What if naruto had the eyes of foresight?
Hey, this is my first fanfic and I dont know what I'm doing so if anyone could give me any tips then I'd appreciate it. I do not own naruto. Let's get into it. Also, iruka dies in this.
We are going to start with when naruto failed the academy exam and mitsuki tricked him.
A young boy sitting in the middle of a clearing cheered as he had finally mastered the shadow clone jutsu. The on jutsu that had caused him the despair of failing the gennin exam 3 times. The boy's appearance was an orange and blue flap jaked with matching cargo pants, he had blonde hair that was as bright as the sun, his most noticeable feature was the 3 whisker marks on each cheek. The boy was called naruto uzumaki he was shunned for his entire life but no one would tell him why because of the third hokages law. Unknowing to him he would learn the reason why in a few minutes. A brown-haired chunnin named iruka walked into the clearing "there you are naruto, I'm going to need that scroll your holding" "no" naruto interrupted "this is my only hope of passing." "Do you even know what your holding and why do you even have it" "I have it because of the secret exam." "What secret exam naruto?" "Mitsuki-sensei told me that there was a secret exam to pass, steal this scroll and learn one jutsu from it." Iruka had realized that mitsuki wanted naruto to be executed. "There is no secret exam mitsuki just wants you dead." Mitsuki walked into the clearing at this moment. "Well iruka, I didn't expect you to find this so fast." Mitsuki threw a large shuriken faster than narutos eyes could see. "die demon" mitsuki shouted. Iruka moving faster than he ever had before defended naruto with his back. "Why do you defend the demon iruka? He killed your family." "Run naruto. You are right mitsuki the nine-tailed demon did kill my family." Naruto overheard this and his eyes began to burn, he could not open them for several seconds. "But naruto is not the demon he is the jailer who protects us from it." naruto hearing this put the pieces together and figured out why he was hated and began to tear up. He began to cry in rage as he watched iruka get stabbed in the heart. He was not in the right mental state and unconditionally used his new eyes powers. Mitsuki saw naruto and was terrified when he saw narutos eyes they were black with blue irises and a yellow star for each pupil.
His eyes allow him to see what moves his opponent's movements would be he could see farther into the future the more chakra he put into his eyes. He launched himself at mitsuki and in response, mitsuki threw 20 shurikens at naruto unknown to mitsuki naruto had foreseen this and twisted his body in a way that kept all momentum and avoided all shuriken. He made 5 shadow clones because that was all he needed to defeat mitsuki with his newfound power. Mitsuki fought in vain as naruto could see every move that he would make 3 seconds before it happened. Mitsuki was defeated by an academy student. Unknown to naruto the hokage had watched all of this unveil.
Because iruka is now dead it has to be the hokage to promote naruto.
Hiruzen and his anbu team arrived and then the anbu cleared the bodies and hiruzen comforted naruto. " Naruto Uzumaki I Hiruzen sarutobi hear by promote you to the rank of gennin." Hiruzen gives naruto a black headband. Naruto had deactivated his dojutsu and broke down in tears as he realized what he had done he had his first kill at the age of 12 and watched his sensei get stabbed in the heart. This trauma would most likely stay with him for life and serve to be his motivation to become stronger. As he and hiruzen returned to the village hiruzen gave naruto advice on how to get over his first kill and allowed naruto to stay with him for the night.
Considering I had a favorite in the first part of chapter 1, I decided to post the full story.
At hiruzens house, naruto met a man named Asuma who was hiruzens son and a kid called konohamaru who was hiruzens grandson. Asuma is a very chill guy who was welcoming to naruto and was one of the few people who knows the difference between a scroll and the kunai sealed inside of it. Whilst having dinner konohamaru made 11 attempts to assassinate hiruzen, each and every time konohamaru tripped and blamed it on naruto even though he was just trying to enjoy his dinner and didn't even move a muscle. Asuma picked up on Naruto's gloomy mood and asked hiruzen what was up. Hiruzen proceeded to quietly explain what had happened to asuma. Asuma just gave a nod of understanding.
When it was time to sleep naruto had major struggle as every time he closed his eyes what happened earlier that day replayed in his head. He had ended up crying himself to sleep.
The next day.
Naruto showed up to the academy and as in cannon everyone thought that he shouldn't be there but this time naruto stayed silent as he still had the trauma of his first kill. Everyone was surprised as they expected naruto to make and attempt to fight back. Right now only naruto knew that iruka had been killed. An anbu with purple hair and a cat mask walked in and explained to the class what had happened last night and everyone was a little scared of naruto, the anbu also said the teams and sakura pretended to cry being on a team with naruto and made fun of ino when sakura
got on a team with sasuke.
The teams are the same as cannon.
Unlike in cannon kakashi showed up on time because hiruzen forced him to.
Kakshi lead the others to the roof and made them introduce themselves. This time naruto isn't as eccentric as in cannon.
I cant be bothered writing what they said.
So blah blah blah meet at training ground seven at 8 am sharp.
The next day
So sakura, gloomy kid and naruto show up on time and are annoyed that kakashi isn't there luckily he is only 30 minutes late. hiruzen was using his magical orb to see this and made a mental note to send kakshi to ibiki later on. Kakashi knows about naruto and so when they do pass he will be more focused on actually training them than starig at a red rock for 3 hours. If you know you know.
The exam is the same as cannon. Naruto is confident that he can fight kakshi with his eyes and activates them he puts enough chakra to see 5 seconds into the future. He doges all of kakshi's attacks but because of kakashi's superior speed naruto is unable to get the bells. Sasuke comes out seeing that naruto can compete with kakashi so sakuse tells naruto that they have to work together to get the bells and explains that when they distract kakshi sakura will grab the bells. This went perfectly until sakura being sakura times her grab wrong (idk how, i just dont like sakura.) Kakshi says that they all pass because the true meaning of the test is teamwork. Sasuke found a respect for naruto in that moment and likewise for naruto.
Tell me if this is long enough and if not i will make chapter 2 longer.
