This is my first fanfic ever!!!!1! Plz review!!!!!!
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One day Legolas was riding when he saw an elf maiden looking at him from behind a tree." "Legolas rode up to the maiden and said, "You are so pretty will you go out with me?" and the maiden said, "Yes I will go out with you." "Then Legolas grabed Allison's hand and pulled her up onto his horse and they went raiding into the sunset." "At the end of the day, Legolas said "Allison I love you though I only met you tuday." and Alison said, "I love you two Legolas even though I met you just twoday." They learned in close and were about to kiss when..." "Legolas said, "I sence something moving in the distance!" Alison turned around and saw a hundred orcs running towards them. She screamed and Legolas said, "Don't worry, I will keep you saf." And then he turned the horse awround and they began riding twords Lothloriene." "they rode four hours and then took a nap and had some tea and lembas. Then they woke up and rode sum more. Just before sonset they reached Lothloriene and a tall blonde elf steeped out from behund a tree."
"Hello, my name is Haldir." the elf saed. "Hello, my name is Legolas." Legolas said.
"Hello, my name is Allyson." Allyson said."
"Just then, Alyson heard a voice in her head. "Welcome to Lothlorien Allyson!" a woman's voice said. "Who was that?" Alyson asked. Legolas staired at her and Haldir chuckled. "That is Galadriel, queen of Lothlorien."
"Allyson chuckled also. "Oh, ok." Legolas kept staring at her as Haldir led them into the city. "Legolas, why are you staring at me?" Allyson asked. "Because you are so pretty." Legolas said. "Aw, that's so sweet!" Allyson said and huged him.
"Just then Haldir turned arounde. Alyson noticed the sad looks in his eye but didn't understand why he looks sad. Legolas did not notice.
20 minutes later…
They all reached Lothloriene and were walking up the steps to see Galadreell and Seleborn. Alyson screemed and Legolas looked around but she was already falling. But it was ok, because Haldrl catched her!"
"Allyson looked up and seen Haldir and smiled at him thankfully. "Thank you Haldir!" Allyson said. "Your welcome Allysen!" Haldir replied. They looked at each others eyes until Legolas came over and asked, "Are you alright Allyson?" "Yes I am alright, I'm just clumsey." Allyson said back."
"Haldir heaped her up and the kept walking up the steeps. Legolas held Allyson's hand.
5 minutes later…
They reached the top and saw Galadriel and Celeborn. Galadriel said, "Hi, how are you?" "We are tired because we got chased by orcs, but other than that we are good." Legolas said back. Allison just smiled and looked at Haldir.
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