Oh yeah, I was trying to teleport... Wait I didn't think of where I wanted to go, I looked around cautiously and was relieved to see I was still in the forest and not in some weird situation... "WHAT I HAVENT TELEPORTED MORE THAN 6FEET!" I yelled into the forest, startling some birds, in a rage. I took a few calming breathes and decided not to try teleporting unless i know where I'm teleporting to, less another accident occur.
Starting to feel a little better I decided to just walk North until I hit a civilisation or people, point me North, I though and surprisingly, after the failure earlier, the wand in my hand started spinning, and spinning, and kept spinning, until finally the spinning wand stopped and pointed towards the right of where I was facing. I turned slowly until it was facing the way I was and started moving forward, glancing at my wand every now and again to make sure I was on the right track.
Time skip: later that afternoon
"Ohh god" I gasped out as I stopped running, I had run into a pack of well, I don't quite know what they are. They looked like Giant orcs from the story books I used to read before I teleported to wherever this place is. They had weapons ranging from axes to crossbows and as soon as they heard me, they turned and snarled or roared. My heart racing I was chased for nearly half an hour before I escaped. "Bloody hell" I gasped still in shock of what had happened, I sat down against the back of what I though was a rather large redwood and tried to calm down. It was then I realised that I couldn't hear any animals. cautious, I looked around slowly when I heard a twig breaking, I twirled around but I was too late as I suddenly felt pain and as I descended into darkness the last thing I heard was bark like laughter.
Well, I am glad this chapter is finished. Thank u to everyone who's view, favourited and followed my story.
Reviews;
DLM4- just as a note, 5'7" is absurdly tall for a 10 year old. average height for a ten year old is between 50-58 inches.
thanks, I have a ten year old brother and it wasn't until after I saw your review that I realised the miss type. I've fixed that now and as my first reviewer of this story u get a special shout out.
DLM4 u are the most helpful guy/gal ever thank u so much
Ok I will post when the next chapter should be uploaded so see u all later
