Chapter 3

Revan's darkness

With Ahsoka and crew

Ahsoka, Alek, Anakin, Barriss, and Obi-Wan made their way to Qui-gon "Are you alright?" asked Anakin "I'm fine." said Qui-gon "what was it?" asked Obi-wan "I'm not sure but it was well trained in the jedi arts." said Qui-gon "what about the other one, the man in black who arrived to save you?" asked Anakin "I'm not sure of him either but he seemed to be well trained as well." said Qui-gon "his name is Revan Shan he is kind of our leader." said Alek.

"You know him." asked Obi-wan "yeah it was his idea to travel through time to see some things for ourselves and to stop some really weird shit from happening altogether." said Alek.

With Revan

Revan flew to the hyperspace ring and made his way to Kamino after a few hours he arrived, he disconnected from his hyperspace ring and flew onto the rainy planet he landed and snuck into the cloning facility in the facility Revan snuck to the cloning room and he found the clone troopers he was looking for still growing CT-7567 also known as captain Rex, CC-2224 or commander Cody, CC-1004 commander Gree, and CC-3636 Wolffe, Revan removed order 66 from them as well as a few others, like echo, hevy, fives, cut up, all the men in the 501st would join him and the alliance when the time was right.

Revan then snuck out of the facility and back to his fighter and flew off to Coruscant to meet his friends.

Revan attached himself to his hyperspace ring and set course for Korriban to find his younger self to unlock his force power earlier than his own had been unlocked so as to escape his masters faster.

Revan arrived on the sith home world and made his way to the hole that was his home Revan felt the darkness within him rising he found his home and saw his younger self wasn't home so he put the Holocron with a note down and went outside to find his masters a family descended from the sith lord and emperor Vitiate the man who had enslaved his ancestor Darth Revan.

Revan came across his younger self being tortured by the younger member of the family Valkorion named after the man who had enslaved Revan the first over thousands of years ago Valkorion was an older man and he shot force lightning at the younger dark knight.

Revan felt his inner darkness rise he knew that he couldn't kill Vitiate yet he had to wait twenty years but he was going to make Valkorion suffer the way he had suffered so his hands covered in red force lightning, his eyes starting to glow red, red marks crawling across his face, his skin turning chalk white, and his canines elongating Revan had become something else he had become the embodiment of darkness, the son, the fanged god.

You're probably wondering how he became an embodiment of darkness well that's a story for another time, Revan made his way to his old master like a shadow and shot lightning at him "alright who has the balls." asked the emperor and he turned around and saw Revan but older "well, well my old apprentice Revan what brings you to this time?" asked Vitiate "what do you think your highness." said Revan his voice oozing with venom and hate for the man who had enslaved him several times over the millenniums.

Revan shocked the man again and again starting to take pleasure in the sith emperor's pain even if Vitiate didn't show it Revan knew he was in pain after he was done shocking Vitiate Revan picked up his younger self and took him home.

Revan made his way back to his ship and R2 and they made their way to Coruscant.

After they got out of hyperspace they went down to the planet and landed at the jedi temple Revan flared his force energy to alert Alek, Barriss and Ahsoka.

With Alek, Ahsoka, and Barriss

Alek, Ahsoka, and Barriss stood before the jedi council with Qui-gon and Obi-Wan when all the jedi felt a dark presence enter the temple "oh crap he's angry." said Alek "why's he so angry he just had to go to Kamino?" asked Barriss, "I think he went to Korriban you know what he's been through." said Ahsoka "who are you talking about what is this dark presence we feel?" asked Mace Windu "our leader Revan Shan." said Alek "Ahsoka go see calm him before he someone makes him even more angry we don't need him causing a lightning storm again." said Alek Ahsoka was already on her way out of the jedi council room and she found Revan but he was covered in a red flaming aura his power and rage beyond even what Anakin in his prime could produce.

All jedi seem to come out some getting their lightsabers out but Revan approached the dark knight and others tried to stop her but she just moved foreward "Hey Rev calm down Vitiate isn't here put Erebus back in his cage I'm here." Ahsoka whispered in Revan's ear Revan calmed with Ahsoka's presence he then fell to his knees Ahsoka holding him "It still hurts Ahsoka" said Revan "I know Revan" said Ahsoka and the dark knight passed out his force energy now calming down.

A.N. New chapter this chapter is meant to show that Revan is still a little dark even if he isn't a sith he still isn't a jedi and next chapter will see how the jedi react to the ex sith lord in their temple Revan won't show respect to any of the masters except for Qui-gon and maybe some respect to Obi-wan for the past he shared with the man, this also shows the relationship between Ahsoka and Revan and how deep it goes and how much he relies on her for emotional support.