Hey there peps? I just like to say I'm sorry for my past chaps they were written extremely bad spelling mistakes grammer the whole 9 yards. But I am going to try a little hard instead of just making shit up and typing (which is what I've been doing up till now… just pulling things out of my ass and typing them lol). So this fanfic is now a naruhina by overall vote… all 3 people that voted asked for naruhina… how unoriginal… but oh well, I've read enough naruhina fics that I think I can do pretty well. And still no one has given me any ideas about what his sword will look like or its powers… well one guy did but he wasn't very specific. But anyway id like to that the following people for giving me some ideas: writer of Yuri, hannibal221, dragon-cloud16, Kami's Servant, and some other people I have forgotten or deleted the email and cant find your name... really sorry bout that. So here goes probly the most interesting chap so far. Oh and I need a beta reader to correct my mistakes and stuff that I forget to change so if your interested please pm me or email me.
The kyuubi Swordsman
Chapter 4: training and…
"Dam the stupid fox… he said he was going to train me not torture me!!!" naruto complained to himself.
Flashback:
"Ok boya time for your training first let me do something…" kyu said as she made 2 hand seals. Suddenly naruto flew to the ground with a SMACK!
"What the hell?!? My body feels like it weighs a ton!" naruto complained as he tried to get up.
"Well not quite that much… there's about 50 pounds on each of your legs and arms… and about 75 on your chest… oh and there about 3.5 pounds on each of your gloves to make your grip stronger among other things…" said kyu and she smiled.
"Now one more thing before we start training…" kyu started doing hand seals so fast all naruto saw was a blur. Then the area around them turned black then a bright flash of light and they were in a stadium.
Now this stadium was a bit like a football field at both ends were goal posts and every 5 yards was a line. But along the field were multiple weight machines, the kind you see at gyms, and obstacle courses. And on the outside was a track.
"Where are we…" naruto aid as he looked at the field.
"Well we are in my new training dimension that I created. Every 5 days you stay in here is 1 day out there." Said kyu as she started showing him all the equipment and obstacle courses. When there were done they were done kyu told naruto to do 25 laps around the track with his chakra weights on then go to each machine and do 3 sets of 5…(a/n) I'm going to skip the rest because I cant think of anything else to say)
END flashback
"Man… that training was hell… and she wont let me take off the weights even when I'm sleeping!" naruto groaned as he got into his new bed.
"Hey, hey, hey!! Come on you don't want to spend your day off sleeping do you? Why don't you go look around town, pick up some chicks" kyu started laughing when naruto blushed and got out of bed and put on some cloths.
"Well I guess I should go out…man I'm DIEING for some ramen!!!" said naruto as he raced out the door.
When naruto left his building he put a genjutsu on himself so that people wouldn't recognize him. As he walked past a cloths store he stopped and looked at the outfit in the window it had a white trench coat with flames at the bottom with a kanji for fox on it, black baggy ninja style pants and a black muscle shirt with a mask (think kakashis). Naruto was staring at it with stars in his eyes.
"I HAVE GOT TO HAVE THAT!"naruto yelled as he rushed in the store and bought the set of cloths and put them on. He also spotted some sunglasses (not: these sunglasses look like Oakley's) and he put them on and he looked like a badass. So he bought them too.
Then he headed for his favorite ramen stand (we all know what that is). He stepped inside and took a seat in a chair in the middle and dispelled his genjutsu.
"Ill have 3 miso ramen and 3 chicken ramen please Ayame-chan!!" said naruto with his famous foxy grin, though you couldn't really see it with his mask on.
"is that you naruto?!'wow he looks hot' you've changed so much I barley recognize you!" Ayame said to naruto.
"Yea I've been training a lot and I thought I'd change my look a bit." Naruto eye smiled at her.
"Well you look great! Wait a sec lemme go tell dad your order." Ayame said as she headed to the back to help her father prepare narutos ramen. Just then naruto heard a scream from outside then a muffled one right after that. So he got up quickly and went outside to see 2 big guys dragging a little girl with pale eyes into an ally.
"Oh my what a cute whittle girl heheheheh don't worry this wont hurt…much." Said big man 1 as he started to undo his belt. (A/n the pale eyed girl is tied up and her cloths ripped right now). Just then naruto jumped down from the building and axe kicked big guy one on the top of his head and he flew to the ground unconscious.
"W-w-w-what the hell?! Who are you?!" said big guy 2 frightened by what this mysterious guy looked like.
"Your worst nightmare" said naruto in the scariest voice he could as he activated his shinigan (which now has 3 streaks instead of 2) and looked at the man, which froze at the sight of looking at his eyes. Naruto cracked his knuckles and started walking toward the man and he ran away as fast as he could, but naruto wouldn't let him escape that easily. Then naruto appeared in front of the man and roundhouse kicked him through the wall (the wall wasn't brick it was cheap withered wood) headfirst which threw him into unconsciousness.
"Humph… weaklings…" naruto scowled at the men and he jogged back to the pale eyed girl and untied and ungaged her.
"Hey are you alright?" asked naruto to the girl, she looked about his age. He then noticed that she had some of the most beautiful eyes he had ever seen.
"T-t-thanks for s-s-saving me…" the pale eyed girl stuttered.
"Hey no problem I couldn't just let those guys get away with that! Well by the way I'm naruto uzumaki! What's your name?" asked naruto eye smiling at her.
"H-h-hinata hyuga 'oh my gosh… he has the most beautiful blue eyes…'" hinata thought.
"Nice to meet you hinata-chan! Would you like me to take you home? I don't think you would want to be seen with your cloths like that." naruto stated as he looked at her body'hmmm she's got nice curves…No bad thoughts! Dam you kyu… making me read about human anatomy…' thought naruto. "Hehehehehe your welcome boya! I love you too." kyu giggled and retreated back into his mind.
"t-thanks naruto-kun…." Said hinata in a small voice.
So naruto takes her home and she goes inside and when her dad came out to see who had rescued, then he scowled and yelled "get out here demon!!! And never come near this place or my daughter again!!!" hiashi screamed as he threw kunai at naruto. 'Why me!? Why does everyone hate me?!'
"I'm so sorry naruto-kun!!!" hinata screamed at naruto as she started to cry.
TIME SKIP 1 WEEK:
Naruto was back to training in the alternate dimension with kyu.
"So kyu-chan you said today would be special? What you mean?" naruto asked.
"Well today you are going to get your sword and before that I'm going to find out your affinities." Said kyu as she withdrew a piece of paper.
"Just put some chakra into it and ill tell you your affinities." Said kyu as she handed naruto the paper. Naruto channeled some chakra into and first it sliced in half then the right side started to burn and the left side crumpled up.
"wow…you have 3 affinities… will your primary is wind your second is lighting and your 3rd is fire…wow… well you have the perfect affinities for the blade I'm going to give you."
"Really?! Where is it?! I wanna see!" naruto said jumping up and down like a little kid (no matter how much he matured he still acks like this every once in awhile.
"The blade I'm going to give you is called tetsaiga. It is a demon blade that only half demons/full demons can unlock its full power." Said kyu as she brought out a sword with a plain black sheath and had rags on the handle. Kyu hands the blade to naruto.
"I made a few adjustments to the blade so that it looks nicer when its not unleashed." Kyu said
naruto had the blade in his hands and it was a little heavy but he could still swing it around freely. He unsheathed the sword and it looked really shiny and sharp.
"Wow! Thanks a lot kyu-chan!!!" naruto said as he started swinging the blade around.
"Whoa there! That's not a toy and it's not even unleashed yet. But to unleash it I have to teach you a very powerful jutsu." Said kyu as she walked up to him.
"Wow I get a sword and a new jutsu this is one of the best days of my life!!!!!" naruto shouted.
"Ok then the jutsu is called Demonic transformation. Only jinchuuriki (I know I spelled it wrong) can use it and not all of them can especially this one." Said kyu as she began to describe how to do it. (Now I'm going to skip a bit and go to the last day of training. Ok naruto learned how to use his sword and learned the yondaimes sword style although naruto doesn't know it was his style. He also learned how to do rasengan and he created the rasengan shurikan(again I know I spelled it wrong) also he learned how to do the wind scar, anyone who has read inuyasha will know what this is but those of you who haven't later on I will describe what the technique looks like.)
Naruto is now 12 years old. During all his time training and such he and hinata became good friends in secret and he attended history classes with iruka once a week so he would learn history and such. He and iruka became close friends. Now today is the day for the academy final exams. Now naruto's appearance was a lot different from when he started training (duh!) he now had an 8 pack maybe even a 10 pack he was 5ft 6 in. really tall for his age and he his hair was the golden blond it has always been but it looks more like gokus hair when he's super saiyan 3, with red streaks, just about 2 feet shorter. He still had on the trench coat and baggy ninja pants. He had to get a bigger size since he grew A LOT. And he still wore his mask (the same mask as kakashi.) and had on a black and red sash that has a wire like thing on it with tetsaiga on his side, showing through his coat. And he had black ninja style sandals on. When he walked into the room everyone stared at him.
"Am I late?" naruto asked as he rubbed the back of his head.
Hahahahah cliffhanger! Hahahaha all writers do this so I will to! Ha ha ha! Ok so vote for if haku dies or stays alive and vote for zabuza too. And when should arashi show up? Ok next chap. should take about a day or 2
