A/N: Ok, we're back into some action. The gang is all together (or at least most of it), and their about to rumble. This is going to be awesome! But, as it goes on, you'll figure out that this will get really interesting, too. You're really gonna' like it! (And if not, I'll guarantee full money returned!) So, I hope that you enjoy this chapter of "Young Love." It's gonna' be great! (I hope…)
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Summary: It's been years since Naruto saved Sasuke from being almost killed by Orochimaru. Sasuke is back in the Konoha village, and is living a completely normal life. He's Sakura's boyfriend, his friends have put the past behind them, and nothing could possibly go wrong. Well…
Pairings: Main-SakuXSasu, HinaXNaru Other-TemaXShika, NejiXTen, KakXAnko
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Shasunatte: Hey everbody! We're once again back with pre-commentary for "Young Love!" I'm Shasunatte, I am the fire shinobi, and I fell great! This whole story is going great, and I'm getting more fans every day! Now, all of you know that drill, so I'm just going to introduce the person that I'm going to interview today. Today, we have Temari and Shikamaru!
Temari: Thank you, thank you. I'm glad that I could be here right now.
Shikamaru: (sighs) I hate interviews. They're such a drag…
Temari: Oh come on you crybaby. How bad could it be?
Shikamaru: …
Temari: Answer me!
Shikamaru: Huh? What? Wow, where am I? Oh, wait, I'm on this stupid interview. I fell asleep.
Temari: (Leans over and kisses Shikamaru)
Shikamaru: (Gets hearts in his eyes) Ehhhhhh…
Temari: Now will you pay attention?
Shikamaru: Yeeeeeaaaaaahhhhh….
Shasunatte: So now that we've gotten through our problems here, how did you think this chapter was?
Shikamaru: Ehhhhhhhh…
Temari: It was pretty good! Lots of good details. Lots of juicy stuff going on.
Shasunatte: Thank you. And, what are you looking forward to in the next chapter?
Shikamaru: Ehhhhhh…
Temari: Um…I think kids are watching this. Do I really have to say it?
Shasunatte: Is it that bad?
Temari: (Nods her head)
Shasunatte: Fine.
Audience: (Anime sweat drops)
Shikamaru: Ehhhhhhh….I love you Temari………
Temari: I love you too! Hey, wait, what the hell? Oh no! Not again! Oh no, no, no, no! You are not making our shadows make out again! You little perv! (Starts to chase Shikamaru. Shikamaru starts running away like a little girl.)
Shasunatte: Well, apparently, that's all the time we have for the show today! We'll be back after the presentation. But, until then, good bye! (Temari chases Shikamaru in front of the camera. Shikamaru screams like a little girl)
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Recap
Once Naruto finished, he wiped his forehead, and slumped to the ground. He was tired. He hadn't fought in days. He needed to recuperate his full fighting stamina. "Hey Naruto!" yelled Sasuke. Naruto looked up and saw the group standing there. "Need some help training?" Naruto got that look of determination on his face, and yelled back, "Yeah!" The group then ran towards the holder of the nine-tailed fox, and surrounded him. Temari took out her fan, Neji summoned his Byakugon, Shikamaru got his army of shadows ready, and Tenten masterfully wielded one of her strongest weapons.
"This is going to be fun," whispered Naruto.
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Young Love
Chapter 6
"Mangekyo Sharingan!" yelled Sasuke. His eyes turned blood red, as the amazing design curled itself in around his pupil. All the ninja looked at each other, not knowing who was going to make the first move. Neji looked around, quickly, trying to figure out the other's moves. Temari had her fan in a masterfully designed ready position. Tenten help her chained weapons right in front of her eyes. Shikamaru didn't care. Hell, he had a small army of shadows. He had nothing to worry about.
Then, Naruto did the unexpected. (A/N: But we all saw it coming!) He gathered up his white chakra. It glowed with intensity. Its immense power engulfed the body of the orange ninja. Naruto felt the change coming. His pupils grew vertical. His nails grew larger. His canines grew larger. His rage grew into a fury. When he gathered enough energy, he let it all go in a wave of energy. The orange glow remained around the ninja. He had summoned the power of Kyuubi. He didn't need the tails, though.
Shikamaru silently commanded one of his shadows to attack the blonde shinobi. It crept in the shades of the trees. When it was right behind Naruto, Neji noticed it. HE quickly took out a kunai, and threw it at Shikamaru. A shadow popped up, and blocked it. Naruto bounded up to attack Neji. The shadow came out of the ground at the same time. It tried to grab for Naruto, but he was too quick.
Tenten saw the chance, and threw her weapon at Naruto. Temari also saw the chance. She used her gust to blow away Tenten's weapon. She was almost defenseless. Temari charged her. Her fan was slicing the air. Temari wielded it as if it were weightless. Tenten was beat. She knew it. Then, she had an idea.
Naruto drilled towards Neji. Neji observed Naruto with his Byakugan. He had his next move ready. He disappeared into the ground. Naruto hit the ground with a thud.
Shikamaru ran towards Naruto with his shadows up front. He was going to surprise attack Naruto. Then, a dark figure ran through all his shadows, making them disappear. Then, the figure ran behind Shikamaru, and started to charge. It was Sasuke. Shikamaru saw him clearly. "Shadow Strangle!" he yelled. The thousands of shadows started to come out of the ground. But, Sasuke saw them coming. He dodged all of the shadows easily. Shikamaru had a back-up. Sasuke started to unleash on Shikamaru. He moved his hands at light-speed. Shikamaru was ready. Shikamaru hit Sasuke in the stomach, sending him backwards. The shade ninja had a shadow run towards him. "Shadow Meld!" The shade run into Shikamaru's body. Instantly, his body became black except for the whites of his eyes. Even his clothing.
Naruto looked everywhere for Neji. He couldn't find him. He would just have to stay on top of his guard, and wait. He waited. He knew Neji was waiting for something. Something big. So Naruto decided to disappoint him. Neji couldn't take the wait. He ran in circles around Naruto. The orange ninja watched with keen eyes. He was watching for any sudden movements. None. So he did the second-best thing. "Wind-based Rasengan!" The energy gathered in his hand. He raised it to the heavens. The wind started to get picked up by the force of Neji's running. A tornado started to form. "Impressive, Naruto!" yelled Neji over the force of the gale. "Now, I can't stop running! But, you will soon regret that. Ultimate One-Hundred Percent Trigrams Super Blast Fisted Two Hundred and Fifty Six Palm!!" Naruto didn't see it coming. Neji instantly stopped the tornado. He then rushed after Naruto and blasted away at him. Five hundred and eleven times. Naruto couldn't even stop Neji's mad rage. Neji pounded away, while blasts of chakra blew away from his hands every time they mad they mark. Once Neji was finished, Naruto stood there. He just stood there. He started laughing. Neji was puzzled. Why was Naruto laughing? Instantly, the shadow clone of Naruto disappeared.
Tenten was completely defenseless. She could use Taijutsu, but that wouldn't save her from Temari's giant fan. Temari ran after the weapon's ninja. She slashed at her wildly. Tenten dodged, but was scraped up a few times. Then, she put her plan into action. She wanted to use her new jutsu. "Drilling Technique!" she yelled, as her body started to spin. Temari didn't care. She was still slicing. Except the slashes were ineffective. They did nothing to the fast spinning ninja. Suddenly, Tenten started to go into the ground. She was digging a hole with her spinning. "What are you doing now…?" thought Temari. Tenten was now fully underground. She could attack anyone she wanted without anyone knowing. And Temari knew that.
"Impressive new jutsu," said Sasuke. "You may have learned something new, but can you control it?" At his words, Shikamaru started to sink into the ground. He was becoming a shadow himself. Sasuke could see where he was going, but only for a moment. He had gone into the shade of the trees. "I have to be on my guard if I want to beat him…," he whispered to himself. As if on cue, he heard a voice call out and say, "Shadow Vortex!" Instantly, a bunch of shadows started to crowd around him. They came out of the ground, and started spinning, he tried to get out, but there was no escape. He was trapped. Then, he heard the same voice say, "It's my turn now…." He saw Shikamaru's shadow appear in the vortex. He had a kunai. We was planning on spinning around in the twister, and slicing Sasuke with his weapon. Well, his plan worked. He was slicing up Sasuke. But not for long. Sasuke used his Mangekyo to figure out a plan. He grabbed Shikamaru's arm at the right time, and pushed Shikamaru's face into the vortex. The tornado instantly subsided. He was still holding Shikamaru when a younger guy's voice called out and said, "Ouch! Hey, what are you doing on our training grounds, punk?"
Temari waited. She was waiting for Tenten to attack. She was on her toes. Ready to let Tenten meet her maker. Then, she heard it. The sound of spinning. She looked towards the sound. But didn't see anything. Soon, the sound came from all around her. "What the hell are you planning, Tenten!?" she yelled. She waited a little more, until the ground under her swiftly parted, and Tenten came spinning out, with a giant Light Shuriken. They both landed on the ground. They charged at each other. Their weapons of choice collided. They sparred with the wrong weapons. (A/N: But who gives a shit? It's still actiony!) They kept going at it, until they heard what sounded like a little kids voice, saying, "Ouch! Hey, what are you doing on our training grounds, punk?"
Neji looked everywhere. "Where could that blonde haired freak be?" he thought to himself. He kept looking. It was only a few minutes, but it felt like hours to him. "Rasengan!" was heard off in the distance. "Ah, Naruto…," Neji thought. He studied the landscape with his Byakugan. He looked for intense masses of chakra. Sure enough, he saw the big one heading right towards him. Neji pretended to not have seen him. But, all of a sudden, Naruto was gone. Neji looked back, and only saw a puff of smoke. Before he could react, Naruto came up from the ground, and pounded Neji. Hard. So hard that he kit the incoming Konohamaru. "Ouch!" he yelled, as Neji toppled over on him. They got up, and Konohamaru exclaimed, "Hey, what are you doing on our training grounds?" Everyone stopped their fighting. They looked at Konohamaru and his teammates behind him. "Get out!" he yelled. "Jeez, fine! We'll get out!" said Naruto. "Come on guys, let's head home…."
As they were walking down the road, there was an awkward silence. For a long time. Finally, Naruto said, "What are we going to do today?" Sasuke looked at him. He thought, and said, "Well, me and Sakura were planning on fixing up Uchiha Manor. As they say, many hands makes for light work…." "So…," said Temari. "Are you asking us to help?" Sasuke was blank for a second, and mumbled, "Well………yeah." "Sure!" the rest of the gang exclaimed in unison.
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Ramen Shop
(After the fixing of the Uchiha Manor)
The gang all sat together in the small amen shop. Naruto, Hinata, Sasuke, Sakura, Temari, Shikamaru, Tenten, and Neji. Naruto was wolfing down some ramen. Hinata was staring at Naruto while he was doing that, blushing a bit. Sasuke was staring at his girlfriend's beautiful pink hair. She was talking to Tenten and Temari. Shikamaru was sleeping. Neji was trying to use his Byakugan on Tenten. When she noticed, she turned around, and Neji nearly fell over. "PERVERT!!" she yelled. Then, she slapped him really hard. "Ouch…," he said. Tenten started to fell bad, so she leaned closer to him, and he held her close.
"Well, that was fun!" exclaimed Sakura. "We pretty much finished the whole Manor! And your shadows helped a lot, Shikamaru!" He all of a sudden woke up and said, "Woh! Where am I?" The group started to laugh. "Hey Naruto!" said Neji. "How's that ramen?" "Naruto barely looked up from his bowl and mumbled, "Gooh!" Then, he went back to chomping on the delicious treat. "So, what are you guys doing tonight?" Temari asked Sakura. "Well," she thought out loud. "We'll probably watch o movie or something. I don't know…." Sasuke, at perfect timing, grabbed her pink haired love. He pulled her into himself with a tight grasp. He gave her a raspberry on the neck, and she started laughing. "Hey! Stop that!" she said through her giggling. "You know I hate that!" Meanwhile, Hinata was still watching Naruto. "Um…Naruto?" asked Hinata. "Don't you think you're going a bit fast?" "Fast?" he said. "Um…no not really. I'd choke on my food if I went fast!" Then he went back to chowing on his ramen. "I hope you don't…." Hinata said quietly.
After a long time of ramen and talking (and sleeping in Shikamaru's case), the girls decided to head home. They said bye to their guys, kissed them, and headed off. The guys talked for a while, but Shikamaru was really out of it.
After another long time of talking (and Naruto's loud blabbing), the guys decided to go home, too. They said bye, and Sasuke slipped Shikamaru's arm from under his face. He hit his head on the table. Sasuke gave him the scoop, and both of them headed home, too.
Naruto was running on the roofs towards his house. It was so much easier now that he was older and stronger. He leapt from house to house with ease. When he came to his house, he landed in a tree nearby. What he saw made him almost fall over. Hinata was changing into a night gown. And she was halfway there. And she had the window wide open. Naruto almost lost it. But, he kept his cool, and kept watching. When she finished, he hopped out of the tree, and to the front door. He walked in, just to hear Hinata say, "You're just in time!"
Sasuke ran along the path with the moon shimmering in his face. He watched as all the shops on his way home were just closing. Then, he jumped up, and started to hop through the trees. He thought back to the good old times when he had missions non stop for Orochimaru, always jumping through forests and trees. When he came to his house, he hid behind a bush, so he wouldn't startle Sakura. Well, let's just say that he had really good timing. He was right in front of their open bedroom window. She walked into the room, and took off her shirt. Sasuke's eyes grew wider. He knew what was coming. She hung it up, and took off her pants. She hung that up too. Then, she unhooked her bra. She threw it on the ground. Sasuke's eyes grew wider. Then, she pulled off her panties, and threw those down, too. Sasuke's eyes inflated to an enormous size. Then, she turned around to face him, and walked towards the window. She glimmered in the moonlight. He got to see her in all her glory. His eyes just about popped. Then, she put on her nightgown. "Aw, shit…," he thought. Then, he went to the front door, and went inside.
(A/N: Let's just say that somehow, in some manner, pretty much the same thing happened to Shikamaru and Neji. I don't know how, but that's just the story. And, I really don't have any explanations good enough like Naruto's or Sasuke's that aren't a lot similar to theirs. So, I'm just going on with the story.)
Neji walked into his house, and Tenten was sitting on the couch, watching TV. When she heard him come in, she got up, and ran to him. She hugged him with a lot of passion. (A/N: Is that possible, or is it just me?) "I missed you," her muffled voice said. Neji stroked her hair, and said, "I missed you, too." They broke from the hug. They looked at each other. The looked deep into each other's eyes. They stayed that way for a long time. Finally, Neji said, "You have the most beautiful eyes I have ever seen." She laughed, and hugged him again. He hugged her back. The hugged for a while. Then, Tenten slowly got on her tip-toes, sliding her face up Neji's muscular body. She touched his lips to hers. They started to make out rhythmically. Neji was still stroking her hair, and Tenten had her arms wrapped around his back. They pressed themselves closer together. Both of them enjoyed the moment. Then, Neji started to take his hand down, and grasped the knotted cloth that kept her robe on.
Naruto walked over to his love. She stood there, kind of blushing, because she was wearing a nightgown. She really didn't like it, but she knew that Naruto would. Hinata went to the couch in the living room, and fingered Naruto towards her. So, he took off his shoes and jacket, and walked towards Hinata. He turned the lights down a bit, and then sat down by her. Her put his arm around her. He looked at her. She blushed intensely. "Um…why don't we watch some TV, Naruto?" she asked. He nodded his head, and she turned it on. It started playing Stardust. "Ooh! I know this movie! I've reviews about it from America! I heard it was good," said Naruto. Hinata smiled, and cuddled a little closer to Naruto. He rapped his other arm around her. As the movie went on, there were gruesome parts, funny parts, and romantic parts. When it came to the funniest part, They couldn't stop from laughing. Hinata fell over onto the couch, and so did Naruto. Hinata found herself looking up into the eyes of the most amazing man she had ever met. They looked at each other. Naruto grinned. Hinata couldn't stop from smiling. Then, she moved her head closer to his, and closed her eyes. Naruto did the same. Their lips met. It was like watching fireworks for both of them. They started to go a little faster. Both of them enjoyed it. Naruto held her closer. She was blushing like a beet. Naruto started to think. He thought for a while, making his body go into 'autopilot' mode. He had to do it. But what happened of it wasn't the right time? Well, it was now or never. He came back to the real world. He was still enjoying himself, as he moved his arm up Hinata's gown, and unbuttoned the top button.
Sasuke walked in through the door. He looked at all the fixes that they had made that day in the building. He looked back on the day. He thought it was pretty good. He heard Sakura's voice from inside their bedroom. "Come here, Sasuke!" So, he walked down the hall, and into the doorframe of the door to their room. She was lying in their bed. He leaned on the door frame. She pulled over the covers to his side of the bed. Then, she fingered him towards her. So he walked over to the side of the bed. She patted on his spot on the bed where she had pulled the covers free. She, he laid down in the bed. They looked at each other. Sakura noticed that he had lots of scratches and bruises on him. "Ooh, you were training hard today!" she said. "Um…well…yeah," was his simple response. "Are you hurting anywhere?" she asked. He pointed to his bicep. She grabbed it, and kissed it. Then, he pointed to his chest and said, "Here." She opened up his shirt, and kissed him there, too. He pointed to his forehead. She leaned over and kissed him there. He then pointed to his lips and whispered, "How about here…?" She slowly leaned over, and placed her lips on top of his. She kissed him passionately and with love. He kissed her back. Sakura rolled over onto her boyfriend. Sasuke put his arms around her head. Sakura put her hands on his chest. "Wow, he feels warm. And extremely muscular…," she thought. The massaged their lips on each others for a long time. Then, Sasuke made the move. He went for the neck hole of her gown. He gently grabbed it, and started to pull it over her head.
Shikamaru walked through the door, and shut it behind him. He turned around, and saw Temari standing in the hallway. She was leaning on the wall, her left shoulder facing him. "You're home pretty late," she said. "Oh, you know," he started. "I was just hanging out with the guys." Then he walked over to her. He put his hand on the wall behind her, and leaned towards her. "Why?" he asked. She looked into his eyes. "Oh, just kiss me you fool," she said. She pulled his face into hers. Their lips met with pure power. (A/N: Not that it would leave a bruise or anything! It's just like an emotional power! You know…?) Temari's hands grasped onto his collar. He held her waist, and closed the space between them. They kissed so passionately, that Temari really couldn't take it anymore. She broke the grasp, and said to him, "I'm taking a shower. I reek form all this work today." Then, she walked to the bathroom. Shikamaru watched as Temari literally ditched him. Then, he came up with an idea. Temari took off her clothes, and turned on the shower. She turned around and looked in the mirror. "I wonder if anyone will see this amazing body one day…," she thought. She struck a pose. She held it, and then started laughing on the inside. (sigh) "Not for a while…." She turned back around, and hoped in the shower. She closed the door behind her, and help the heat of the gracing water. Shikamaru then walked in the bathroom. With just a towel on. "Oh! You scared me, Shikamaru!" Temari said. "Why are you in here?" "Well, I thought you needed some company…," he said. She opened the door to the shower a bit, and poked her head out. "Right, and you're wearing just a towel. Seriously, and tell me the truth." "Well, I…um…well, you see…um…," Shikamaru mumbled a bit. "Fine," she finally said, and sighed. "Get in."
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Shasunatte: And there it is! Your really juicy look at the sixth chapter of Young Love! Give it up for the sixth!
Temari: Wow, that was intense. There was a lot of love in that chapter. I don't know if I could've taken it all. Oh wait, I did!
Shikamaru: (Laughs a little while drooling)
Temari: What are you thinking about?
Shikamaru: Nothing….
Temari: Are you thinking about me naked?
Shikamaru: Maybe…?
Temari: You…you…you perv! (Smacks Shikamaru in the face. He falls over backwards.) That should bring back to reality!
Shasunatte: Um…is he going to be…you know…alright?
Temari: Oh of course. I do that to him all the time!
Shasunatte: (Whispers) No wonder he acts so weird….
Temari: What did you say!? (Ground rumbles. Her head gets big and fire gets in her eyes.)
Shasunatte: Nothing….
Temari: Oh you'll pay! (Takes out her fan and chases Shasunatte. Shasunatte runs away like a little girl. His eyes are huge and white, and his screaming for his mother.)
Shikamaru: (Gets up slowly. Shakes his head.) Well, looks like that's all the time we have for today. Until next time, see ya! Hey, reading cue cards is easy! (Then, he falls back down. Temari chases Shasunatte in front of the camera. Shasunatte's still screaming.)
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