Author's Note:I have decided to change things up as the last two stories I wrote were tool sexual too quickly and they would have violated the terms of service. I pulled them down on my own as a result and decided to start writing a new story that is still based on the Weight of The Quill system.
Point Progression:
Fast: 100CP per 500 words
Normal: 100CP per 1000 words
Gradual: 100CP per 2000 words
Slow: 100CP per 5000 words
Purchase Method:
Normal: Purchases may be made freely based on the points accumulated
Sequential: Purchases are made in order from least to most expensive
Random: Every 100 points randomly select an entry from the list. It must be purchased if sufficient points are available.
Purchase Frequency:
Immediate: Purchases are made as close to the target wordcount as possible.
Trigger: Purchases are made at a specific point in the story (Sleep, Downtime, Meditation, ect.)
Literary: Purchases are made between chapters or entries.
My Story shall have normal point progression and normal purchase method with a triggered purchase frequency. The points shall be earned with every thousand words in character in the worlds that my jumper visits that I write and may be spent when the character meditates on his points. With that out of the way onto the story
{Devine Telepathy}
[Jumpchain Information]
"Speech"
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Chapter One: A Honest Start
Waking up in a void was not something that I had been expecting due to knowing that I was dying from cancer and I did not believe that I was going to wake up after I passed from the mortal coil. I expected to wake up in either a freezing cave or a lake of fire as I was not exactly a good person. Just as I was about to try to moved around I saw a purple light come flying out of no where and slam int me. Once my vision returns from everything being purple I am able to hear something new. {Yes a free floating soul now I can get out of this mess thanks for the help my new friend. We are going to get along just fine as we are going to become one and the same as we travel the multiverse.}After those words from a female voice I felt myself being yanked through space and time as a rip appeared and whatever hit me dragged us through the opening which matched the things color. {Oh, before I forget I am the embodiment of truth known as Maat the goddess who resides over the balance, order, law, harmony, morality, and justice. I am going to get us out of here but it will cause each of our souls irreparable harm until we merge into one being. Good luck in keeping what you can of your personality as I do the same. As a result of us merging we will be moving around the multiverse to regrow our power into divinity not allowing for extra bonuses and we will need to take on new memories each time we enter a new part of the multiverse unless we spend points to let us enter that particular universe as we are at that time. Just so you know we will slowly gain abilities from each world that we visit by harmonizing with the main story of each world that we visit.}I felt my soul being torn apart along with that of Maat's and clung to the idea of my old body as a male and my various conquests that I had enjoyed over my long life.
As my new soul finally came out of the blender that was the gap between worlds I saw a screen displaying my status as a being showing me the drawbacks that resulted in the points I would have as I entered each world. The first was to keep me from being overwhelmed by my own foolishness as I would not be able to take on anymore drawbacks. Then there were the two that came from being the new entity that I was in a god of truth being an inability to lie along with not being able to possess someone from the world that I enter as I must be true to myself and drop-in in each world that I visit. The final drawback was one I was not expecting as I would be cut off from any other extra dimensional spaces for the time being.
[No Drawbacks for You!-San [200: The Drawback Man says you cannot gain CP for non-toggle drawbacks in any individual jump and every drawback you take from this supplement must be chain long. Chain-Only. Does not apply to Companions in those rare jumps where they are allowed to take drawbacks. Mandatory drawbacks or drawbacks that are included with individual purchases may be taken, but award no CP if they normally would. Origins or perks that award extra CP for taking them but that are not drawbacks are fine. This does not block taking Scenarios, but you don't get any CP for taking them unless that CP is the prize.
Oath of Truth [100: You may not lie, either by word or deed, in speech or in written text, nor by any means of communication at all. You are free to state opinions, as long as you clarify that that is what you are communicating. You are not responsible for correcting misbeliefs you did not cause, even if you are asked about the veracity of those beliefs. Ergo. "Jumper? Is Astrology valid?"(in a reality without magic)"I cannot say that it is." would be a valid response, as would "I do not believe so." or "Probably not." but so would "That is for you to decide." or "Stop asking stupid questions." or "What do you think?" or even "My god, this parachute is a backpack!"(Yes, you can still tell jokes or make snide asides as long as a reasonable person wouldn't believe what you're saying.)
Cannot Into Drop (CID) [Special: You cannot be a Drop-In... ever. In exchange, you gain a 50% discount on any origin that costs more than 100 and can take any 100 CP or less origin for free. If the jump has 2 origin types (Race and Occupation perhaps), this applies to only whichever one has the drop-in option for that jump. If the Jump has no Drop-in options or only drop-in options, this has no effect. You may treat any two Drop-In perks or items as if they were discounted for you in each jump. If any origin can be made drop-in, you get one discount from an origin you didn't take and may not use the drop-in toggle. Chain-Only. Putting this on Hiatus costs you 300 CP.
No Access [300: You have no access to your Warehouse for the entire length of the jump. If this is a Chain Drawback, you may add the base 150 Warehouse points to your Body Mod, as you have no Warehouse. Everything that respawns is delivered to you by parcel post. You can bring anything you like into the jump at the beginning (as long as you have it in your possession already), but nothing past that, including Companions. You cannot take this with other warehouse drawbacks. No Hiatus. Must keep for10 jumps or more before Revoking.]
I felt a frown form on my face as instead of a document explaining the world that I was going into I was shown something called NuBee's Bodymod Supplement with 1150 Body Points. I started out going over the first section which were all free my new body would be cleansed of everything not of the void along with becoming a perfectly average male. Allowing me to keep my gender to what I desired was nice and I was able to follow that up with becoming completely average in shape and six no matter my age. Then I saw my body statistics laid out before me. After reviewing the list I decided that I would spend the extra hundred fifty points I have on my stamina giving me perpetual stamina something that will not stand out too much but will be very useful in any world that I end up going into.
[Cleansed (Free/Optional) - "Physical and mental defects such as nearsightedness, depression, or asthma are cleansed upon taking this supplement. In other words, you will be left an entirely healthy human caring nothing but what your fellow man cares about like air, water, and sleep."
Greener Grass (Free) - "Always envied the taller people in your life? Wish you weren't so scrawny compared to those muscle men in the movies? Generally discontent with the body you were born with? By opting into this option, you may grant yourself a truly average body to work on. You will be of average height for your age, of average weight for your age, and given shoulders and hips neither especially broad nor narrow. You will sort of look like your old self, just differently shaped now. This will be the body you're using from here on."
Sex (Free) - "Wonder what it's like on the other side? Feel like you don't have the right equipment? With this freebie you can change your sex to desired, man, woman, or other. Your general body type and adjustments will be roughly translated from there."
Strength - "Strength, your basic ability to exert force with the muscles of your body. Lifting, pushing, punching, kicking, and other basic abilities rely on it. Even running is just a matter of pushing off the ground harder. What could be more vital?"
Tier 2: Average (-) - "Your muscles are average. You could actually help a friend out with moving, or hold your own in a fight if you actually knew how. Congrats on passing P.E."
Stamina - "Stamina, not so much your ability to exert yourself as much as the ability to keep doing it. It's how quickly fatigue builds and your ability to deal with it. How long can you keep going before you need to sit down and take a load off?"
Tier 5: Perpetual (150 BP) - "When do you stop? You classify as having superhuman stamina, capable of running marathons, then celebrating with a victory lap through the night. Sleep is a sometimes need."
Agility - "Agility, or how much control you can exert over your body in other words. It's your hand-eye coordination; your ability to balance yourself on tightropes or otherwise. To what amount of refinement and grace can you claim to possess?"
Tier 2: Average (-) - "An average level of agility. People could actually trust you with basic tasks and not expect you to choke. You can probably get acceptable results in some videogames."
Flexibility - "Flexibility, the ability to stretch, bend, and contort your body. The elasticity of your skin and ligaments is often something settled by the circumstances of one's birth, but diet and training can increase such things. We'll be skipping you past that process."
Tier 2: Average (-) - "You have average flexibility. Maybe you can touch your toes. Maybe you can do some light calisthenics. Stretching as a warmup is reasonable instead of arduous."
Reflexes "Reflexes, your ability to react according to external stimuli. This stat governs both your ability to think quickly, and ability to act quickly. Whether it's dodging danger or dissing someone on the spot, your proficiency lies here."
Tier 2: Average (-) - "Your reflexes are average. If someone goes 'Think fast!' and lobs something your way, you can probably catch it sometimes. You can sometimes crack off a clever one-liner."
Intelligence - "Intelligence, your encompassing ability to learn, understand, and apply information. Think of it as your brain's processing power, and the higher it goes the more complex the task you're ability to potentially handle. Experience is sometimes still necessary however."
Tier 2: Average (-) - "Your intelligence is average. Probably averaged B's in school, which is perfectly fine. You're no rocket scientist but no one will be calling you stupid, unless they're a dick."
Charisma - "Charisma, the force of your personality and the ability to apply it. It is that almost indescribable ability to ply others to your wants. It is the skill with words, stance, and action that allows you to impress yourself upon others. Can your tongue be called silver, or lead?"
Tier 2: Average (-) - "Your charisma is average. Friends aren't impossible to get. Romance is achievable. Like, you can hold a steady conversation without messing things up."]
With my body's basics all delt with I moved onto the next section which was all about how I would like my body modified. Due to my being a bit of a pervert in my previous life I decided to pick up a level of Endowment for fifty points followed up with a level of Fluid Production so that my enlarged member will have plenty of seed to spread for another fifty points proving to myself that Maat did not overwrite my own perverse nature. Before moving on from my body modifications I also picked up a level of Perfume, Rejuvenation, Grooming, and Diet each costing me fifty points bringing my total down to seven hundred as I moved on to the next section.
[Endowment (50BP) - "For one purchase of Endowment, you may adjust the scale of as many sexual - or secondary sexual - features of your body up or down as you like within normal human ranges. Give yourself tongue for days, the package of a porn star, or enough butt to kill a person.
Large equipment will have supporting anatomy alterations made to prevent health complications. Redirected blood flow to swollen areas isn't enough to make you pass out. Gigantic chests won't give you spinal issues even if you can still feel the weight."
Rejuvenation (50BP) - "Scars, balding, missing teeth and nails, a person's body can undergo a lot of superficial damage and degradation over the course of their lives. Wouldn't you love it if that problem could just go away? What sounds like an infomercial now becomes possible.
With a purchase of Rejuvenation, superficial damage or degradation to your body will naturally heal in time. Get your jaw bones knocked loose from a nasty punch? Give it a couple weeks. Spontaneously combust? After your stay in the hospital ends you should be looking good in no time. No burn scars, hair back in order, it's going to be just wonderful.
As a free addition, you can selectively toggle the effect in order to keep some sort of scar you think is especially cool looking, or blend in better with the general public who can't regrow teeth."
Grooming (50BP) - "If you've ever seen someone with absolutely gorgeous hair or flawless skin, there's a whole routine and regiment that goes into maintaining such things. Money, time, a variety of products, discipline, it's all needed if you're wanting to look your best. But what if it wasn't?
Your body acquires a maintenance effect as if you frequently visit a spa retreat. Your hair is always voluminous and silky. Your teeth are shiny, white, and straight. Your skin is soft and smooth everywhere it needs to be, and pimples will be a thing of the past.
You might still get filthy and need a bath, but good god do you clean up well. As an added bonus, you can erase facial hair and body hair, or stall out its growth to a specific length in case you like that light stubble look and hate shaving."
Perfume (50BP) - "With a single purchase of Perfume, you may erase all bad body odor such as that sweat and bacteria scent from heavy workouts. You can still smell because of other reasons like a stink bomb or skunk blast, but that's not really a you problem. Additionally, stink doesn't cling as hard to you as other people, so even the above problems are comparatively easy to remedy. Your natural scent is also highlighted and pronounced, with those pheromones no longer competing with other smells to impress the opposite sex.
Fluid Production (50BP) - "Your body's ability to produce one or more fluids - as designated at purchase - has increased drastically. Increase tear production such that even on driest day of the year your eyes won't get itchy. Donate blood on the regular. Become a more than capable nursemaid.
Your body is still reliant on hydration of course, however the conversion rate allows for much greater returns than what is logically possible. Loss of other resources through the production of these fluids is no greater than before either. Drink as much water as the next person and you're fine. As a free added bonus you may scale back the production of any chosen fluid to lesser or more human levels, and scale it back to maximum production at a later date."
Diet (50BP) - "Your digestive system, metabolism, and daily nutritional requirements have been optimized. Not only can you more efficiently convert fat and foodstuffs into energy, but you can go longer with less food, and remain healthy with less good food.
Waste production is drastically lower than what it was before. It's much easier to stay thin and burn weight with the lightest of exercise. Letting yourself go is now something of an active effort, though if you bought other purchases to make yourself look a certain way, those will take priority.]
The next section was Mental Modification which I easily found three that would benefit me greatly although each cost me a hundred points. The first came in the form of Strength which would help me keep myself motivated and not let doubt cloud my judgement. The second was Tolerance which would give me the ability to withstand torture and pain in general something I would not mind not needing to worry about. The third and final purchase in this section was Memory giving me the perfect thing in the form of an eidetic memory so that everything I know now will be retained and I will not forget anything I learn in the future. Those purchases left me with four hundred points as I moved into the final section of the document.
[Strength (100BP) - "Do you ever think to yourself that you could do better, than just don't? Could you have started eating better or made room for a few more minutes of exercise a day? Could you have stuck up for yourself when others looked down on you? Do you want to change that?
On purchase you'll find yourself more determined, more disciplined, more willful. This allows you to push through feelings of doubt or insecurity to follow your actual wants. This allows you to restrain yourself where you may otherwise be indulgent to follow your actual needs. This is strength, of will and of character."
Tolerance (100BP) - "Pain is a wedge. When driven in, it can make the wisest and strongest of us second guess their decisions or make simple mistakes. It is the natural mechanism that teaches us what is dangerous, and what is a threat to our being. We can help you surpass pain.
Tolerance is a mental mod that allows you to much better deal with pain in two parts. The first mildly dulls your sense of pain without removing the sensation of it. The second allows you to more easily tolerate pain while keeping your head.
While you may still feel pain and acknowledge it, it will be more difficult for it to control you. No longer will pain so easily dominate your life and decisions. Now you can take risks that others shy away from simply because you've built up some tolerance
Memory (100BP) - "The mind is a tricky thing, and what it decides is important enough to keep and what's not can be fickle. Who hasn't gone looking for an item that was in hand the entire time? Would you like to stop forgetting and start remembering? Let's do some brain training then.
On purchase you'll be granted an eidetic memory. This will allow you to vividly recall prior information or experiences with ease. Sights, sounds, smells, and sensations all come rushing back to you when you need them. Your memory won't degrade even with vast passage of time either."]
The final section of the document was Character Perks which made me regret spending so much on my stamina for just a little bit as I did not have enough for all that I wanted. I picked up two levels of Disinfect first to go along with my perfume allowing me to always be clean. I then snagged Polar Bear Club so that I would not need to worry about the temperature wherever I ended up. Then I let my perverted nature show through in the taking of Superior Breeding allowing me to have sex with any female that I encounter and impregnate them. To help keep my libido I took Restraint which would also protect me from spreading my seed to those I do not desire to impregnate unless something supernatural forces the issue. With all of my points spent I close down the window and feel myself being torn to bits and reformed into my new body.
[Disinfect (50BP50BP) - "The world is filled with filthy and you would like to kindly reject that reality. Frequent showers, hand sanitizer, washing your hands after touching every little thing, what else can you do to run away? Worry not my germophobic friend, we have an offer too good to refuse.
Your body's natural state is now 'squeaky clean.' Filth and grime simply can't seem to stick, and even a light rinse can restore you to a state once only achievable by hours of scrubbing and bathing. Only the most persistent of filth can stick to you for long, and only good bacteria have any ability to hold purchase.
A second purchase of Disinfect would extend this convenience to your personal clothing. Go out, exercise in some old sweats, go straight to bed, and they'd come out smelling like they came fresh from the laundry. Sweat, mud, and grass stains just melt away."
Polar Bear Club (100BP) - "Your body has acquired greater tolerance for various temperature extremes. You could go skinny dipping in the arctic, and sunbathe in the Sahara, and you'll be more or less just fine probably.
That said this isn't strict immunity to temperature. Dunk yourself in lava and you'll burn like any other organism and being frozen is still a recipe for frost bite. If nothing else can deal with it then neither can you, obviously. Now you can finally drink freshly brewed coffee though."
Superior Breeding (100BP) - "Love can find you in strange places you may have never expected. Perhaps you found it not in humanity, but in some sort of alien, or an unusual lizard person from deep in the jungle. Providing you're still man and woman however, the concerns of family are present.
No longer! Now, providing your parts mostly match up then babies can be made. Your hybrid child will display traits of their parents and no unusual birth defects from the process. Pregnancy, whether it's yours or your partners, is no more dangerous than usual either.
In addition to hybridization being possible, your virility/fertility - physical sex depending – is also greatly enhanced. Even should your partner be sterile/infertile - physical sex depending - you can procreate as well as if they weren't. "
Restraint (100BP) - "You now have power to enforce your will upon your various sexual and associated processes. Unless desired, your resistance to seduction or time wasting horniness may as well be a thing of the past as you shut down your libido.
Being in the mood or not is down to an active choice. Normally involuntary actions within the process may also be suppressed through willpower. Your virility and/or fertility can now be toggled as desired making contraception needless. Does little to protect against supernatural influences."]
With my body setup I felt myself be reformed into my new form before a mess of new screens appeared before my new eyes and started shuffling themselves around causing me to worry as I had no clue what they were going to stop on and I would need to be honest with everyone that I meet in this new world. I was less than pleased by the music that I heard as a theme song that I had not heard in awhile when the Jumpchain document finally came into view as it the theme song for the Star Wars Universe. It looked like I was starting out with Star Wars: The Clone Wars as my first encounter in this new system. I quickly accepted the New Cannon for the version of the universe that I was going to experience as it held my favorite Togruta. I then learned that I was going to be starting in the Outer Rim and I choose Mandalore over Dathomir as I was still a male and I wanted nothing to do with the society of witches who enslaved men.
[New Canon: A slightly different story than the one you're used to. Many of the events leading up to the Clone Wars are still but the war itself will now take a radically different course. Several dozen important individuals have also been lost, transformed, replaced or brought back from the dead, you'll even encounter entirely new people who'll change the course of history. Probably the most importance difference this timeline has from the original is the existence of a young girl named Ahsoka Tano who will become Anakin Skywalker's apprentice during the Clone Wars.
Mandalore: The cultural and historical home world of the Mandalorians. Mandalore has recently renounced its old warrior ways, and the government is now a strong promoter of peace, neutrality, and progression.]
Next came my background which was an easy choice for me as I was entering into the Star Wars Universe my background was going to be Force Sensitive which cost me a hundred points due to my cannot into drop discount. I was then able to choose my allegiance for this world and I decided on being an independent to keep myself out of the battle for the stars at the start of the jump. My next choice was on what species I would be for my time here in the Star Wars Universe and the first thing I eliminated was Twi'lek as the males were not shown in a good light. I eventually choose to be a simple human to keep myself safe from the issue of not knowing what to do with myself.
[Force Sensitive [100cp: At a very young age you were discovered to have a strong connection to the force and at some point you were trained to use your abilities. Whether you were instructed and taken in by the Jedi Order, a dark Jedi, your parents, the Nightsisters, or someone else is entirly up to you.
Independent: Just you and whatever friends, allies and resources you already have. You will also be able to ally with any other independent groups or individuals you encounter.
Human [Free: No different from the people you know, humans are the dominant species in the galaxy as well as the most numerous. They're responsible for countless social, political, economic and technological innovations and they're typically the most gifted with the Force.]
The next section was perks and I could pick up two perks or items from the Civilian section as that was the Drop-In option for this Jump so I spent four hundred fifty points on getting two of the most powerful options for my time here in the Star Wars Universe. They were Midichlorian Detector to find any force users near to me and Anomaly to prevent force powers from hurting me to badly. Since I only had fifty points left I could not buy anything else from the perks section so I moved on to the next section but not before I received Melee Training for free.
[Midichlorian Detector [150cp: You gain the ability to detect nearby Force users and know immediately how powerful they are. If you decide to Move-On at the end of the jump, you'll be able to use this ability on nearby psionics.
Anomaly [300cp] (Discount: Civilian): You can use your true nature to your advantage. Force powers will no longer have any affect against you, Force lighting will simply tickle and Farsight will be unable to locate you. This ability will also protect you against psionic attacks if you decide to Move-On and you'll even be able to cancel out nearby psionic powers if you focus on them.
Melee Training [200cp] (Free: Force Sensitive): Vibroblades, lightsabers, if it's a bladed or blunt weapon you can wield it with deadly proficiency. Keep in mind however that while theoretically any can use a lightsaber, only a Force User can use it to its full potential.]
With my remaining fifty points I moved into the Force Powers section and was able to receive three perks for free as long as they were under 200cp each. I saw a power that I wanted but I would need to wait in order to receive it as it cost too much for me right now so I went with the easiest path to power after getting my starting powers I snagged Psychometry for free. I then grabbed the powers to deal with both people and droids as they were what made up the two sides that were fighting in the coming battles in the form of Ionize and Force Stasis each free. After that I spent my last fifty starting points on Comprehend Speech to allow me to talk to anyone that I meet.
[Starting Powers [Free: Basic Force powers that come natural to every Force user. (Telepathy, Telekinesis, Force empathy, Force speed, Farsight, Force stealth, Force sight and Mind trick.)
Psychometry [Free: A mental technique that will allow you to pick up impressions and traces of information about an object touched and the events that have surrounded it. This power allows the user to view events as if they were there, including the sights, sounds, and feelings, both emotional and physical, that the wielder of the object experienced.
Ionize [Free: The ability to disable and possibly even destroy droids and other electronic devices. This power is used similarly to Force lightning, in that the users fire bolts of electricity from their hands.
Force Stasis [Free: You gain the ability to temporarily paralyze people. Organic beings affected by this power will be unable to move for a few seconds. With practice you can increase the amount time people are stunned, and the number of people affected at once.
Comprehend Speech [50cp: The ability to understand any complex language you hear. This power will not allow you to understand primitive languages, such as anything spoken by tribal or isolated peoples, and you will not automatically learn how to speak the language you hear.]
With all of my points spent I moved into the Items section and was only able to pick up a single Lightsaber as it came free for me being a Force Sensitive. I quickly customized my blade into a long grip with a curve towards the end of the hilt allowing for both a two handed or one handed grip as I planned to master the first three forms of lightsaber combat. The blade was a white color as I had planned for it to be a purified crystal that I had previously found in my life.
[Lightsaber [Free: A single bladed lightsaber of your own custom color and design. In case you don't know what a lightsaber is, it's essentially just a metal cylinder that can project a blade of solid plasma capable of cutting through almost anything.
I proceeded into the complication section even knowing that I could not get points from any of the drawbacks I still choose to look at them and found one that seemed perfect for me as it would allow me to actually work through the events of the story in the form of the entire prequel trilogy.
[The Prequel Trilogy [0cp: Instead of remaining here for the duration of the Clone Wars you'll now have to go through the entire series of events witnessed in the prequels. You arrive at your starting location on the 1st day of the invasion of Naboo and leave on the date that Luke & Leia Skywalker are supposed to be born.]
With all of that out of the way I allowed myself to be pulled into this new universe and get on with my new life as a force user out amongst the start of the events leading up to the Clone Wars.
Author's Endnote:I know that there is a ton of Jumpchain information in this chapter but that is how it must be as it is all of the starting information.