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Omg are they freakin done yet? I've been sitting on this freakin stool for 2 hours since Bee and Rach started on this makeover.

"Ehmagawd! This is the perfect outfit!" i heard Karen shriek.

"It better be it took me a half hour for me to pick an outfit that you approve!" shouted gar. wait...GAR?! WTF?!

"WHAT you let gar pick out my outfit?!" i exclaimed.

"Don't worry, He knows what he's doing." said Rach.

"Now get dressed" said gar throwing the pile of clothes at me. Luckily i was fully dressed.

"Ohh don't forget the accessories!" said bee throwing them at my head.

"OWW!" i shouted.

"Ooops sorry, hehe , now hurry up we have to go to the mall after this!"

I slammed the door shut and locked the lock.

I carefully laid the clothes out on the bathroom counter along with the jewelry. Gar picked out a white v-neck, a cropped jean jacket, a high-low purple skirt that was dark on the top and lighter on the bottom, and beaded flats. there was also a pair of feathered earrings and a long owl necklace.

It could've been worse i thought changing into the outfit.

~10 minutes later~

"Kori, HURRY UP!" said Gar pounding on the door.

"HOLD ON!" i shouted back jamming the last earring into my earlobe.

"I NEED TO USE THE BATHROOM!"

I opened the door revealing Gar doing this pee-pee dance.

"MOVE!" he said pushing me out of the way. A few seconds later i heard a relieved sigh. I turned around to Vic, Bee and Rach looking wide eyed as me.

"Well, what do you think?" i said nervously.

"..."

"Is it that bad?" i said running to the full length mirror. It took me a minute to recognize myself in the mirror. I don't know what bee and rach did but my makeup was flawless. My heart shaped face was soft and smooth. The mascara brought out my long thick eyelashes and the eyeliner made my green eyes look dark and mysterious. The baby lips gave a hint of pink to my lips and my hair tumbled out in loose curls framing my face. The clothes brought out the curves from my body i didn't know i ever had.

"DAMN, Kori you look smokin'" said Vic

"Definitely hawt" said bee

"Perfect" said rachel giving me a small smile.

The door opened and Gar came out.

"Holy Sh-, kori you are F-ine!" said Gar

i giggled."Thanks Gar."

"Alright who's ready to go show off our fabulous girl at the mall?"

"WHOO!"

~20 minutes later~

We arrived at the Gotham mall as the sun was setting. The mall was packed with friday night shoppers.

"Where to first?" i asked.

"FOOD COURT!" shouted vic and gar.

On our way there i noticed guys checking me out, some let out some wolf whistles. Girls were shooting me dirty looks as i took a seat at the food court.

"Ok kori," said Vic as he set down his burgers with fries on the table, "Wanna learn how to act cool?"

"I have to, to fit in with the popular group." i replied snatching a fry off his plate.

"haha, DUDE she soo got you" said gar setting down his plate of tofu.

"Whatever, so kori a cute guy walks over and asks you out, what do you say?"

"uhh...Get out of my face i'm not into you!"

"Oh boy this is gonna take a while"

~30 minutes later~

"Ok so you got it?" asked Gar.

"Yeah to flirt i have to flutter my eyelashes, laugh at their lame jokes, and go with the flow"

"Alright then, let's do a practice run" sad Vic. He scanned around the mall and said, "hey cutie 5 o' clock."

I turned to see a tall tan built figure wearing a plain white t and black jeans. I got up and walked over slowly. As i got closer he looked up and i noticed his warm brown eyes and bronze hair.

"Hey there." i said flirtatiously.

"Hey good lookin, are you from Tennessee? Cuz your the only ten i see." he said smiling

God that's the lamest pick up line ever, i bet richard could do better. I giggled. "Kori." i said extending my hand.

"Jason" he said taking my hand and giving it a little peck. i blushed. "Hey you look familiar..."

"Maybe you saw me around school?" i asked.

"I'm pretty sure i would've remember seeing someone as fine as you."

i gave a little smile. "Your so sweet."

"Ehh it's what i do. So listen my friends are having a party tonight, think u can make it?"

"Depends, will i see you there?"

"You bet" he said giving me the address.

i laughed," well see you later"i gave him a seductive smile and strutted back to the table.

"Oooh girl you're a natural!" exclaimed Bee.

"Really? i wasn't that good"

"I saw him give you something, was it his number?" asked Rachel.

"Nah he invited me to a party."

"What?! let me see that" said be grabbing the paper."hey babe isn't this..."

"Yeah it is"

"What is it?" i asked.

"This is Dick's address."

"WHAT?!" i said snatching it back. I looked over the address and recognized the address since i've been there lord knows how many times. "Shit, how does he know him though"

"I have no idea." said Bee

"Never seen him before in my life, what's his name?" said vic.

"Jason"

"Hmm doesn't ring a bell."

"Well i think we should go to that party" stated gar.

"Say what?"

"Well i think that it's a way to show off how hot you are that's all"

We all looked at him mouth opened.

"What?"

"He's not a worthless brat after all." mumbled rach.

"Aww thanks...HEY!"

"Well you know what this means...SHOPPING!" said Bee.

"Let's hit it"i said running into forever 21.

~a while later~

"Now i know why they call it forever 21, cuz it takes Forever 2 buy 1 thing. (haha see what i did there? ;))" grumbled vic as he and gar sat on the couches outside the dressing room.

I was in the dressing room trying on the four dresses Bee and Rach picked out for me. The first was a strapless bright orange thigh length dress. It had a sweetheart neckline and a tan braided belt that clenched the middle. i walked out to the full length mirror outside. The bright orange gave a glow to my skin and made my hair look redder.

"I like it." said rach behind me.

"OOH that's cute!" said bee.

"Guys?" i said turning to the boys.

"Great" they said.

"Humph." i said trotting back in the dressing room. The second was a pastel green. It was also thigh length with slits on the side. It was fitted showing all my curves and had a plunging neck line. and had a white lace band around my stomach.

"So you!" said bee

"Cute" said rach

"great" said the guys.

The third had layers of lavender lace and a black ribbon in the middle.

"Girl you should be a model everything looks good on you"

"Awesome"

"Great"

The fourth had a strapless black sequined top and silk white bottom. Simple but elegant.

"HAwt"

"Breathtaking"

"Great"

"if you guys don't have anything else to say besides 'great' then i'll go find other dresses"

"NOOOO!"

"iii-mean you look gr- i mean awesome kori" said vic.

"Yeah smokin'"

"Kay" i went back in and changed into my regular clothes.

"Which one are you getting?" asked Rachel.

"All of them, you never know, i might be going to other parties"

ok my lil duckies! Makeover: completed

so now vote for the dress kori should wear. you have till march 5th. :)

xoxo -a