Hello there viewers when I looked at my story, I had made it suck with only 54 views but when I updated it with a longer chapter, I had gotten like 20 more! Thanks it's greatly appreciated that I wanted to add OCs for my story since I'm kind of running out of friends, villains, etc. so I saw someone else do this but I will be making a scenario and in the comments you will make that scenario continue and if you make it the best then you will be featured in the story. So anyway let's get to the story shall we:
Chapter 4: he's still alive…
Goldstar POV
It was tomorrow now. We weren't found by anybody because there was smoke in the air because of a dragon so my sister, pinkie pie and her friends had to stop this dragon. Then we got on the train to the first place that I had heard yesterday, the demon republic…where I was first born…
"Wait a minute, what about our costumes?" Scootaloo said.
"Geez scoots you think I don't think of these things do you." I threw them a briefcase with their costumes, apple blooms was a marine suit with a helmet with an apple on it, Scootaloo's was a white and red changeling-like costume, and sweetie belles was a costume that looked like it belonged to a person my sister always talks about, dead hoof, but it was blue with stars on it to match the cape. Then we made it to the republic. The horrid horrid memory of seeing my real father being turned into a demon…then he didn't care about me anymore…
"Star you ok?" Sweetie belle asked after being silent to me yesterday.
"Ya I'm fine, let's stop the weapons from traveling anywhere." I said. We snuck onto a crate when we saw a whole other species that had horns and bat wings and were black and red with eyes the same color as blood.
"Ambush them," I said pulling the hat over my head. Then we all charged at this weird new species and we didn't kill any of them.
"star find a way to destroy the boats at the dock, we'll keep them busy!" apple bloom yelled, as I nodded and saw the boat was already moving so with none of my friends looking, I blasted the boat and it exploded. As I flew back, I saw a pony or whatever near my hoof.
"y-you're the prince! Son of king Sombra…he is pure evil it makes us demons scared." Wait, that's a demon!? That's what I turn into because of my father!? I didn't mean to, but I killed the demon by stepping on his mussel, I can't believe it. I had no remorse to that. I was going to tell the team it was over, but all I saw were them…they destroyed all those demons!
"I can't believe it…I killed someone…apple jack will never ever love me again." Apple bloom started to cry, as well did the other two.
"That's enough crying, we killed because if they had come to Ponyville, they'd kill us all, this is our responsibility, no one else is gonna do our job, did you see Celestia, any guards, or discord at all? I will train you to have no remorse but only killing the evil not your family."
"Why would we kill our family?" scoot said with a little sniffle.
"Anger," I said. "Let's go to magainia and stop the other shipment." I added.
"I'm not killing again,"
"I'm not either,"
"…I will kill to save Equestria…no other reason," sweetie belle stood beside me, I don't know why but, she's stood beside me like she knew my pain.
"Only for Equestria" apple bloom said standing beside me.
"Fine," Scootaloo agreed and so we ran to the train and snuck on again, now too magainia.
"It will be over soon guys, just have faith… Scootaloo are you eating…wood?" I saw Scootaloo eating one of the legs to a booth.
"Sorry I don't know what got into me I'm just really hungry." Scoot said holding her gut.
"Here an apple." Apple bloom gave scoot the apple bloom.
"That disgusting thing? No thank you." She said slapping the apple out of apple blooms hoof, and we all wondered but we didn't have enough time since we were at magainia already. So when we got off, we saw these unicorns, but they looked like slaves. No pegasi, no earth ponies, no changeling slaves, but there were changelings that were black and purple, not green. We were in the land of the unicorn slaves; I thought that was only a myth.
"Hey are you here to save us?" a little boy had asked us, with tears in his eyes.
"N-…yes, we are salvation that's our team and were here to give you unicorns freedom. What's your name?" the three looked at each other so saddened by this kid's imprisonment
"511: bronze horn" he said.
"Where is the leader of this operation?" I asked. He pointed to this castle that was taller than the canterlot castle.
"And there are these weird creatures brought from another dimension. Don't get killed by them, or you'll become a monster." Bronze horn said.
"What are they called?" apple bloom said.
"There called…the heartless from a dimension where discord gets the source of his power. Good luck." He said getting back to work as a weapon crafter. We ran toward the castle but when we looked inside, there were only steps, and monsters coming out of the ground. Me and the team nodded to each other and darted up, destroying these monsters. Sweetie belle was grabbed by one and almost pulled down till I grab it with my shadow and choked it to death with my shadow magic. And they all saw it.
"We need to finish the mission I'll explain at home." We kept going up and up till we saw a room, and when we open the door to this room, it had a portal, and through that portal was a weird looking species with a small mussel, a brown short mane, blue eyes and a sword that looked like a key fighting a giant white monster with a zipper for a mouth.
"You shouldn't have come here, Goldstar…" an echoing voice had said then my friends were captured by some of the heartless.
"Who are you?! What do you want!?" I screamed.
"Is that any way to talk to your father?" a shadow came out of the wall and looked like my real father…king Sombra, king of shadows, creator of the demon star…me…
"Why are you here!? FINALLY HERE TO KILL ME!?" I angered.
"We both know about your darkness son…if you can cooperate, I'll give you the life of a king with this form."
"ID RATHER DIE IN HELL!"
"Then I make you worse!" Sombra ran toward me and bit my neck, and I felt something course through me, I was becoming…more demonic…my eyes blurred, I was sweating, then I realized, I wasn't in control of my body any more…but I saw what was going on, Sombra said to kill the heartless down those stairs he had no use for those ones, and I killed them all in 20 seconds and came back.
"Good now kill your friends, Star Scythe," I walked toward them with ruby eyes and a coat of black and grey. The demon….
"Goldstar, you know better than this!" apple bloom yelled.
"Were your friends Gold Star! Wake up!" Scootaloo said. Sweetie belle didn't say anything, she was just crying…waiting for it to be done…
"N-no…" I said turning around, facing my father.
"You weak child you want me to kill you?"
"…No…ILL KILL YOU!" I went to bite him with my newfound fangs but he turned into a shadow.
"You can't defeat a shadow by yourself." He said.
"Then I'll become a shadow myself" I dematerialize into a shadow then started to fight my father. Our hoofs were flying, grown claws were slashing, teeth were sinking, and then he scratched my leg so hard I became a pony again. He came out and was stomping on my neck…every time he had stomped, I saw something being lost…the worst thing I saw was missing my loved ones…then I kicked him off of me.
"What!? There's no possible way you still have strength!" Sombra said.
"We get power off of darkness…I AM DARKNESS!" I kicked him through the wall and jump out myself grabbing onto him holding him in place to break his bones from the impact. We landed. He didn't die…then suddenly a white alicorn used her magic to keep him in place.
"I'll send him to the outside of the crystal empire where he'll never gain power." A purple alicorn said flying away. Celestia then looked at me.
"You are very noble, young one. Who are you?" she asked.
"I wish not to tell you," I had said.
"But I wish to reward you for fulfilling your destiny." She said.
"I found out what my cutie mark means…but it's not true…"
"Goldstar, you saved Equestria I think it's true…" magic started circling me then a bright light flashed and I fell.
"Goldstar are you alright!? The other cutie mark crusaders ran down looking like they lost a diamond. I stood up and looked at my sides.
"I'm an alicorn now…" I said.
"I hast returned, star of gold, I saw you on the roof, if I haven't seen you there, Sombra would have been more powerful than ever and destroyed these unicorns." She gestured to the stray unicorns enjoying their lost freedom.
"Hey wait, where is bronze horn?" I wondered.
"Should I tell him father?" a bronze pony said to his father.
"No the truth will destroy his heart on the journey of one thousand souls, we can't tell him" the alicorn said, then they both teleported out of there. Back to us, we all walked on the chariot of Celestia.
"Hey your daughter knows me right?" I asked.
"Yea why?" Luna said.
"I want to do something for her."
Emerald Nights POV
When I woke up, I was in the infirmary, and I looked at my hoofs…I LOOKED AT MY HOOFS!? HOW IS IT POSSIBLE?! IM BLIND THIS THIS IS A MIRICLE! My mother and aunt walked in with one of my friends from school…then I saw one of his eyes was white…he was also really handsome…
"What happened? How can I see?" I asked with joy.
"This young man made your sight possible by giving you his eye…" mom said.
"It's no big deal; I didn't need both my eyes." He said. I was so happy I jumped out and hugged him.
"Thank you…you're my hero…" I said. Then he started to walk forward to the door.
"I am no hero…" then he left. He was wrong. Mommy told me about his heroism today…I always liked him…knowing he's a hero makes me love him…
