Thank you for reading this far, if you have.
I unfortunately have some bad news: This story's going to be stuck at eight chapters for at least a few more weeks. It's taken on a life of its own and it not quite where I wanted it to be.
I have had three people IRL read it: One's too busy to actually read it in depth, the second is too absent-minded to tell me she's read it, and the third said it's not only… scattered, but implausible and not anywhere near the spirit of the show.
The outline I made was entirely in my head despite my best efforts otherwise. As such I ended up forcing more and more into each chapter to keep up with what I thought was what I wanted. By the end of April this story will be updated again, from scratch. To Xalmo, I hope the new version is still something you'll be interested in.
In the future I would ask anyone who browses stories that are open and being updated within six months of reading make a quick review. It helps authors like me and the others on FanFiction improve our work and tell our stories to a broader audience.
My next story, Not Another Glee Movie, will hopefully be ready for publishing on Saturday 24 March of this year. If there are any fluent speakers/readers/writers of French interested in being proofers, please PM me (You'll get the few chapters that actually have French dialogue). Google Translate is still mechanical translation (no matter how much you use alternates and shuffling), and my BF is barely conversant in that language.
Thank You,
Josh a.k.a. Frost58
