Hey this is a quick poem I came up with while walking to school. I though it was half decent so I decided to write it down. I haven't done many rhyming poems so this is kind of new to me. Please tell me what you think.

Quietly upstairs I creep

My mind succumbs to dream filled sleep

My imagination runs wild

As I dream of being a small child

Asleep in a trance like state

There's not a thing a can't create

My mind runs through the possibilities

With no desire for responsibility

From this dream I too must wake

Leaving me longing for my dream state.