So this is chapter 5, I finally proof read it; I had it finished a while ago but I just couldn't get myself to read it over again. So please read and review and I hope you enjoy.
DISCLAIMER: I do not own Spider riders or anything to do with it but I do own my original characters.
Ch.5- Pay attention when in caves.
Hunter awoke as he saw the sun beginning to rise he watched as the scenery around him went by fast, quite quickly he noticed the somehow Shadow had moved him on to his back well sleeping and continued on their way. Hunter yawned loudly as he sat up and packed his small blanket in to his bag, and then he looked around to try and figure out there location; from what he could tell they were already half way there, "Shadow, when did we start moving?"
Shadow stopped, "A while ago, I could tell that the others were coming about an hour after you fell asleep so I decided to head out."
Hunter jumped down from the spiders back, "So how far behind us are they?"
Shadow looked at him, "Not very far, I've been going as fast as I could with you asleep and they have been catching up to us fast."
Hunter yawned as he looked in front of them in the direction they were heading, "I guess there are 2 problems we have to deal with now."
Shadow looked the same direction as Hunter, "Two?"
Hunter looked behind them, "Yeah two, in front of us is the Human forces since they know where we're headed and have gotten to a small town ahead of us already, and then the riders are catching up to us from behind."
Hunter just stared out in front of them then looked backwards, "So which way do you want to chance partner."
Shadow looked straight ahead, "Well we shouldn't go towards the people that are trying to take control of you so we can't go straight."
Hunter nodded, "Yeah but if we go back will have to fight with the other riders."
Shadow turned to look behind them and then he turned to see a mountain surrounded by forest, "I think we should head over there and then you should find a good place to hide."
Hunter jumped on Shadows back and they head in the suggested direction, when they arrived at the mountain they walked around it until they found a large gorge, Shadow spun some web for Hunter to use to hold himself on while they climbed down. They descended slowly in to the darkness. As they went father down crystals appeared in the walls that produced enough light for Hunter to see enough to tell what was around them. Hunter continued to look around until he noticed an area with small caves, "Shadow over there."
They climbed over to the small caves and Hunter manoeuvred so that he was sitting in them, they were big enough that he was comfee but not big enough for him to be able to stand in. As soon as he was sure he was in he turned his wrist backwards and said, "Shadow, spider in."
He sat for a few minutes as him and Shadow talked, and then he started to crawl father back in to the cave. Suddenly the cave's space began to get wider until he could stand up; he just continued walking farther back, after walking for about an hour he stopped and let shadow out when he was sure the space was big enough. Hunter jumped on the spider's back and sat down Shadow continued to walk forward until they came to a wall where they couldn't see the top of, but they could at least tell it was high. Hunter used Shadows web to hook himself on his partner again and then Shadow began to climb up the wall. After and 20 minutes of climbing Shadow could see a small light at the top, "Hunter were almost at the top."
Hunter was looking down out of curiosity and saw nothing but darkness below, and then when he heard Shadow he quickly looked up, "I hope the exit isn't close to the village the group was at."
Shadow pulled them over the edge as the light became too much for Hunters eyes causing him to have to close them until they were able to re-adjust for a moment and in the instant he opened his eyes his face changed to one of anger and hate as he saw someone he knew walking near the entrance. Hunter whispered "Shadow, Spider in." and then he jumped hiding the best he could behind rocks in the corner of the cave, directly behind him was the ledge so he knew he had to be careful.
He watched as the woman walked around outside and then winced as she slowly walked in to the cave he watched as she walked closer to the ledge and then it hit him that she hadn't noticed it was their and the only thing he had time to think was crap as she slipped over the ledge screaming and he leaped out grabbing her. Hunter felt pain in his arm as it slammed against the rock wall, but he refused to release her arm, he winced in pain as he felt himself sliding over the edge, "Shadow, Spider out."
Hunter felt as strings wrap around him stopping him from going anywhere and then watched as the girl had strings wrapped around her, quickly taking this chance he reached his other arm over the ledge, "Elise climb up already this hurts."
Hunter grabbed her arm pulling her as she climbed up, and when they got up she tripped causing them both to fall backwards, Elise landed on Hunter as they hit the ground, hunter made almost a squeak like notice and then he continued to wince at the pain in his arm. He pushed her off and unravelled Shadows webs from himself and then went out of the cave to where Shadow had gone to wait after getting out of the cave. He went to get on Shadow when he felt the girl hug him from behind, "Hunter... Please don't leave."
He stopped moving "Elise let go of me."
Her grip tightened, "No, I won't let you leave again, I came to get you because after you left life was horrible without you."
Hunter tried to pull away, "Bullshit, None of you ever gave a damn about whether I was there or not, you all just cared about yourselves, so just go back and tell everyone to leave this world because their wreaking the peace we had worked so hard for years ago."
Elise just tried to hold on tighter, "But Hunter we did care about you, you just never noticed."
Hunter turned around to look at her, "That was bullshit none of you ever tried to be anything for me, so just let g...ARAHHHHH"
Hunter's hands flew up to his head and he dropped to his knees writhing in pain, Elise dropped down to her knee's and put her hands on him, "Hunter what's wrong?"
Shadow turned, "Hunter."
Hunter glanced back at Shadow threw the edge of his eye, "I can't stop it this time I'm sorry, Shadow."
Hunter dropped as he passed out; Elise caught him before he hit the ground and rolled him over setting him against the closest tree. Suddenly there was a man's voice from behind Shadow, "Elise good job you found him."
Elise looked up behind Shadow, "General Jake what are you doing here?"
Jake jumped down from the ledge he was on and walked over to where Elise was, Shadow stepped in front of Hunter and Elise, "Don't get any closer to him."
Jake just looked at him, "Move Spider, he is under my control and I could kill him in a matter of seconds; so move."
Shadow reluctantly moved out of the way as Jake walked over and picked Hunter up in his arms, he turned to the spider and motioned with his finger for it to come, he then turned to Elise signalling for her to get up, which she did and then he passed Hunter up and pulled himself up soon after, "You know where to go spider."
Shadow started walking Jake looked at Elise, "I'm here to pick your elder brother up since he will be becoming my personal soldier."
Elise looked down, "He won't agree to it, from the way he acted earlier that's pretty clear."
Jake smirked wickedly, "He will fight for me willingly if he wants to be in control of his own body, and if not he'll just be a mindless soldier that does exactly what I say, and if he doesn't listen the first person I'll have him kill is the purple haired girl that came with him and then after that all of the other ones that ride spiders will be dealt with by him soon after wards."
Elise felt horrible knowing that Jake was going to treat Hunter like a prisoner, and that Jake would do anything to keep someone as strong as Hunter was.
Hunter awoke with a crazy headache; he sat up to find himself now located in a bed in what looks like a large tent. He saw Jake sitting in a chair reading near his bed, and then knew instantly that the worst thing possible had happened. He looked down at his hands wondering why he still had control over his body; he thought that Jake would have already used the bracelet to control him. Suddenly Jake glanced over at the bed to notice that Hunter was awake, "Your final awake kid."
Hunter glared at him, "Why am I still in control of my own body."
Jake stood up closing his book, "You're of more use to me if you're conscious, just because I can control you doesn't mean you'll be usable so I want to strike a deal."
Hunter stared in disbelief, "NO."
Jake just laughed, "I think you'll change your mind when you find out how convincing I am, For instance If you don't work with me willingly maybe I'll use you to kill all of your little friends, sounds like a great idea right."
Hunter was stunned but collected himself and asked his question, "What do you plan on having me do?"
Jake smiled, "You'll be my personal soldier, kind of like my right hand man, you'll always be with me where I fight unless I say otherwise and you will do exactly what I say when I say it. Not too hard to understand right?"
Hunter nodded, "I get it, so you want me to stay with you."
Jake nodded, "Oh, and can you put the spider that's outside away he's scaring everyone, I tried to get him to go hide in the main tent, but he won't leave your side so he's staying as close as he can get to you."
Hunter went to get out of bed and got dizzy as he stood up almost falling but Jake noticed fast enough to catch him. Hunter looked up at Jake and mumbled a nasty, "Thanks."
Jake just smiled and then helped the pink haired boy out of the room to where the spider was located. When he was close enough Hunter wiggled his arm free from between him and Jake he put his arm out, "Shadow, Spider In."
Shadow protested, "Why did you put me away?"
Hunter held the manacle near his face, "It's easier this way, and if I need you I'll let you right out...OK, Partner."
Shadow mumbled an Ok, and Jake just looked at them totally freaked out by what he just did, "How the hell..."
Hunter smiled, "It's confusing you won't understand so don't ask."
Hunter put his arm back down and with Jakes help he got back to the bed; almost as immediately as he lied down he was out. Jake smiled and then pulled something out of his pocket walking closer to Hunter when he was sure he was asleep. Hunter woke up a few hours later everything was okay until he noticed something small hanging from his ear, "What the hell?"
He grabbed it and heard a click when he hit a button, and then he heard Jake talking on the other side; he suddenly said, "Hello."
"Hello Hunter Steele I see you are awake again."
Hunter sighed, "What's with the earring?"
"It a communication device and tracker, It's not connected to your brain waves so it's not as destructive on your body. So when we do anything we will use these to converse."
Hunter just said, "Yes." And then he clicked the bottom again turning the Microphone off.
He sighed as the only though going threw his mind was; I guess this isn't so bad he's not horrible and as long as the others are okay it won't hurt me to be with my own people; he stopped his thoughts right there, he couldn't believe he was thinking that Jake was not that bad of a guy.
So I'm going to end this chapter there, I think this chapter completed what it need to already and if I go any farther it will have to be the length of two chapters and I don't want it to be that long so I hope you enjoy this one.
