Okay, I was being nice at first but come on dudes! I had one hundred hits and two reviews!? atleast let me know how i am DOING. Is it bad good? Should i keep going? plz and thanks -
Oh and idk why everyone puts "I don't own maximum ride?"
But I don't own it either so I have no room to talk lol
Some things just have to be said- don't own MR, just what I made:-P…
Max's POV
"Fang no! Fang! Fang!!!! NO FANG!!!!!!!!!!! FFFFAAAANNGGGG!!!!!" I was now screaming bloody murder and pitching the biggest fit any one has ever seen me throw.
My ears, no my whole face felt hot.
I was crying really loud.
More like screaming uncontrollably and letting tears fall like a river down my now pale face.
Nudge's POV
I was shocked and speechless.
For some reason I sat there wide eyes and not crying at all.
I felt bad.
But I couldn't move.
I was watching Max scream in place clenching her head and fall to the floor. She was yelling so loud and ugly and scratchy I couldn't hear it after a while.
My heart began to feel hollow. Black and missing.
Gazzy's POV
O my gosh.
BOOM BOOM BOOOOMMMM!
Please tell me I am dreaming. Let me wake up now please. Please.
How many bombs did Ig have? The building was now collapsed completely and was just burning like a paper. Fast and there was no chance in stopping it.
I closed my eyes harder and harder each blink making them hurt.
I looked over with my mouth open at Nudge who scarred to death starring at the wreck and hopeless self Max was showing us. Put it looked like a tragic play that had gotten carried away. Big time….
Max was balling and scratching her eyes out. She looked like she was going to die.
Then I fell to the floor and curled up.
I cried and slept with my eyes open dreaming about what happened over and over.
"O GOD! FANG!!!" She screamed another time. I can't even describe Max's behavior any more. Just too painful to watch and it hurts.
Iggy's POV
All I herd was the explosion and it sounded awesome but then I realized some thing.
Why wasn't the flock cheering? Then I herd the murderous screams of Max.
"FANG!" She sounded horrible.
I inhaled and herd Max running so I followed the sound of her steps.
Max's POV
Running like there was no tomorrow I pulled a door off the ground and it burned my hands. Crap.
I was burned quite a few times and didn't care because I was looking for Fang.
I was still crying and still partly blind but I could see enough to tell whether or not Fang's body was under some thing. Or even worse, burning.
Shifting through all the mess and moving around the red flames that were inviting me to chill with them I saw a hand.
What a freaking miracle!
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