Hello this is the intro for "Goldstar the chosen" now I have realized that my story is kind of sucking right now but I really hope people start to like mine a lot more then my brothers, swordknight, his is much better than mine so I'm going to try to blow him out of the water with this story. Alright, so this chapter is about Goldstar finally gaining a few years and is going to do something I thought was a good idea: he takes on the identity of mare-do-well as the courageous colt-do-well…yea that's not really creative but if someone could make that name better, I wouldn't mind hearing it. So let's get on to what you came here for shall we. Oh yea and I messed up in the first 2 chapters, I made the mane six join together even though that was years before, so just imagine they weren't a team, just there.
Chapter 3: The courageous colt-do-well
As the princesses left, as well as most of the ponies, three ponies were still there. The doctor, Diamond wise, and pinkie.
"What am I going to do if no pony even thought of adopting this colt till further notice?" The he saw the two walking toward him.
"I believe you have a problem that no one will adopt the little colt is that correct?" Diamond wise predicted.
"Hu-how-wha-?"
"I am Canterlot's oracle remember?"
"Well do you want to adopt him?"
"Why else would I come here?" When pinkie heard that, her hair flattened in sadness.
"Oh so you're taking him?" pinkie sniffed.
"Yes you are too young to take care of a baby pinkie." She turned around saddened by the idea that she's only 8.
"But you can visit. If I recall he did save your life." She jumped around in joy.
"So what's his name?" pinkie wondered.
"Well I was thinking since he's more of a gold color, and fell from the sky like a shooting star, I was thinking Goldstar."
"Oooooooooh that's such a shiny name! So it's official, I'll be his big sister! Yay!" So it was settled, as many years past, and extremely huge parties later, Goldstar had grown to be 8 years old, and was about to be accepted too the cutie mark crusaders.
Goldstar's POV
As Scootaloo started to play the bongos, or rock out on them, everyone buried there hooves in their ears. Finally Scootaloo stopped.
"We, the Cutie Mark Crusaders, elect Goldstar to join us as a brother, Friend, ally, gossip buddy, Gal pal,"
"I'm a colt." I said with an offended face at their mistake.
"Whatever, as a chumuchums," Scootaloo cleared her throat loudly so sweetie belle would get the memo.
"It wasn't my fault you wrote this last night." sweetie belle explained.
"I was excited and tired alright!" Scootaloo groaned.
"Home boy, amigo, blah blah blah blah blah, oh here it is, and fellow Cutie Mark Crusader. You are solemnly sworn in, here this day, in witness in your fellow sisters, friends, gossip buddies, compadres," Scootaloo interrupted. "Congratulations, man I need to revise that." They all giggled as they gave me a necklace with a charm that has there logo on it, a pony standing on their hind hooves, circling their front hooves like in those old Texas movies.
"Wow thanks guys it's awesome!" I said excitedly.
"Hey Goldstar, yah never explained wah you wanted too joined CMC even though yawl already got yours." Apple bloom said with a face that wanted an explanation but not threatening.
"Because I want to see what my cutie mark means. I was born with this I never got to enjoy the discovery. So I thought if I joined I could get a guess on what aligned stars means, plus you guys are my best friends in school so now we can hangout more."
"Oh yea…about that…" Sweetie Belle said with a guilty smile.
"What is it?" I said brow scrunched down.
"Rarity said if we're gonna have a sleep over, your either gonna have to be sleeping on the other side of the boutique, or not come at all."
"What?! Why I'm a good colt."
"She thinks you're shady." Sweetie belle let out.
"Wwwooooowwww I'm not even, like what never mind" I face hoofed. "Fine I'll sleep away from you guys, speaking of sleepovers, isn't the sun setting?" I asked.
"OH CRAP WE GOTTA GO!" As we all darted to Rarity's boutique, we saw Rarity Darting out herself, with fiery pupils, looking more demonic than usual. She then tackled me to the ground with no remorse that she tumbled and got muddy while doing it.
"DID YOU TOUCH SWEETIE BELLE AT ALL YOU LITTLE PERV!" She said kind of looking like the flaming horse.
"Rarity stop being so protective of me!" Sweetie belle face hoofed.
"SO YOU DID TOUCH HER!? YOU MUST DIE!" She was about to stomp on my mussel, then I screamed.
"NO I SWEAR ON MY LIFE IM NOT LYING PLEASE BELIEVE ME." Rarity let out an angered sigh then released me, the hostage.
"Fine, but if I find out you have those intentions, I will hunt you down and feed you too the timber wolves got it?"
"Okay" I said scrunched up a tree. We all entered the boutique, and started getting to work on finding out that we are. Rarity had fallen asleep, she has been working on orders nonstop this week and today was her break cause luckily, no one ordered anything today.
"You ready Scootaloo?" Apple bloom said with a concerned tone in her voice.
"Ready!" Scootaloo replied.
"I don't think this is a good id-" I was interrupted by sweetie belle's voice saying go really loud but when I looked at the target ahead, it was too late as I fell down into the basement. This taught me not to joust in the kitchen. They rushed down to see if I had a concussion, surprisingly Rarity was still asleep.
"Oh dear Celestia! Are you alright?" Sweetie belle worried.
"I'm fine just have a bump that's all." I replied then stared at a costume that was navy blue and had a purple hat and a little pearl that had an "m" on it.
"Whose is that?" I asked.
"Geez Star where were you when the town hero "Mare-Do-Well" was announced?" Scootaloo said.
"Remember my dad lives in canterlot I'm not here all the time" I replied.
"Oh yea," I then interrupted.
"What if being a hero is our special talent?" I had said excitedly
"That would be cool…if we had super powers" apple bloom's face saddened.
"You guys look for radioactive things and something I'll work on our costumes." I brightened. They all nodded and left. I then looked at my hoof.
"Stupid father turning me into a demon…" I said as my hoof was now emanating black magic.
Scootaloo POV
As I ran around looking for something I can use as a superpower, I guess I got a little thirsty, so I went to the nearest place I'm allowed to go to at any time. Twilight's house. I swooped in through the window, and saw some weird bottle so I took a sip from it because now I was dehydrated, when suddenly I feel a little change in my throat then it coursed through my veins, I wasn't myself…literally! I guess I had shape shifted into twilight so I went back to tell star.
Apple bloom POV
I stopped lookin' fur awhile because now I was gettin' hungry so I went to mah big sis's apple cellar where she keeps one third of the orchard basically, so when I went down there, all I saw were apples! That's why I tripped over some boots, really shiny and beautiful almost if rarity made them but times two! I tried them on and they fit perfectly but they looked so big when i first tried them on, i realized that I felt stronger then when I went to open the door, it few out of my hand! No storm, no monster, no nothing. It was all me. I ran to go tell star.
Sweetie belle POV
I couldn't believe it, Goldstar is a demon!? I couldn't tell anyone what I knew so I hid in the basement to think of something, when I can't think I go to the basement it helps me think but what I never noticed was a cloak that looked like twilights weird old man costume on nightmare night. I put it on and I felt comfortable, warm, and I was missing something. I felt like I lost weight but when I looked at my hoof there was nothing there! I had turned invisible, I had to tell Goldstar, but I still need to think on the demon thing…
Goldstar POV
"So everyone's back?" I was wearing a new and manlier costume that had belonged to MDW (mare-do-well)
"Oh yea and were better than ever!" Apple bloom said. But she was really Scootaloo!
"What powers did ya git star?" apple bloom said, the real one.
"Oh I couldn't find anything so I'll just be like robin horse its fine." I said. Scoot and Abby fell for the lie, but I'm not sure what's going on with belle.
"Wait but what about danger? There is none everyone is asleep!" scoot said rather angered.
"My dad is away on royal business, something urgent, maybe we can check that out." I replied.
"So let's go!" As we ran toward canterlot, we had all sped up because the only one who would have made it was Abby. She threw us up on the roof and we heard something about the daughter of Luna, the most beautiful pony, emerald night.
"Discord tell us were those bits went or well have you returned to your imprisoning!" Luna said fiercely.
"I told you I don't have it alright? I wouldn't steal from a child I'm completely honest I swear on your sister's life." Luna was about to beat him but Celestia motioned for her not to.
"Ok Discord, I'm convinced, but do you have any idea who it might have been?" Celestia said.
"This affects me to you know? I'm not aloud near my best friend, night." He gestures to emerald night, throwing something at the throne I couldn't make out. They only played together because she saw good in him, even though she couldn't see at all…that money was for her to live if the princesses ever went missing or further so..
"I know who did it," diamond wise said flicking his woven hat up.
"Then who is it?! MY DAUGHTERS SURVIVAL DEPENDS ON YOUR ANSWER!" Luna angered.
"The queen of changelings…she's doing this so she can trade weapons with other countries like the demon republic and Magainia. It will be shipped tomorrow." Dad said. What does that which has to do with the daughter?
We tried running back but didn't have the energy so we took the 24 hour train, we snuck on. When we got back apple bloom said "we didn't get our cutie marks yet," I interrupted "that doesn't matter! Chrysalis is stealing from the princesses just for weapons? We need to stop this because important matters are at stake! The shipment is tomorrow so we need to stop it. Who's with me?" there was dead silence so I angered. "Fine ill save everyone my-"
"I'll help." Sweetie belle blurted.
"You got me" apple bloom said.
"Fine but if we die, I'm killing you" Scootaloo said.
"Well need to rest up, let's go back to rarity's place." I said. This was the beginning of a new legend.
