Hello once again. I am unsure about the time skip in the academy or should I continue the story and make it longer? If a time skip then tell me a level he will be at in reviews.
Zachary D. Reed: yes to fem haku
have hinata in harem and possibly team 7
bash sakura
make naruto realise hinata's feelings sooner
don't spam time skip and maybe give a good summary when you do
and bold and italics gamer system info
I'll try bashing Sakura but I warn you it might be bad because I am new at writing fanfictions. I did not mention this in the first chapter but I had put it in the description before and then removed it. I am only putting Hinata in harem and no Sakura, Ino, Temari, Tsunade pairing. Tsunade mainly causes Jiraiya and Tsunade pairing and Temari because she's with Shikamaru. Also, Sakura isn't getting along with Sasuke. Making Naruto realize Hinata's feelings sooner might be a stretch but i'll try, i do not want to take it too fast. I'll do the bold and italic with the game text.
Momoh123: How many chapters are out per week?
Depends on if you want the chapter long or this length, if this length i can manage 2 per week or at the very least 1 until it is finished. The story will finish slightly after naruto defeats kaguya. After that i can make a cheat version where he basically does whatever he wants.
Ryuujin96: Great work on this chapter and I enjoyed reading it. I'd like to see female Haku as well and her be paired with Naruto, either as a single pair or a harem pairing. If you choose harem, my suggestions are Fu, Tenten, and Hinata. I look forward to reading the next chapter
So fem haku and Hinata is official and it's going to be a harem. I am glad you enjoyed it :)
Also tell me if I need to change the requirements ,why and to what.
Enjoy :)
Previously:
Skill developed- Substitution lvl 1
He clicked on that too.
Substitution lvl 1
This skill can make you swap places with other objects, usually a log, depending on how much chakra you have and how much control. 10CP before 100m +100CP every 100m after 100m
He was roof hopping towards the Uchiha district.
After he arrived he walked up to sasuke who was punching a log.
"Hey sasuke i am here"
"Hn, say what you want"
"I wanted to borrow some books on the history of the clans if you got any"
"Did you not find any in the Konoha Archives?"
"Oh wait i forgot to check their" Naruto said sheepishly
"Anyways do you have any, I can check their later"
"I'll check the Uchiha archives" said sasuke who then decided to practice on his hand sign speed.
"Ok I'll see you later" said naruto and he went towards the Konoha archives
Skill developed- Tree walking
CP cost- 100/per hour
'So the clones went to train tree walking, better chakra control is good' thought naruto
He went to the archives and when he passed thro the door an old lady in her late 60s decided to stop him.
"You are not allowed here, you are not a ninja" said the lady
"I just want t-"
"NO" she raised her voice angrily
He walked out not saying anything else and his stomach growled
"Time to get some ramen i guess"
Next day-
You slept on your Rundown bed HP and CP restored 100%
Naruto yawned and woke up and abruptly slipped because of the bed-sheets that were on the floor and not on the bed.
"What the fuck did i ever do to piss the gods off" he got up and went to the bathroom and then came out 10 mins later
Got ready for the academy and suddenly a tab popped up
"Ok Naruto it's your turn to do the leaf sticking exercise" said Iruka
"Huh?" Naruto shook his head to not get distracted by the birds outside.
"I said it's your turn to do the leaf sticking exercise" repeated Iruka
"Ok Iruka-sensei" he got up and was going to leave when someone stuck their leg out and he spotted it. When he thought he was going to step over the leg in a cool fashion while looking in the guy's eyes, his left leg unbalanced and bam. He fell face first once again.
Everyone started laughing. Iruka's eyes started twitching.
"GET HERE, AND SHUT UP YOU BRATS" shouted Iruka using his big head jutsu
Naruto got there and Iruka handed him a leaf. Naruto put it on his forehead and the leaf stuck for a second and then flew away with force. Everyone started laughing again.
"You need to train more with the exercise" said Iruka
"Ok Iruka-sensei" then suddenly the bell rang signaling that the academy was over
Naruto walked home and put everything down and wondered what he wanted to do next
"Check stats" said naruto
Stats page
Uzumaki Naruto
Title- The gamer
Gender- Male
Age- 9
Rank- Konoha ninja academy 1st year student (10% academic learning boost, +25% to all exp until passed the academy
Level- 5
Exp- 200/1000
HP- 20000/20000 +100( starter health 100)
CP- 3000+ 5000=8000/8000
CC- 1% (cannot have lower than 1)
Str- 5
Spd- 30
Int- 30
Vit- 50%
Wis- 5
Luk- 50
To check skills say- Skill Page
To check bloodlines say- Bloodline page
To check Reputation page say- Reputation page
To check Cheat Codes (Locked) - to unlock it you need to finish one verse, after you finish one verse, you can use cheats in that verse after it. If you fail the first time you will never get the cheats again for that verse.
-More options will appear as you continue the journey
"Bloodline page" said naruto
Bloodline page-
You can get bloodlines within this page via spending your skill points and completing the requirement the bloodline has. (elemental requirements need to be level 20 or above)
Unlocked bloodlines-
Sharingan- the bloodline of the Uchiha clan (click the name of bloodline to find out more.)
Rinnegan- the bloodline of the legendary sage of the six paths.
Locked bloodlines-
Wood release: 0/200- Water chakra nature, Earth chakra nature, Yang- 1000 or above
Dust release: 0/200- Earth chakra nature, Fire chakra nature, Wind chakra nature
Lava release: 0/200- Earth chakra nature, Fire chakra nature
Boil release: 0/200- Water chakra nature, Fire chakra nature
Crystal release:0/200- Earth chakra nature, Fire chakra nature
Ice release:0/200- Wind chakra nature, Water chakra nature
Magnet release:0/200- Earth chakra nature, Wind chakra nature
Explosion release:0/200- Lightning chakra nature, Earth Chakra nature
Storm release:0/200- Water chakra nature, Lightning chakra nature
Scorch release:0/200- Fire chakra nature, Wind chakra nature
Steel release:0/200
Swift release:0/200
Dead bone pulse:0/200
Dark release:0/200
Adamantine chakra chains:50/200
Naruto clicked on sharingan
Sharingan-
The bloodline of the Uchiha Clan which slows down your perception of time, letting you predict your opponent's next move while active, casts Genjutsu with eye contact and can detect most Genjutsu while active, gives you an eidetic memory while active.
Evolution Mangekyou sharingan - Unlocked (click on it to learn more)
He clicked on it
Sharingan (Mangekyou version)-
Mangekyou sharingan is a stage of sharingan that is typically unlocked when feeling strong grief typically about losing someone close to the user. It is a version of the sharingan that gives you better ocular prowess than a typical 3 tomoe sharingan or as it is called a fully matured sharingan. It gives users 3 abilities that come instinctually one of them is guaranteed to be the susanoo. But it has a big downside, it eventually makes you go blind, the more you use it the faster you go blind. In this case however it is quite different because you did not unlock the Mangekyou sharingan the normal way and also having the bloodline Rinnegan is a big factor. Because of the bloodline Rinnegan, you will never go blind and you can unlock all the Mangekyou abilities but you will need to buy them like bloodlines except the susanoo. You will not have a unique ability, only the ones that already exist.
Mangekyou abilities-
Amateratsu- 0/100
Tsukuyomi- 0/100
Kamui (Ranged version)- 0/100
Kamui (Close version)- 0/100
Kotoamatsukami (10 minute cooldown version)- 0/100
Kotoamatsukami (10 years cooldown version)- 0/100
He went back to the bloodline page and clicked on the Rinnegan
Rinnegan-
The Strongest of the 3 legendary dojutsus, the eyes of a god, eyes of the Legendary sage of the six paths himself that were used to split a primordial demon god into 9, these eyes created the moon itself. These eyes hold immense power, power of a god some might say. Their abilities can be divided in 7 sections also called the 6 paths and the 7th called the outer path- click on them to learn more
Deva path
Asura path
Animal path
Naraka path
Preta path
Human path
Outer path
Deva Path (also called the God Realm or Tendo)- This path lets the user Control Gravity, it mainly has 3 abilities Shinra tensei- Heavenly subjugation of the omnipresent god also called almighty push, Bansho Tenin- Heavenly attraction of all creation also called universal pull, Chibaku Tensei- Planetary devastation and Tengai shinsei- heaven concealed also called shattered heaven
Asura path(also called Demon realm or Shurado)- This path lets the user turn their body and modify their body and make it Mechanized.
Animal path (also called animal realm or Chikushodo)- This path allows the user to summon various animals to aid them in battle. Potentially allowing them to sign more than 1 summoning contract.
Naraka path (also called hell realm or Jigokudo)- This path allows the user to summon the king of hell . It has 2 main abilities, interrogation and restoration. In the interrogation the king of hell catches the person's tongue and if they lie about any questions, suck their soul. Restoration ability allows the user to heal anyone injured by sending them to the king of hell's mouth and it chews them out fully healed. Can also store souls in it.
Preta path (also called hungry ghost realm or Gakido)- This path allows the user to absorb chakra in any from, note that absorbing Senjutsu chakra will have effects like turning your body to stone
Human path (also called human realm or Ningendo)- This path allows the user to place their hand on the opponent's head or chest and yanking their soul out of their body. Allows you to absorb the information they hold.
Outer path (also called Gedo)- This path allows the user to Revive the dead on the cost of his/her own life energy, allows the user to make the chakra receiver rods, summon the Gedo statue and manifest the chakra chains with the help of the Gedo statue.
Evolution: 6 Tomoe Rinnegan (locked)- 0/200 skill points
Requirements to unlock-
All Mangekyou sharingan abilities lvl 50 or above
Yin- 5000 or above
Yang- 5000 or above
All basic chakra natures lvl 50 or above
Sage mode: lvl 50 or above
"Ok, that's pretty easy for a 6 tomoe Rinnegan. I'll have almost all of that except probably the yin and yang levels before the fight with madara"
Naruto walked to the bed and finally fell asleep
You have slept on you run-down bed
HP and CP restored 100%
Naruto woke up from the sound of his annoying alarm clock. Went to the bathroom and came back after some time and looked in his closet to change the clothes that he had not changed for 3 days. He picked up an exact replica of the jumpsuit he was wearing and threw the one he was wearing into the dirty clothes area.
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Naruto was running top speed rooftopping while people were chasing him. Why you may ask? Simple, he had just pranked the lockers in the Anbu Headquarters to paint all the masks neon orange and their clothes neon green, so currently those Anbu were chasing him with the same clothes on. They were not allowed to hurt him or use any weapons and Jutsus and he knew it. He knew for a fact that Anbu division did not hate him, they quite liked him because he made the day interesting via his pranks, when they were not the target. So he was going top speed to hide from them.
Naruto jumped down an alley and slipped into the cardboard boxes that were there and used his camouflage Jutsu to hide from Anbu.
2 Anbus passed by him without noticing him
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He was caught by Iruka and was given detention and was given a lecture by the Hokage.
Naruto was currently walking around aimlessly and he suddenly was struck by an idea. 'I could use henge no Jutsu to enter the archives'. Then suddenly a tab opened right in front of him
Quest alert-
Enter the Konoha archives and find useful information without getting caught. Quest complete rewards- +5 Wis + 2000 exp + 5 Int +10 stealth, potentially new techniques or helpful tips.
Quest failure- 500 exp -5 stealth
Do you wish to accept the quest?
Yes
No
Naruto clicked Yes, went to an alleyway and checked if anyone was there and transformed into a random civilian who looked like a genin. He walked to the roof and started tree hopping on the roof towards the Konoha archives.
Skill Developed- Henge no Jutsu (Solid form) lvl 1
Cost- 2000CP/per hour
Naruto was confused by the solid form thing 'wasn't henge supposed to be solid?'
He went to the archives and the same old lady was there
She looked up at him and nodded
'She didn't even check my id?'
He went in and saw there was no one. dispelled the henge and made 20 shadow clones and told them to search up any book that looked interesting or helpful.
After the clones went thro everything they could, they did not find much that they did not already know and held something valuable in it except a book on the Uzumaki clan. He put it in one of the pockets of his jumpsuit. The clones dispelled.
He used the henge again and walked out of the archives thanking the lady albeit reluctantly.
He went home and dispelled the henge. He picked out the book and then their were 2 tabs
Quest alert-
Quest completed- Reward +5 Wis + 2000 exp + 5 Int +10 stealth
You have leveled up from level 5 to level 6.
"Cool"
Would you like to learn- History of the Uzumaki clan by Uchiha Madara?
Yes
No
"WHAT THE FUCK" naruto swore loudly in surprise
"Madara wrote a book about the history of the Uzumaki clan?" he clicked Yes.
The book flew up in the air
"Am I going insane?" then the book got burnt and a tab opened
Book- "History of the Uzumaki clan by Uchiha Madara" Has been added to your Game library. If you wish to read it just say library page and click on a book. Do you wish to send this information directly to your brain?
Yes
No
Naruto despite his earlier experience from information transfer clicked Yes, and regretted it right after
"SON OF A" naruto screamed in pain
It calmed down after some time but he had learned all about the Uzumaki clan that was mentioned in the book.
"Uzushiogakure? I will have to look into that, let's see, Fuinjutsu masters. I need to learn some Fuinjutsu. "Naruto went out towards the Hokage tower to talk to the Hokage about the Fuinjutsu.
"Hey Jiji" naruto shouted as he entered the office
"Oh hey Naruto, haven't seen you for some time. How have you been?" asked Sarutobi after he distracted himself from having a death stare competition with the huge pile of paperwork on his desk.
"I was here to ask you if you could help me in Fuinjutsu or teach me some cool Justu" said naruto excitedly, acting like his age.
"Lets see, i cannot help you with Justus but i can help you with the Fuinjutsu, i have a book here that is good for starters at Fuinjutsu. You can get to the next level after you demonstrate to me that you have learned everything in that book" said Sarutobi handing the book to him.
"Thanks Jiji" Naruto walked out of the office while he heard a muttering that suspiciously sounded like, "I swear they double every time I look away from them".
Naruto headed to his apartment and he learned this book too and transferred it to the brain with a scream. But this time it was less painful than before.
He was basically a Fuinjutsu beginner now. He went to his bed and fell on it as he fell asleep
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Should I add more people to the party or just keep it to Naruto and Kurama? Also i just put Kurama in the party not because he is going to change some major thing. It is just a way to say that is a possibility as well. Also, should I save Zabuza?