A/N: Ok, this author's note goes out to my reader…the one who just happened to stumble upon this story. Honestly…this is my first story on fan fiction. So, this may not be my best work. And yet, it just might be my best work. Who knows? So, anyway, time to move on to this great Naruto Fan Fiction story that I like to call: "Young Love." (Yes, you can tell that this is probably going to be a pretty pervy story just from the title….But don't judge a book by its cover!)
Summary: It's been years since Naruto saved Sasuke from being almost killed by Orochimaru. Sasuke is back in the Konoha village, and is living a completely normal life. He's Sakura's boyfriend, his friends have put the past behind them, and nothing could possibly go wrong. Well…
Pairings: Main-SakuXSasu, HinaXNaru Other-TemaXShika, NejiXTen, KakXAnko
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Shasunatte: Ok, and here's the beginning to this big novel, "Young Lovers." What do you think. Today with me, I have Kakashi Hatake, and Zabuza Momochi (who've already read this) to help me with pre- and post-commentary. So, what'd you guys think of it?
Kakashi: Out of all the novels I've read, this one's pretty good. I'd give it a rating of 7 out of 10. (A/N: Sorry for bragging…I need some sort of filler for how Kakashi feels, though…)
Zabuza: Oh my God! I'm going to be famous! I'm going to be on commentary that can be viewed around the world! OhmyGod, ohmyGod, ohmyGod, ohmyGod!
Kakashi: Settle down, Zabuza. Remember, we're here to do commentary, not to get excited about something that we do on TV just about every week.
Zabuza: Oh yeah? You wanna' say that to my face?
Kakashi: Maybe I do! Stop getting excited over something that's so simple!
Zabuza: Ninja Art: Hidden Mist Jutsu!
Shasunatte: Well, um…(hear sounds of Kakashi and Zabuza fighting in the background)…that's it for commentary today…I guess. It was really short, but wasn't it nice?
Kakashi: Chidori!
Shasunatte: Until next time…heh heh…see ya...
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Young Love
Chapter 1
After hours of hard training with Naruto, Sasuke started his journey back to the Uchiha Manor. He kept a steady pace, while Naruto ran from the training grounds to try and catch up with Sasuke.
"Wait up, Sasuke! You walk to fast!" called Naruto.
Sasuke stopped. He then turned his head to see Naruto flailing after him. Sasuke showed a glimmer of a smirk, but that was all.
"You might seem older, Naruto," started Sasuke, "but you still have your same, kooky antics."
"Ha ha. Very funny Sasuke," said Naruto, sarcastically.
They walked through the training grounds without saying anything for a while. The trees glimmered with green leaves, and the birds of Konoha sang with a beautiful tone.
Finally, Naruto broke the peace by saying, "Man, it's been a long time since we trained here before. You know, like when we were kids. Heh heh…those were some good times."
"Hn," was all that Sasuke had to say.
"Hey, not only do I still have my kooky antics, but you still have your grumpy antics," remarked Naruto. "I mean, what's up with that?"
At that moment, Sasuke got to ground level, and did a swirling kick. He caught Naruto off guard. Naruto went flying, and Sasuke caught Naruto's collar right before he hit the ground.
"Don't you dare comment on my attitude!" yelled Sasuke. (Naruto gets the anime blue steaks across his face with the weird smile and all white eyes.) "And don't forget Naruto. I'm a Jonin. You're still a Chunin. I could kick your butt any day."
Sasuke dropped Naruto and started to walk away. Naruto slowely got up from the ground, still in a half-daze.
"Eh…," was Naruto's only response. "Ok…. But one of these days, I'll be able to beat you Sasuke!" yelled Naruto. "You just wait and see! Remember, I saved you from Orochimaru!"
That stopped Sasuke dead in his tracks. He looked down. He couldn't get the picture out of his mind when he was reminded of it. Sasuke and Naruto fighting together against Orochimaru and Kabuto. Sasuke and Naruto killed Kabuto in the process, but they had trouble with Orochimaru. Orochimaru had used his Kusanagi Sword to stab Sasuke in the chest, and Sasuke nearly died. Naruto got furious, and summoned the fourth tail of Kyuubi. Orochimaru had recognized this state before, but was not ready for the results. Kyuubi was much more controlled, and by the end of the fight, Orochimaru had perished in the hands of Kyuubi…with seven tails flailing in the air.
(Outer Sasuke:) Why does this memory haunt you and I so much?
(Inner Sasuke:) We almost died that day! The scars still there on your chest! Sometimes I don't even know how you survive without me…
(Outer Sasuke:) Hn….But…if Naruto killed Orochimaru that day, why am I still cursed with this mark?
(Inner Sasuke:) Think of it as a birthmark. Your stuck with it forever. Just don't use it too much. I think our lifespan's gone down enough from your overuse in the past….Jeez…
(Outer Sasuke:) Man, I just want to rip Naruto to shreads for making that remark…
(Inner Sasuke:) Don't. Don't do it. He doesn't know. Think of it as a good thing when he reminds you of it. Think of it as…a reminder. That…uh…shows how kind Naruto is towards you.
(Outer Sasuke:) Fine….
Sasuke looked up from the ground and turned towards Naruto. The shadow arose from his face, and I swear, he was actually smiling a little.
"Hey Naruto!" started Sasuke. "You wanna' come back to my place? Sakura's there!"
"Sure!" responded Naruto. "Can I bring Hinata?"
"Fine…," said Sasuke quietly.
"Awesome! Oh my God, your house is so awesome! It's been way too long since you've actually let me come there! Especially after that one time when I broke the lamp…. But that's all behind us now, right?"
"Hn…," was all that Sasuke had to say.