DisclaimerXx nope Naruto is still not mine *mopes in emo corner*
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Hello and thanks to everyone~ who has liked and favourited this story it's really encouraging! Please may I have some reviews though? They can really help me. No flamers please. Hasn't been proof read, so any serious mistakes, please tell me, I'm writing on a tablet so its kinda complicated (for me at least)
wingedsilverfang Xx
Minato hummed quietly as he read through the results of the academy graduation results. They all looked pretty promising to his eyes, especially Nawaki and Mito (those two would go far he smiled to himself) He gritted his teeth angrily when he read through the name of the top kunoichi.
Naruto.
Somewhere in the back (behind boxes of reasons why and cast in shadows) he knew his dislike of the girl was irrational, unfair and petty but he forced himself not to care. Yes, he knew for sure that the seal would not break, could not. But he simply wasn't able to look at the long blonde hair, the small (fleeting and full of hidden emotions) meaningful smiles and the soul piercing eyes without seeing IT (gaping jaws filled with sharpened carnivorous fangs, burning crimson fur and demonic slit pupil eyes of the same colour practically leaking malice and killing intent)
And gradually, over time, he had stopped seeing yellow, blue and tan instead only RED, RED, RED, RED, RED, RED, RED,RED, RED,RED. And those eyes. She was dead to him (because in his eyes she wasn't human, she was the Kyuubi) of that he was certain.(he steadfastly ignored the ache in his chest (even as tears drew roads down her cheeks and betrayal dyed ocean to ice) he told himself he didn't care)
It was raining (he had noted absent mindedly) when what little hipe or trust she had in him had shriveled and died. He could not deny that his heart had twisted and clenched at the LOOK in her eyes, even as his emotionless face had not flickered. She was five, and incredibly (for her age) smart, able to understand and that made it worse. She had crept into the hokage's (because when he was wearing the robes he was nothing but hokage) a small timid smile upon her face and asked (in her quiet and melodious voice( a demons facade he told himself)) why he had sent the ANBU to fetch her. And so he had spoken, loomed above her and snapped.
He had roared and bellowed and shouted himself raw (all behind silencing seals of course) telling her just what he thought of her and her existence.
That she was worthless.
A monster
A demon
A body stealer
A stranger
A weapon
A demon
The list went on. Her face became a mirror gradually shattering and breaking to pieces with every word shards falling and reflecting and cutting and hurting. And finally he came to a finish (telling her that his child was dead, she was merely the Kitsune, tricking and luring into her web) the last piece of Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze fell to the floor, and with it so did any hope of reconciliation between the two. They were both too far gone.
For a fleeting minute she had stood still and rigid, head bowed and bangs hanging forward to shadow her eyes. The silence was deafening. Then Naruto had simply turned and clasped hold of the door knob her eyes still hidden and her mouth a straight line.
"Hai Hokage-sama."
Then she had left, saying and doing nothing more, leaving him standing and panting slightly (it was one hell of a tirade) after that Minato had begun to spoil the twins (once triplets) even more, because the were his children and he LOVED them.
Sighing the Hokage of konohagakure began to sort the genin into teams, gods he hated paperwork.
And so the wheels and cogs turned with a creak as hatred was born and the cycle began once again.
Alright so, explanations.
To start with,
Rookies except team 9 ~ 14
Team 9 ~ 15
Itachi, Gaara, Naruto ~ 14
And yes I have made Itachi Sasuke's brother and there is no coup planned by the Uchiha, Minato was able to stop that before it started, Sasuke is just a naturally broody bastard.
Minato's view on Naruto ~ to minato naruto died on the day of the kyuubi attack when the fox was sealed within her. The kyuubi itself is in his eyes a great hulking monster and much like a trauma victim his view on the fox extends to Naruto as he can't look at her without getting flashbacks this leads to him gradually pushing her away before one day he just snaps as you have seen here. After this there is no way ffor him to reconcile with her and so he simply forces himself into the thought that she is the Kyuubi and that he should just give up on her. This leads to him spoiling Nawaki and Mito. This view extends to all jinchuuriki, although he is most affected by Naruto.
I have other plans for kushina though so don't expect her to be meek and mild.
Also, just to say I am NOT a Minato basher. I actually like his character but this is the only way for me to truly set my fic out. The only people I bash within Naruto would have to be Sakura, Sasuke and Danzo, just because I don't like their characters, sakura is a fangirl with a little strangh and a thorough one trick pony, whilst although Sasuke is justified he just takes his revenge too far, adding to the fact that Kishimoto seems to be obsessed with telling an anime about Sasuke instead of Naruto? Yeah I'm kinda disillusioned about Sasuke on a whole. Danzo? Well he's just a dick, no question:
1) trains mindless drones for the 'good' of the village
2) is obsessed with power
3) forces Itachi to kill his entire clan save Sasuke
4) makes multiple attempts for the hokage position while current hokages are still alive
5) do I really need to go on?
So yeah, thanks for everyone reading
Ja ne
