Secrets

by divergentmeric

Melody Eaton was 14 when her brother Tobias left. Now it's her turn and she chooses to join her brother. But what happens when a certain Dauntless leader falls for her? Will she feel the same way or will that Dauntless leader get his heart broken? ***This is my first story. PLZ give this story a chance. You won't regret it!***

1. Chapter 1

Hello! This is my first fanfiction story so I hope you like it! Plz comment and plz give constructive criticism. Again, this is my first story. I'm new to all of this. I don't know what my updating schedule will be like but I will try and update on Fridays and Saturdays. I still have school and homework but I will try and update as much as I can. Enjoy, this is the first chapter.

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Chapter 1

" Dad, the Choosing Ceremony!", Tobias screamed. "Fine, wait here.", Dad said. I knew what was coming and I was scared, but not for me. For my brother. Ever since my mother passed away, Tobias has watched out for me. But still, I couldn't help feeling like I should stop my father from hurting Tobias. I told my brother this and he warned me not to. I knew very well why he told me this. It was because of what happened last time. I defended Tobias and guarded him from my father. He tried to tell me to leave while I still could, but it was too late. My father had grabbed me and punched me hard in the face. Then he started to hurt me as well.

***Flashback***

"See what you do? You poison your sister's mind with such selfishness and this is what happens to her. Because of you, Tobias. I'm only trying to make you two better. This is for your own good."

***End of Flashback***

After he left to do his work, Tobias came up to me and starting whispering things in my ear. Saying he was sorry and that in two years, I would be able to leave as well. The only reason he went to dauntless was because I told him to escape our father. I assured him that in two years, I would go to Dauntless and find him. He agrees and tells me he's sorry. At the Choosing Ceremony, he picks Dauntless and my father looks angry. Good. Tobias finally escaped. Even if I had to suffer for two more years, it would all be worth it. The look on my father's face when I choose Dauntless. Just two more years and it would all be worth the wait.

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I'm sorry if the first chapter was too short. Again, I still have school and homework to do. I will try and update tomorrow. See u soon and have a good day.