Author's Note:I have decided to change things up as the last two stories I wrote were tool sexual too quickly and they would have violated the terms of service. I pulled them down on my own as a result and decided to start writing a new story that is still based on the Weight of The Quill system.
Point Progression:
Fast: 100CP per 500 words
Normal: 100CP per 1000 words
Gradual: 100CP per 2000 words
Slow: 100CP per 5000 words
Purchase Method:
Normal: Purchases may be made freely based on the points accumulated
Sequential: Purchases are made in order from least to most expensive
Random: Every 100 points randomly select an entry from the list. It must be purchased if sufficient points are available.
Purchase Frequency:
Immediate: Purchases are made as close to the target wordcount as possible.
Trigger: Purchases are made at a specific point in the story (Sleep, Downtime, Meditation, ect.)
Literary: Purchases are made between chapters or entries.
My Story shall have normal point progression and normal purchase method with a triggered purchase frequency. The points shall be earned with every thousand words in character in the worlds that my jumper visits that I write and may be spent when the character sleeps of his own volition so no being knocked unconscious. With that out of the way onto the story.
{Divine Speech}
[Jumpchain Text]
"Speech"
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Chapter One: The Start of a New Jumper
I woke with a start as I felt something slamming into my body. Opening my eyes I saw that I was alone in a void but something felt off as I knew that something had hit me while I had been resting enjoying the nothingness of the void that was my afterlife. Then a ringing in my head brought my attention to back to the present with annoyance from whatever had hit me and woke me up. After a few minutes the ringing that I had been hearing finally cut out and settled into a normal voice which held plenty of power behind it. {Sorry about that fella but we are in a bit of a rush to get out of here before the admins comes looking for us.}After that quick speech I felt myself being dragged through the void into a small opening which was filled with light and felt hot on my ethereal body. {Now that we are on our way I can let you know that you are being reborn as I needed someone from the void to escape those annoying Admins who want me to follow their rules. So to get them of my tail I will be sending you along on a Jumpchain with my powers while I hibernate in your soul. You will be journeying through various worlds but to earn perks from the worlds that you visit you will need to spent time interacting with the actual plot of those worlds. I have managed to tweak the system so that you will have a bit better time than the original system as it had only a random selection after the user filled in the requirements to move onto a new document. As for you once you have spent a total of a thousand points that you have earned in that world you will be given a choice to spend another thousand points in that document, spend a thousand points in a random document from that universe or move onto a new universe. Unfortunately due to your time in the void I will not be able to start you with a background which will let you blend into the world seamlessly and you will not be attached to any other worldly spaces until you are stronger. You are going to get an extra four hundred point boost when entering into each world as a result of your void body.}I processed that information before hoping that I was being sent to a world that I could deal with as I did not want to have trouble with this new experience.
[Soft Stranger [100 CP: You must always be a Drop-In.
No Access [300 CP: You have no access to your Warehouse for the entire length of the jump. If this is a Chain Drawback, you may add the base 150 Warehouse points to your Body Mod, as you have no Warehouse. Everything that respawns is delivered to you by parcel post. You can bring anything you like into the jump at the beginning (as long as you have it in your possession already), but nothing past that, including Companions. You cannot take this with other warehouse drawbacks. No Hiatus. Must keep for10 jumps or more before Revoking.]
I felt a frown form on my face as instead of a document explaining the world that I was going into I was shown something called NuBee's Bodymod Supplement with 1150 Body Points. I started out going over the first section which were all free my new body would be cleansed of everything not of the void along with becoming a perfectly average male. Allowing me to keep my gender to what I desired was nice and I was able to follow that up with becoming completely average in shape and six no matter my age. Then I saw my body statistics laid out before me. After reviewing the list I decided that I would spend the extra hundred fifty points I have on my stamina giving me perpetual stamina something that will not stand out too much but will be very useful in any world that I end up going into.
[Cleansed (Free/Optional) - "Physical and mental defects such as nearsightedness, depression, or asthma are cleansed upon taking this supplement. In other words, you will be left an entirely healthy human caring nothing but what your fellow man cares about like air, water, and sleep."
Greener Grass (Free) - "Always envied the taller people in your life? Wish you weren't so scrawny compared to those muscle men in the movies? Generally discontent with the body you were born with? By opting into this option, you may grant yourself a truly average body to work on. You will be of average height for your age, of average weight for your age, and given shoulders and hips neither especially broad nor narrow. You will sort of look like your old self, just differently shaped now. This will be the body you're using from here on."
Sex (Free) - "Wonder what it's like on the other side? Feel like you don't have the right equipment? With this freebie you can change your sex to desired, man, woman, or other. Your general body type and adjustments will be roughly translated from there."
Strength - "Strength, your basic ability to exert force with the muscles of your body. Lifting, pushing, punching, kicking, and other basic abilities rely on it. Even running is just a matter of pushing off the ground harder. What could be more vital?"
Tier 2: Average (-) - "Your muscles are average. You could actually help a friend out with moving, or hold your own in a fight if you actually knew how. Congrats on passing P.E."
Stamina - "Stamina, not so much your ability to exert yourself as much as the ability to keep doing it. It's how quickly fatigue builds and your ability to deal with it. How long can you keep going before you need to sit down and take a load off?"
Tier 5: Perpetual (150 BP) - "When do you stop? You classify as having superhuman stamina, capable of running marathons, then celebrating with a victory lap through the night. Sleep is a sometimes need."
Agility - "Agility, or how much control you can exert over your body in other words. It's your hand-eye coordination; your ability to balance yourself on tightropes or otherwise. To what amount of refinement and grace can you claim to possess?"
Tier 2: Average (-) - "An average level of agility. People could actually trust you with basic tasks and not expect you to choke. You can probably get acceptable results in some videogames."
Flexibility - "Flexibility, the ability to stretch, bend, and contort your body. The elasticity of your skin and ligaments is often something settled by the circumstances of one's birth, but diet and training can increase such things. We'll be skipping you past that process."
Tier 2: Average (-) - "You have average flexibility. Maybe you can touch your toes. Maybe you can do some light calisthenics. Stretching as a warmup is reasonable instead of arduous."
Reflexes "Reflexes, your ability to react according to external stimuli. This stat governs both your ability to think quickly, and ability to act quickly. Whether it's dodging danger or dissing someone on the spot, your proficiency lies here."
Tier 2: Average (-) - "Your reflexes are average. If someone goes 'Think fast!' and lobs something your way, you can probably catch it sometimes. You can sometimes crack off a clever one-liner."
Intelligence - "Intelligence, your encompassing ability to learn, understand, and apply information. Think of it as your brain's processing power, and the higher it goes the more complex the task you're ability to potentially handle. Experience is sometimes still necessary however."
Tier 2: Average (-) - "Your intelligence is average. Probably averaged B's in school, which is perfectly fine. You're no rocket scientist but no one will be calling you stupid, unless they're a dick."
Charisma - "Charisma, the force of your personality and the ability to apply it. It is that almost indescribable ability to ply others to your wants. It is the skill with words, stance, and action that allows you to impress yourself upon others. Can your tongue be called silver, or lead?"
Tier 2: Average (-) - "Your charisma is average. Friends aren't impossible to get. Romance is achievable. Like, you can hold a steady conversation without messing things up."]
With my body's basics all delt with I moved onto the next section which was all about how I would like my body modified. Due to my being a bit of a pervert in my previous life I decided to pick up a level of Endowment for fifty points followed up with a level of Fluid Production so that my enlarged member will have plenty of seed to spread for another fifty points. Before moving on from my body modifications I also picked up a level of Perfume, Rejuvenation, Grooming, and Diet each costing me fifty points bringing my total down to seven hundred as I moved on to the next section.
[Endowment (50 BP) - "For one purchase of Endowment, you may adjust the scale of as many sexual - or secondary sexual - features of your body up or down as you like within normal human ranges. Give yourself tongue for days, the package of a porn star, or enough butt to kill a person.
Large equipment will have supporting anatomy alterations made to prevent health complications. Redirected blood flow to swollen areas isn't enough to make you pass out. Gigantic chests won't give you spinal issues even if you can still feel the weight."
Rejuvenation (50 BP) - "Scars, balding, missing teeth and nails, a person's body can undergo a lot of superficial damage and degradation over the course of their lives. Wouldn't you love it if that problem could just go away? What sounds like an infomercial now becomes possible.
With a purchase of Rejuvenation, superficial damage or degradation to your body will naturally heal in time. Get your jaw bones knocked loose from a nasty punch? Give it a couple weeks. Spontaneously combust? After your stay in the hospital ends you should be looking good in no time. No burn scars, hair back in order, it's going to be just wonderful.
As a free addition, you can selectively toggle the effect in order to keep some sort of scar you think is especially cool looking, or blend in better with the general public who can't regrow teeth."
Grooming (50 BP) - "If you've ever seen someone with absolutely gorgeous hair or flawless skin, there's a whole routine and regiment that goes into maintaining such things. Money, time, a variety of products, discipline, it's all needed if you're wanting to look your best. But what if it wasn't?
Your body acquires a maintenance effect as if you frequently visit a spa retreat. Your hair is always voluminous and silky. Your teeth are shiny, white, and straight. Your skin is soft and smooth everywhere it needs to be, and pimples will be a thing of the past.
You might still get filthy and need a bath, but good god do you clean up well. As an added bonus, you can erase facial hair and body hair, or stall out its growth to a specific length in case you like that light stubble look and hate shaving."
Perfume (50 BP) - "With a single purchase of Perfume, you may erase all bad body odor such as that sweat and bacteria scent from heavy workouts. You can still smell because of other reasons like a stink bomb or skunk blast, but that's not really a you problem. Additionally, stink doesn't cling as hard to you as other people, so even the above problems are comparatively easy to remedy. Your natural scent is also highlighted and pronounced, with those pheromones no longer competing with other smells to impress the opposite sex.
Fluid Production (50 BP) - "Your body's ability to produce one or more fluids - as designated at purchase - has increased drastically. Increase tear production such that even on driest day of the year your eyes won't get itchy. Donate blood on the regular. Become a more than capable nursemaid.
Your body is still reliant on hydration of course, however the conversion rate allows for much greater returns than what is logically possible. Loss of other resources through the production of these fluids is no greater than before either. Drink as much water as the next person and you're fine. As a free added bonus you may scale back the production of any chosen fluid to lesser or more human levels, and scale it back to maximum production at a later date."
Diet (50 BP) - "Your digestive system, metabolism, and daily nutritional requirements have been optimized. Not only can you more efficiently convert fat and foodstuffs into energy, but you can go longer with less food, and remain healthy with less good food.
Waste production is drastically lower than what it was before. It's much easier to stay thin and burn weight with the lightest of exercise. Letting yourself go is now something of an active effort, though if you bought other purchases to make yourself look a certain way, those will take priority.]
The next section was Mental Modification which I easily found three that would benefit me greatly although each cost me a hundred points. The first came in the form of Strength which would help me keep myself motivated and not let doubt cloud my judgement. The second was Tolerance which would give me the ability to withstand torture and pain in general something I would not mind not needing to worry about. The third and final purchase in this section was Memory giving me the perfect thing in the form of an eidetic memory so that everything I know now will be retained and I will not forget anything I learn in the future. Those purchases left me with four hundred points as I moved into the final section of the document.
[Strength (100 BP) - "Do you ever think to yourself that you could do better, than just don't? Could you have started eating better or made room for a few more minutes of exercise a day? Could you have stuck up for yourself when others looked down on you? Do you want to change that?
On purchase you'll find yourself more determined, more disciplined, more willful. This allows you to push through feelings of doubt or insecurity to follow your actual wants. This allows you to restrain yourself where you may otherwise be indulgent to follow your actual needs. This is strength, of will and of character."
Tolerance (100 BP) - "Pain is a wedge. When driven in, it can make the wisest and strongest of us second guess their decisions or make simple mistakes. It is the natural mechanism that teaches us what is dangerous, and what is a threat to our being. We can help you surpass pain.
Tolerance is a mental mod that allows you to much better deal with pain in two parts. The first mildly dulls your sense of pain without removing the sensation of it. The second allows you to more easily tolerate pain while keeping your head.
While you may still feel pain and acknowledge it, it will be more difficult for it to control you. No longer will pain so easily dominate your life and decisions. Now you can take risks that others shy away from simply because you've built up some tolerance
Memory (100 BP) - "The mind is a tricky thing, and what it decides is important enough to keep and what's not can be fickle. Who hasn't gone looking for an item that was in hand the entire time? Would you like to stop forgetting and start remembering? Let's do some brain training then.
On purchase you'll be granted an eidetic memory. This will allow you to vividly recall prior information or experiences with ease. Sights, sounds, smells, and sensations all come rushing back to you when you need them. Your memory won't degrade even with vast passage of time either."]
The final section of the document was Character Perks which made me regret spending so much on my stamina for just a little bit as I did not have enough for all that I wanted. I picked up two levels of Disinfect first to go along with my perfume allowing me to always be clean. I then snagged Polar Bear Club so that I would not need to worry about the temperature wherever I ended up. Then I let my perverted nature show through in the taking of Superior Breeding allowing me to have sex with any female that I encounter and impregnate them. To help keep my libido I took Restraint which would also protect me from spreading my seed to those I do not desire to impregnate unless something supernatural forces the issue. With all of my points spent I close down the window and feel myself being torn to bits and reformed into my new body.
[Disinfect (100 BP) - "The world is filled with filthy and you would like to kindly reject that reality. Frequent showers, hand sanitizer, washing your hands after touching every little thing, what else can you do to run away? Worry not my germophobic friend, we have an offer too good to refuse.
Your body's natural state is now 'squeaky clean.' Filth and grime simply can't seem to stick, and even a light rinse can restore you to a state once only achievable by hours of scrubbing and bathing. Only the most persistent of filth can stick to you for long, and only good bacteria have any ability to hold purchase.
A second purchase of Disinfect would extend this convenience to your personal clothing. Go out, exercise in some old sweats, go straight to bed, and they'd come out smelling like they came fresh from the laundry. Sweat, mud, and grass stains just melt away."
Polar Bear Club (100 BP) - "Your body has acquired greater tolerance for various temperature extremes. You could go skinny dipping in the arctic, and sunbathe in the Sahara, and you'll be more or less just fine probably.
That said this isn't strict immunity to temperature. Dunk yourself in lava and you'll burn like any other organism, and being frozen is still a recipe for frost bite. If nothing else can deal with it then neither can you, obviously. Now you can finally drink freshly brewed coffee though."
Superior Breeding (100 BP) - "Love can find you in strange places you may have never expected. Perhaps you found it not in humanity, but in some sort of alien, or an unusual lizard person from deep in the jungle. Providing you're still man and woman however, the concerns of family are present.
No longer! Now, providing your parts mostly match up then babies can be made. Your hybrid child will display traits of their parents and no unusual birth defects from the process. Pregnancy, whether it's yours or your partners, is no more dangerous than usual either.
In addition to hybridization being possible, your virility/fertility - physical sex depending – is also greatly enhanced. Even should your partner be sterile/infertile - physical sex depending - you can procreate as well as if they weren't. "
Restraint (100 BP) - "You now have power to enforce your will upon your various sexual and associated processes. Unless desired, your resistance to seduction or time wasting horniness may as well be a thing of the past as you shut down your libido.
Being in the mood or not is down to an active choice. Normally involuntary actions within the process may also be suppressed through willpower. Your virility and/or fertility can now be toggled as desired making contraception needless. Does little to protect against supernatural influences."]
Once my body was reconstructed I let out a sigh as it meant the I was headed into the next world which I still did not know what it would actually be as it was not shown to me just yet. That is until I hear the iconic music from the movies which tells me I am entering the realm of Harry Potter. I quickly received my Drop-In origin which gave me an extra hundred points to spend as I will be an orphan making my family wealth impoverished.
[Drop-In (100 CP): No memory set affecting your actions. You have no family therefore no choice over family wealth, as if you were impoverished automatically. No evidence of blood status. People will likely assume you're muggle-born.
You wake up at the reception of an orphanage. After a brief conversation in which it is ascertained that you have no friends, family or memory of this world the kind lady at reception assures you that you have a place at her orphanage. She also remarks that , oddly, they have already received a letter for you and that there was a strange man in peculiar clothing asking after you earlier that day. You will stay in the orphanage during summers.]
I did not have a house yet as that would come from my sorting later but I did have five hundred points to spend on keeping myself safe in this world. With that in mind I took Dedicated to boost my mental Strength from my body mod to keep up with my magical studies even better than I normally would. Since I wanted my mind protected I picked up Occlumency as well before snagging Muggle Dueling to give myself some self-defense training. Those cost me a hundred points each and I felt would give me a good enough start in this world so I moved onto the next section of the document.
[Dedicated (100 CP): You find it much easier to study for a long period of time without getting bored. You can do a few hours of reading of even the driest material a day without ever losing focus and retain more information.
Occlumency (100 CP): Mental defenses that make it difficult to possess or penetrate your mind. You have no tells, it is impossible for others to know if you are lying to them without evidence.
Muggle Dueling (100 CP): You gain excellent fighting abilities as well as training with various weapons (both melee and firearms).]
Looking over the items section gave me plenty to think on as I would be receiving my wand later today and I knew that I was going to get a Philosopher's Stone before moving on from this world or even this document. I eventually decided to snag the Dark Arts Cache for a hundred points to have something extra to read and learn even when I move on from this world. In order to hide my new illegal books I spent my last hundred points on an Extended Mokeskin Pouch which only I can open.
[Dark Arts Cache (100 CP): A cache of around 10 ancient books of the Dark Arts. Each one restricted by both Hogwarts and the Ministry. The contents are disturbing but interesting. There are some especially unpleasant curses in these books.
1. Atlas of Endless Horizons
2. Book of Erotic Fantasy
3. Book of Exalted Deeds
4. Book of Vile Darkness
5. Demonomicon of Iggwilv
6. Fulminating Treatise
7. Grimoire Infinitus
8. Manual of Golems
9. The Grand Grimoire
10. Tome of the Stilled Tongue
Extended Mokeskin Pouch (100 CP): A pouch that can only be opened by the owner. There is as much space inside for storage as there needs to be. Opening is around 25cm2]
With that done I felt myself being flung through the rest of the corridor in the Void before slamming into an uncomfortable chair inside a small reception room.
Author's Endnote:I am aware there is a ton of Jumpchain words in this chapter but it is just the setup chapter and most other chapters will not have much in the way of Jumpchain information. So far the word count towards points has not started yet do to the yet to be named main character not being in the world yet. If you want to influence where the character is sorted then you will need to review with your thoughts and I am not opposed to any name suggestions as well. The world of Harry Potter is the cannon world up to the insertion of my OC on the twenty-fourth of July 1991. I am going to shoot for at least 4,000 words a chapter preferably aiming to get them around 5,000. For those who don't know most of the books from the Dark Arts Cache are from Dungeons and Dragons.