Alright, due to some major procrastination, I am finally starting this fic again. Thanks for your patience. I would like to thank razzkat for being an awesome reader. Enjoy!!!
Chapter 3
The Mansion
Darkness all around. It was clearly nighttime, but there weren't any stars, and the moon was hidden by cloud cover. The plumber was lying on what seemed like grass, but softer. He muttered "Where am I?" but he suddenly remembered….
"You shall leave these beings alone!"
Blank. The rest was history. "Am I dead?" Mario thought. He got to his feet, but quickly fell back to the ground. His whole body hurt. Whatever happened was tragic, and now, he was mentally paralyzed. He was afraid that he was dead. Even worse, what became of his friends? A few minutes went by, and he reached down by his side. He felt something wet. Urine? No, this was too thick. He tasted the liquid and to his horror it was blood.
The moon finally revealed it's face. Mario took a closer inspection of the blood. It wasn't his. It was orange in color, but what had actually happened after he blanked out.
Now, he found the energy to get up. He had walked a few feet, and came across a façade of a figure. The shadowy figure came closer. Not knowing who or what it was, Mario took a defensive stance. He summoned most of the energy that he had and ran spontaneously at the figure. He punched the figure and it let out an "ouch!" Mario recognized that voice. It was Yoshi! Yoshi signaled Mario to come with him. Mario followed and they came across a person. This person was much taller than Mario, at least three feet. He was skinny, but built. His ragged, sleeveless shirt and jeans had cloaked him well. Mario looked up at the figure and asked "who are you?" The figure said "My name is Blaze. Come with me"
Mario had remembered this silhouette right before he blacked out. The three wondered in the darkness for what seemed like hours. Mario broke the silence and asked a question. "What happened?"
Blaze was not quick to respond. He pondered a bit and said "I saved you. Two menacing villains have started the apocalypse. I am an elemental; I am the Zion of the hero Blazadoric. You Mario, and you too Yoshi are Heroes. Bowser and Gannondorf are trying to summon powers so great that the possibility of defeating them is unimaginable. I as well as 7 other Zions, and Heroes such as yourself are supposed to defeat these villains." Blaze said.
They had finally come to a giant mansion.
"Your world is now in great despair. Princess Peach is one of the reincarnates of the princesses of power, I have no idea what happened to her. I am very sorry. Our mission is to recruit heroes from all the worlds, and combat evil. But as we recruit these heroes, there world will be conquered by evil. Now, in almost all worlds, there are charms. These charms are needed to summon the greater evil. Take for example, in your land, there were the power stars right?"
Mario nodded. Blaze led them into the mansion. The sight was grand! There was a staircase that led up to a floor of the mansion which then divided into wings.
"Well when charms such as these become corrupt, they can be used for evil. The Ztar is the result of the pure essence of evil coming into contact with it. I'll discuss it more in the morning. Pick any room you want."
Mario wondered a hall and found the perfect room. This room had a small metal pedestal in the middle of the room. This statue had a button and the words "Room design 6000" Mario pressed the button and the machine said "Thank you for choosing the Room design 6000. What would you like to decorate?"
Mario set up a bed with a TV that was across each other. He crawled into bed and went to sleep…..
End of Chapter
Well, it's a start. Now I will be doing a point system. Just a novelty thing here is the conditions:
10 points per review
30 points per question
100 points for reward
50 points for advice
100 points for honorary reviewer
-10 points for bad review
10 points for constructive criticism
One honorary reviewer reward will be given out each chapter. Here are the standings so far:
1st: razzcat 120 points (Honorary reviewer for chapter 1!)
2nd: ShadowDragon2005 10 points
Reward question!
In Pokemon Red and Blue, is it possible to obtain Mew without a cheating devise? How?
Please R/R! and I need Ideas!!!!!!!
