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A funy man w/ silver hair jump thru window! Kagami-chan scremed, "Kyaaaaaaaa!"

I say, dun wry, ill get hm out!

...but I cant fiht hm liek dis!

I run 2 midle o/ mcdonalds. "Ok, Ill do my transfurmaton her..."

I tuch da necklace arund my nek, it is silvr chain w/ a gold yingyang on it. each o/ parts o/ yingyang wuz diff colrs, one gold, one absidin blak.

"I think this is a job 4 light." I said. I tuched da gold part, and close muh eye.

"OK, now i hafta trust mysef. trust ursef, Kaori-chan..."

i trusts mysef mor and mor, until i feel im gonna be flung over da side. Then i say,

"Anata wa shinu, watash no te ni. Anata wa wont live desu. Go bak 2 hell."

I then raise my head, and say my magik wrds:

"Ying o/ the Day, Transform!"

I thro my hed bak, my eyes stil closed. A golden light covrs me, & i am encasd in golden light. I spin arund, & the light twists arund me. gold leafs cover my toes, and then gro into pink and whit boots dat go up 2 my knee. i get a thigh belt on my lef thih, and on da belt is a goldun sun. at my sholders, i gro big poofs, and from dose poofs gro a blue & pink shirt 4 me 2 wer. from da shrt gros a pleted anime skoolgurl skrt, blue w/ pink tracins. my hair becums a chesnut brown,and is tie into 2 twintails w/ sunsheped baretes. i sumon my magik staf, The Sun Breker of Ying, and hold it in my riht hand. i den pose, and say,

"Your nut getin away, kid!"

but lookie, da guy is Xemnas-kun!

Sora-kun gaspies. "wat i tought i kill u 3 munths ago!"

Xemnas-kun laugh. "Oh no boy u aint done wif me yet nigga. betch lemme show u how its dun arund here, yo!"

Xemnas-kun jumped up hih & use his blade to skrach Mugi-chan. I screm, "U dun do dat betch!"

He lokk at me and laffed. "Den cum ober her & kyacchi me, baka!"

I ran over 2 him, but he use Teleport to get outsid mickeyds. now hes in sky, so i use my flyin powrs to get him.

he flew awy 2 quickie, so i got no choic but 2 use long dist atack. "OK Xemnas-kun, ur gona get it now..."

i held my staff 2 my hert, & close my eye.s i was chargin up powr. den, when i was done, i say, "Raging..."

"haha u cant do shit moderfu- oi?" he says cunfusedly.

"...Hart of Day..." now i aim at him.

He gets scarred now. "hey wat?"

"...Shoooooooooooooooooot!" I let my powr lose on him, & a huge beem o/ gold & pink shots at him. it hits him hard, & he crys.

"Damn it! ill cum bak bakas, watch me~..." he got hit so hrd he flw off into sky, untl he became just a anime star in dist.

I wipe my hed. "Haaaaaattsa, sugoi desu~..." I flew 2 behind a fone boof to chang my form back from "Ying Warior o/ da Sun" to Kaori-chan. Kagami-chan and Sora-kun run to me.

"oi oi r u daijobu desku?" sora-kun asked.

i swetdropped. "Ano, hai, genke desu yo..."

He swetdrop to. "Well, cum on, we gotta get u 2 my hous so u can clen up." He grabs my han again, and we all run 2 his plase.

We finaly get ther. Sora-kun's hous is a bootiful one, a iland home. it is made o/ wood on sides, and haz tree leafs on top. Sora-kun walked to frunt dor and puled key frum under dormat ad put the key in hole.

"Whew, were here..." I gaspie.

"Welcome in." he sed. i jus plop down on his big plushie couch.

"Hi Sora-kun, im makin gohan..." some1 yelled. a woman w/ short yellow hair walks in.

"Oh! Ara ara, r dese ur tomodachis, sora-kun?" she gaspied. "I didnt maek dem any gohan."

I look at her. She is sort, but stil as tall as sora-kun. She had short blond hair dat went 2 her sholder, and kawai green eyes. her skin is nise and pale, and shes wering a doktor's coat with a apron on top. shes got some bunny houseshoes on and half leg green tub sox.

"Matte (wait) sora-kun u didnt giv them houseshoes! (Japanese people gotta wear houseshoes, no real shoes in hous)" she scremed.

"Oh yea, gomenasai!" he sed an ran upstars. He caem back w/ shoes and gave dem to me and Kagami-chan.

Sora-kun's mom brougt out sum sushi and noodles and rice 4 lunch gohan (japaneze ppl eat rice at evry mel evry day, is prt o/ culchur).. we all sat dwn at der japaneze eat tabl and taberu (dat mens eat).

"Well i gess u gota stay her, kaori-chan," sora-kun's mom sed. "at lest untl u find a plece 2 stey."

"arigato, i will," i sed. aftr diner we all went 2 bed.

Kagami-chan (kagamisama dis is u dess! ^-^) slep w/ me. she wispred 2 me,

"Oi, u wana snek out?"

i gav her a lokk. "but we cant du dat..."

She shruged. "plz? ill taek all da blaem if we get caht, so onegai?"

i say, "ok."

ddddddd ok, frum now on in cutechocopockiikissu no shaberi no jikan , ima tech u new japaneze wrds ne?

so 2day we lern dat "Gohan" mens lunch! how u remembr? its saem name as gohan from dragunbal z!^-^

also lern japaneze culchur 2! hers 2days culchur leson!1

in japan, ppl gota were housshoes in hous, cant were real shoes! its b/c theyre very clean ppl, dey dont want u 2 dirty up dere floors! isnt dat sugoi? japaneze r such clen ppl, dere so sugoi. i lurv japan

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