I'm surprised to find out how much I like this story despite how different it is from my original plotline. All my plots have to change a great deal to better adapt to the readers (my mind is random), but this one kept pretty well on course. Here are a few things I added/left out to make the story better.

1. Anakin had two siblings. (Obviously not going to work)

2. Darra and Ferus both were going to help guard Padme (Too many Jedi make a complicated plotline)

3. Anakin had multi-oc powers. (Definately not like the real Star Wars films)

4. Teff was actually one of Anakin's "code" names. (That was a different plotline altogether)

5. The real Teff and other clones of Anakin never existed. He had 1 clone only.

6. Padme and the Jedi never realize that Laurence can speak until after ROTS. (That gets a little complicated.)

7. I was originally going to use a Tukata for the fourth arena beast, but switched to mastif because it was native to Geonosis.

8. Jilzan was nonexistant. (Do I hear sobs or cheers that he's gone?)

9. Siri was not Darra's master. Somehow I kept picturing Siri as Darra's master as I wrote, and I finally just added it into the story.

10. Obi-wan and the Jedi never suspected about Anakin's clone. (Of course, that would never make sense.)

11. Laurence and Padme were never in love. He always loved Darra. (Dramatic plotline? Hardly.)

12. Ferus Skywalker (from Phoenix Reborn) was supposed to resemble Laurence's older brother. (Once again that part of the plotline that would never work in this story)

As it was, I had only the basic skeleton of this plotline when I started writing. I had to make up everything inbetween, which wouldn't have worked out nearly as well without a lot of tips from the readers.

Thank you to everyone for your overwhelming support!

Here is the link to Phoenix Reborn if you want to find the next part of the story: .net/s/6800477/1/Phoenix_Reborn