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The Prince and the Baker Girl
"I'm ok" Dawn said waking up from being out cold.
"Good old Dawn" I laughed.
"How long was I out?" Dawn asked.
"About 2 minutes, anyway let's go we're late" I said getting out 4 cake carts.
"Everyone ready?" I asked.
"What are we going with them" Drew asked.
"Racing, what you think?" I said as I hopped on to one and went down the hill.
"HEY MAY, THAT'S SO NOT FAIR!" Dawn shouted at me. " Oh well!"
Paul was 4th Dawn was 3rd Drew was 2nd and I was 1st
"Well…that was good" Drew said as he stopped.
"Yer but now we need to do the cakes we only did that because you needed to know how to use it but after we can" I said.
"Cool… where am I delivering again?" Drew asked.
"Well do you know the town like the back of your hand" I asked.
"Nope"
"Well then you're with me" I sighed.
"What about Dawn and Paul" Drew said.
"Dawn knows the area she and Paul go together" I said "That's simple maths isn't it?"
"Alright so me and Paul are taking this down to and that down to Nare, right?" Dawn asked.
"Yep me and Drew are going down to Sandylands and we all meet here at 6 o'clock, got it?" I said.
"K see you then" Dawn said pushing the cakes down to Nare with Paul.
"You ready to go" I asked Drew.
"Yep and I'll help push unlike Paul" Drew said.
2 hours went by as quick as someone switching on a light switch. Me and Drew where waiting at the place when Dawn and Paul came up.
"Hey guys, ready to go?" Dawn asked.
"Yep full length or half?" I asked Dawn.
"What?" Paul and Drew asked.
"The length we did at the begging is not the whole thing, look down there" I said as we all looked down at what seemed to go on forever.
"Oh! We're doing the whole thing!" Drew said.
"Sweet" Paul exclaimed.
"To the top of the hill" I said and everyone charged up there. We all got on the cake carts and said together:
"1"
"2"
"3"
"GO!"
Me and Drew were tying but not for long Drew pulled ahead "DAM- ewwww a bug just went in my mouth" Drew laughed at hearing me say that.
But then as his mouth was open one went in his mouth
"HA" I said quickly so I didn't get another one.
Then something we didn't see before, a fountain, in the middle of the track. It was really meant for pedestrians (people walking) not cars so that was like a clearing and now there's a fountain there.
"FOLLOW ME" I shouted to everyone they nodded I went down an alleyway full of kids, and then we turn left down another ally that looked the same.
We kept that up until we came to the end of the hill.
"Oh god that was hard" I said panting whilst sitting down on the floor.
"When did that fountain get put there?" Dawn asked.
"Who knows" I said.
"You know that was the best fun we have had in like 5 years" Drew said. But right after we heard lots of screams.
"Dam we have to go before we die, can we take these? Thanks" Drew said quickly and in a flash he and Paul were gone with 2 cake carts.
"YOU BETTER BRING THEM BACK" I shouted.
Me and Dawn went home to be greeted by the owner of the bakery and his young daughter Winter. Winter was 9 had short light purple hair and eyes and was pretty small.
"Oh hi I just finished the home delivers. Aren't you home early?" I said/ asked.
"Hi May. Winter found a dress quicker than expected so were back" He said.
"Hi George" Dawn said popping up from behind me.
"You too Dawn" Gorge said.
"May, Dawn, want to see my dress?" Winter said.
"Why not" Me and Dawn said as we went upstairs.
"Stay here until I'm dressed" winter said.
"Ok"
The door closed.
"Right 5 quid, it's sky blue and over £120.00" I said.
"Baby Pink and over £400.00" Dawn said. We waited for about 2 minutes and then she came out in BABY PINK.
"It was £400 quid" Winter said as I passed Dawn the money without a word.
"Anyway, I have good news! My dad likes you guys so much that he is offering to give you some money to get dresses to, you know, the ball" winter said.
"OMG I forgot about the ball! MAY WE NEED DRESSES, LIKE NOW!" Dawn screamed shaking me to death.
"Ok just don't do that again" I said as I tested my ear to see if I had gone deaf.
"I'm so sorry; I didn't mean to do that!" Dawn said.
"Its fine" I said as I put my arm down.
"So how much money are we talking about" I asked still a little shaky.
"£500 each" Winter said. Me and Dawn fainted.
"Are you guys ok?" Winter asked.
"Just Dandy" We said.
"MAY, DAWN, COME HERE! YOU HAVE SOME PEOPLE AT THE DOOR!" George shouted. Me and Dawn got up and hurried downstairs with Winter.
"Oh, hey guys" I said as I saw Drew and Paul.
"Hey we need the cake" Drew said.
"Oh, and after, Drew we need to get some suits" Paul said to Drew.
"Ok come bac…"I started but Winter stopped me by running up to Drew and hugging him.
"Winter" I sighed.
"OMG! How do you guys know Prince Drew?" She asked.
"He came here this morning to get a cake" I said in a bored tone.
"REALLY?" Winter screamed.
"Yeah" Me and Dawn said.
"COOL" Winter said, still hugging Drew.
"Winter! Get off Drew!" I sighed.
"Fine" Winter said letting go of Drew.
"Anyway, this way for the cake" I said walking into a big room with the cake that had yet to be picked up.
"Thanks" Drew said.
"It's fine, hey Dawn, we need to go now. Half the good dresses are gone by now!" I said.
"You guys going to the mall?" Drew asked.
"Yeah we need a dress for your big ball which DAWN is making me go to" I said.
"Ok, we should go together. Me and Paul need some suits anyway" Drew said.
"I don't see why not, but I don't want to be mobbed, so you and Paul have to wear wigs" I said.
"But we don't have wigs" Drew wined.
"WINTER, BOY WIGS NOW!" I shouted and 2 seconds later Winter came back with two wigs, one ginger and the other black.
"Nice choice winter" I said fitting the ginger wig on Drew "You look amazing" I said trying but failing to hold back the laughter.
"It looks like you got the black one Paul" Dawn said and you could see the relief on Paul's face.
"Right let's go"
Me: I'm ending it here, ok
Lydia: ok not as good as the first one, but who cares?
Me: ME! I care! All you people, was this chapter bad ?
