AN- I'm not sure if you guys are able to tell the distinction between sounds, and the dialogue. As those are all italicized. So, let me know if I need to make some kind of differentiation with that.
Chapter 5: Through and Through
EPoV
Miss...
How
unladylike.
Vulgar.
An unmarried
woman...
asking to move
where we were
unseen
by passersby?
That was...
Follow me.
Taut,
constrained,
querulous,
was how she walked behind me,
holding my hand
firmly.
The hum...
was still there.
I smile.
It feels
nice.
Through a few people with wandering eyes.
Through a set of doors.
Down a hallway.
(Her breathing was becoming more relaxed.)
Down another hallway.
(Turn right.)
Through two more hallways.
Through smaller double doors.
There's one more thing behind it.
I step out.
Here we are.
I rather like this
place.
-Lauren
AN- So, I changed my username, baha. Okay, I know this poem was kind of crappy. It wasn't my favorite. And sorry it took so long, I seriously couldn't get to a computer, but I know I don't care about excuses for updating problems, so I know you won't. Please review. Thank you.
