Hey! So I've just posted the re-edited version on my first chapter! I've made a new story under my profile called Gazing at a Broken Heart. This one, I've changed to "Gazing at a Broken Heart – Old", so you know the difference. Anyway, the first chapter is up, it's been edited for spelling and grammar, and I've also changed some things. It's not all that obvious, but I think it works better now!
Enjoy!
Oh, and my second chapter should be coming soon!