A/N: And here we are! I bet you've all been anticipating this exciting chapter. I'm planning that this will be pretty long…. So, what happens next? Who kicks who's butts? Who loses horribly? Will Akon and Ukon get really mad because they aren't fighting Kakashi? You probably don't know, because you haven't read this chapter yet! But, I know the outcome. So stay tuned! This chapter will completely blow your mind! Don't go to a different fan fic!
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Summary: It's been years since Naruto saved Sasuke from being almost killed by Orochimaru. Sasuke is back in the Konoha village, and is living a completely normal life. He's Sakura's boyfriend, his friends have put the past behind them, and nothing could possibly go wrong. Well…
Pairings: Main-SakuXSasu, HinaXNaru Other-TemaXShika, NejiXTen, KakXAnko
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Shasunatte: And we're live! This intro is for all you newcomers out there! This is the "Young Love" pre-commentary where we bring you characters fresh form the story to tell what and how they thought about this story! And of course, they've read my version before you, so they of course know what happens. They'll tell you if you should be anticipating it! Today, we have with us Anko!
Anko: Thank you, thank you. I'm glad to be here today!
Shasunatte: So, tell me Anko, what were you looking forward to when you finished the third chapter?
Anko: Well, honestly, I anticipated lots of blood. Ooh, the thought of it sends chills up my spine…ooooh….
Shasunatte: Um…ok. Were you satisfied with the fourth chapter? Did it also send chills up your spine?
Anko: Yes! It was completely amazing! Their was so much action, and Kakashi was so awesome and cute and awesome! But more people dieing and more blood would've been better.
Shasunatte: Uh, ok. That's probably the best review that I've gotten on my story before!
Anko: No, thank you for showing me such great entertainment! When the next chapter comes out, let me know! A.S.A.P.! And, make sure their's lots of blood!
Shasunatte: Um…ok. I'll be sure to do that. Say goodbye to the good readers, Anko!
Anko: See ya, guys! Have fun reading!
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Recap
Akon and Ukon looked at each other, then looked at Sasuke.
They sighed, and then said, "Well, guess it's down to you and us. Crap, I wanted to fight Kakashi, too…." Then, their kunai clashed.
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Young Love
Chapter 4
Both sides of shinobi raged on with their fighting. Many hard blows were made against each other, but no significant side was winning the battle. The Orochimaru clan used their excellent fighting styles, but they underestimated the Konoha ninja. They had seen the ninja when they were small teens. Now they were going into their mid-twenties. They were stronger.
In order to fix this problem, the Sound Five and Kabuto called out the feared word, "Curse Mark!"
Now it was a little more even. The Orochimaru clan still had a chance, but so did the Konoha ninja. Orochimaru did not have any boosted abilities, but because his clan had a better chance of winning, his battling techniques grew significantly greater. The Konoha shinobi actually had to start using jutsus!
Orochimaru had his large sword out, and was fighting Jiraiya, who had two kunai wielded. Orochimaru and Jirayia went at each other, having loathed each other for so many years. They both hated each other, and they wanted to do whatever they wanted to rip the other apart. Jiraiya blocked all of Orochimaru's attacks. When the snake ninja went at the frog ninja for a final blow, Jiraiya stabbed his enemy's hand. Blood started to drain out of Orochimaru's hand. He gently pulled the kunai out, licked his hand, and threw the kunai back at Jiraiya. He managed to dodge it, but the kunai from his other hand fell out. Then Orochimaru gave Jiraiya a deathly drill kick, and Jiraiya went flying through the walls to the outside.
Kabuto and Sakura showed no signs of exhaustion. They went on fighting for what seemed like hours. Neither let their guard down. Then, Sakura went for the cake. She swiftly blocked Kabuto's punch, pushed his arm so he became unstable, and unleashed on him. After many beat-downs and karate-style kicks, he fell to the floor, unconscious. Then, his body turned to a ball of smoke.
"Damned shadow clone," she whispered to herself. She looked to her left, and said, "Not to my left…." Then she looked to her right, and said, "Not to my right…." Then she looked forwards, backwards, and above her, and yelled, "I know where you are, Kabuto!"
She swung both of her arms upward, and thrust them into the ground. The ground cracked into many large segments. Some of the rock even flew up into the air. Kabuto flew out of the ground, and went flying through the ceiling. He flew up towards the sky. Sakura bounded upwards, hit him in the stomach, and he went crashing to the ground. As she came back down to unleash even more on him, he disappeared, and appeared behind her. Then, he hit all of her pressure points, and all the vertebra in her back at lightning speed. She became limp and flabby. It was her turn to go crashing to the ground.
"Get up, you dumb-ass criminal," yelled Tsunade, as she picked up Jirobou with one hand on the collar.
She wound up her arm, and whacked him hard and firm in the face. He went soaring into the air. His eyes then opened up, and he got into a strange formation. His stomach faced upward, and his arms and legs were stretched below him. He then flew back towards the ground with a great intensity. His fists and feet made contact with the ground, and the earth's surface cracked open. Chunks of the earth were clearly visible. Tsunade easily jumped up, and landed with a lady-like gracefulness. But then, Jirobou did a surprising thing. He started to do flips only landing on his hands and feet. When his limbs made contact with the ground, sharp pieces of the earth came up, and directed themselves towards Tsunade. Tsunade couldn't dodge the daggers, and sliced her body with ease. Some pieces even got stuck in her body. She couldn't bear the pain. She fell to the ground unconsciously.
Naruto slammed his fist into Kimimaru's back. The air-based rasengan jammed into the bone ninja's back, and his skin was twisted and torn off of the foundation of his body. Naruto then picked up his foot, and kicked Kimimaru right in the spot where he used the rasengan. The fugitive went flying through the walls, and skidded and fell with a thud.
"Great! One bad guy down…tons more to go…," exclaimed Naruto.
He had spoken too soon. Kimimaru mysteriously stood up from his spot. His back skin started to move and regenerate itself. Soon, Naruto couldn't even notice that he had used his rasengan on him.
Kimimaru started to laugh, and then said, "You think you're so tough Naruto? You think that you've learned a thing or two? Well then, Naruto, you are HORRIBLY MISTAKEN!"
At that, Kimimaru ran towards Naruto with full force. Naruto didn't see it coming. The bone ninja started to shoot bone blades at Naruto. They sliced through the orange ninja's body, leaving him stained with red blood. Then, Kimimaru pulled a bone blade out from his leg, and stabbed Naruto with it. Or so he thought. Naruto, with his last bit of strength, blocked the outlaw's attack. They stood there for a long time. Then, Naruto fell over, exhausted.
Iruka lay on the ground with a blade stuck in his body. He didn't move, except for the occasional breaths that he took. He stared into open air, not even noticing the awesome battle that took place around him! (A/N: Sorry, was that too much voice, or was it ok?)
Kidomaru ran across the ceiling, and jumped down on Kakashi.
Kakashi lifted his head band to reveal his eye, as he shouted, "Sharingan!"
Then, Kakashi lifted his arm, and jabbed Kidomaru in the side, sending him flying into the wall. He took the impact of the only cement wall in the house, and fell to the floor. Kakashi jumped up, and threw shuriken at the carcass of Kidomaru, and started to do a drill kick. The body of the spider ninja disappeared. Kakashi landed on the ground. His unsuccessful move made him lose his balance. Then, Kidomaru reappeared, and started to hit Kakashi numerous times in his pressure points. Then, he finished the white haired ninja by kicking him into the wall.
"Damn it…," was all that Kakashi was able to say.
Hinata was not doing well. It was three beastly minions and an evil chick versus her. She didn't stand a chance. She tried hard to block every attack, but few attempts proved to work. After fighting for a long period of time, Tayuya commanded her summoned beasts to attack Hinata with a final blow. All three blasted her with an undecipherable force. Hinata went flying through the walls. When she landed, she lay in closet.
"Byakugan," she whispered.
She looked around. She was not alone.
Sasuke and the Siamese twins were head to head with equal amounts of strength. Akon and Ukon tried to attack with as much force as they could, but they didn't do any damage.
"I know all your weaknesses," said Sasuke while fighting. "Don't try anything stupid. I can kill easily."
"Then try this one, Sasuke!" was all that Akon said. Or was it Ukon?
Instantly, Sasuke's mind was filled with a strong genjutsu. He was outside his house. He walked up to the door, and opened. He didn't know why he did that. He just did. When he opened the door, his lip started to tremble. His brother stood behind his parents. His parents looked at Sasuke and smiled. Sasuke yelled, "NO! Turn around! Please don't die!" His brother took out two kunai and stabbed his parents. Their smiles turned into a blank expression, as they fell to the ground. Blood drained from their corpses. The last thing Sasuke saw was his brothers eyes gleaming with the Mangekyo Sharingan. Sasuke's cry turned into a grin.
"Bad move, Akon!" he yelled. "Sharingan!" he yelled. Then, he yelled with confidence, "Copy Mangekyo Sharingan!"
Sasuke's eyes melded from a Sharingan to a copied Mangekyo Sharingan. He put his fingers in a crossed position, and released the genjutsu. He was back in his house again. He put his arm out, and moved it in different positions. Akon and Ukon's body began to twist in unthinkable manners. His bones began to crack and break, as the last breath of Akon left his body. Sasuke let him die there, and went on to help the others. He was devastated by what he saw.
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Shasunatte: Wow! That was exciting! It's down to Sasuke! Is he going to be able to take down the Orochimaru clan?
Anko: That was a surprise ending for me. I can't wait for the next chapter! I don't even know if Sasuke has enough energy left to take down even Kidomaru! He might lose to them on this one!
Shasunatte: Who knows? Oh, wait, I do! But I can't tell any of you.
Anko: Oh come on. You can tell me!
Shasunatte: Uh, no I can't!
Anko: Oh yes you can!
Shasunatte: No, I really can't!
Anko: Please!?
Shasunatte: Nope.
Anko: Sen'eijashu no Jutsu! snakes come out of sleeve and bite Shasunatte
Shasunatte: GYAAAAAAAAAAA!!
Sasuke: What did you do you crazy woman?! Now how will he finish the story?!
Anko: …..oh…..I didn't think of that….
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