The Poké Chronicles chapter 6

"You plug it into the power jack on the back of the D.S., then the screen will turn black and the question 'teleport' will pop up, click yes, and you will be instantly transported to the game. It works with all games."

"Uhhh… thanks."

"It's all about the science, Zuthix, so if it means learning something, I will do almost whatever it takes to learn it."

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Zuthix's POV

I lead Dr. Rictoven to the door and say "Goodbye Dr., and thanks again for letting me use your invention."

"No problem, it's in the name of science." He replies with that funny German accent.

After he left in that really creepy van, I ran up to my room, shut the door and locked it. I grab my D.S. and plug in Dr. Rictoven's device that he called "The Key," into it. The screen turned black, and then the question "Teleport?" popped up, and I almost immediately hit "yes." Just like the last two times I teleported, pain shot through my body, but it didn't hurt like last time, it only felt like needles. Then everything faded to black.

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Ruby's POV

I just sat there and cried. Where Zuthix was before he disappeared. We didn't even get to say goodbye. I feel horribly heartbroken. Nothing but Zuthix could fix it. Every time I hear something rustle in the bushes I perk up and hope Zuthix came back to me, but it's always some random Pokémon. Then I hear something that's definitely not a Pokémon. A giant machine that is all purple, has four legs, and looks like it would be from the future comes crashing through the forest right to the clearing I'm in. I just stare at it as it turns around and I see a kind of hanger in the back. The four legs lower the body down to the ground so the hanger touches the ground. A bright blue light comes on and blinds me. I see ten weird looking creatures come out of it. They're very tall, almost eight feet, they have armor on, and they don't have any jaws, just what looks like four mandibles. They line up in a row of five on each side of the hanger making a path from it to me. The ones on the end closest to me held swords of light that were curved and they shimmered with light blues and purples; they looked more like a piece of art than anything else. The light in the hanger dims and I see a normal person walking towards me. The hair is completely spiked back. I see what looks like two slowkings, only they had gray fur, and their face looked more human, walking up right on each side of him. The man snaps his fingers and the two beasts line up next to the other creatures. The guy says "Hello, Ruby." He snaps his fingers again and the light dims down and I can see his face. It's not Zuthix.

He looks old, and has what seems to be a cross between a trench coat, and a lab jacket on. "These…brutes… "He motions towards the gray beasts, "are very fine specimens, are they not? Very intimidating, no?" he gives me a smile that sends a shiver down my spine. "They could rip one of these elites" he motions towards the other creatures "in half if I told them to. I don't believe we've met, I'm Dr. Rictoven."

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Zuthix (god/author form): duh duh duhhhhhh *hits the pause button* Time to make some pop corn…*comes back and hits play*

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Zuthix's POV

I feel the tingling leave and the warmth of the summer sun on my back. I get up and look at my surroundings. I landed right in front of Ruby's cave! I go in it and find nobody home. I run out. "What if she's hurt? What if she hates me for leaving her?" then I hear what sounds like a giant machine crashing through the forest. I fallow the noise.

I come up on a clearing and I see what looks like a purple tower. What worried me though is the fact it looked like something from Halo. I stop dead in my tracks when I come to the edge of the clearing. Down on its "belly" was a Covenant Scarab. There where two lines of five Sangheili (Elites) and at the end of each line there was a Jiralhanae (Brute) "how the hell did these guys get here?" I think. Then something caught me off guard, in the middle of the Covenant forces, looking very smug with his lab jacket on, was Dr. Rictoven. What was even worse is that he is looking down at Ruby with an evil smile.

I start to run, telekinetic energy building around me, and I slam into the nearest Elite. It falls to the ground with a hole the size of my fist in its chest; dead. I turn to look at all the others; Dr. Rictoven is stunned, Ruby has a goofy smile on her face, and the two Brutes and nine Elites turned to face me with their weapons drawn. I look at Ruby, probably for the last time, and start to charge a blast of telekinetic energy to launch at the first Brute. It charges me and I hit it square in the face, but it gets back up.

I feel the same anger that gave me the telekinesis come back, but this time it was more controlled. "Rrraahhhhh!" I felt my hands start to tingle, I look down at them and a blade of pure energy shot out of each of my hands. In my left hand, the blade was white, and in my right hand, the blade was black. The Elites started to shoot their plasma weapons at me, but I was too fast with my blades and blocked every shot. I ran up and sliced the head off of one Elite, then another came up to me and tried to slice me with his Energy Sword, I block with the light blade, then I hit him with the dark blade and he just disintegrates. The Two brutes were next. One charged me from the front, the other from the back. I jump in the air and the two run into each other. I come down on them with my blades going in first. One of them is set on fire by the light blade; the other disintegrates like the Elite did. Then the Elites did the one thing I did not expect them to do; they turned their weapons on Dr. Rictoven. The good doctor then pulls some kind of detonator looking thing out of his jacket. "Well this experiment failed." He said. "Goodbye." He presses a button on it and a flash of light envelopes him and he disappears.

The remaining Elite that held a sword turns to me, holds his fist to his chest, and dips his head down. "I am Thel 'Vadamee, Ship master in the Covenant fleet of Glorious Exultation. You have fought with honor today. And not only that, but you have also taken on, and beaten two Jiralhanae without taking a hit. Something that has never been done before and one thing that is only dreamt about by the strongest of the Sangheili worriers. My Elites and I look to you for orders now." In unison the Elites knelt down with their fists over their chests, and said "On the blood of our fathers; on the blood of our sons; we will fight in your name; the names of the Hierarchs; and the Holy name of The Covenant; even to our dying breaths." Every other line was said by Thel 'Vadamee. "I guess this is the Elites Pledge of Honor."

"Uhh…..good….uhh, get on the Scarab. Get your dead comrades; they fought honorably. Let's get moving."

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All of the Elites got on the Scarab and I went to Ruby and held out my hand to help her up. She grabs it and hugs me so tightly I can hardly breathe. "Come on." I say. "Lets get moving." She holds my hand as we enter the Scarab. Once inside, I yelled out "ATTENTION! Commander on deck." The Elites fall in a straight line with their fists on their chests. "Good, at least you know some human military commands. Fall out to your respective stations, get this thing started up, and move it to the east." As a second thought I added "if there are any buildings in our way-"

"Crush them?" an Elite interrupted me.

"Do not interrupt your superior when he's giving orders, Veer." Thel scolded.

"As I was saying," I say, "If there are any buildings in our way, go around them."

"Yes, Sir." The Elite named Veer bowed and walked off to the bridge. The Scarabs "belly" lifted off the ground on its four legs and started to move. Thel told me that there was a bed in the reactor room, he offered to take me there, but I told him I knew my way around. He looked confused but didn't speak out. I walked to the reactor room with Ruby and there was a bed. ONE bed. "Tonight is going to be interesting…VERY interesting."

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Zuthix (author/god form): hello all, thanks for the reviews…in all honesty, I shouldn't have threatened to delete the story from fan fic. I should have kept writing for the 4-5 people that actually love this story and want to see it grow, instead of the millions that really don't give a damn. The person that taught me this is Zombicidal-Maniac.

Dude, thanks for your help, and, I can't believe I'm going to say this, but I look forward to your reviews, because I'm sure that you'll contribute A LOT to this story. Every one else, at the end of this rant, there is a surprise that I think every one will enjoy. Now this is Zombicidal-Maniac's review that he sent me, I look at it as a great help, though a bit on the asshole-ish side.

Ok, your a good author, this is a good story, and I am interested in it. But I call bullshit on the fact that you write for your fans.

Like me, your relatively new to fanfiction, however, I at least know how it works. You can't write a few chapters and expect everyone to jump on it immediately, if that's how you think all the higher ups did it, than you're an idiot. A fanbase gradually accumulates over time and after a year or two (If your a good author) you'll become a well known "higher up". if you look at their profiles, yamimarik and megadeth425 (two major writers for Pokémon lemon stories) both paid their dues before they hit it big. And you have to as well.

So here's where I become an asshole and bitch about exactly what you said. Basically what you said is "I need you to review so i can write for my fans". BULLSHIT! A real author wouldn't give a damn about reviews and would just keep going with the story. I real author would stick with it to the end even if everyone hated what they were writing. He would write for the one person who reads it and not for the millions of people who don't. You on the other hand are only looking for an ego boost from your reviews, otherwise you wouldn't be threatening to leave the site all together.

You know what? Write, don't write, it's up to you, but don't act like a teenage girl bitching for attention. I'm done here.

-Morris

Zuthix (author/god form): ha, fooled you, there is no surprise. Sorry.