Let me tell you of our red rider

He has quite the story

A story all is humans share

Think about this

Did you ever hate something

Did you ever feel pain

Because this is nothing

Compared to this character

For he was tortured for 20 years

And even then it hurt

His name was Murtagh

He was born to the last of the forsworn

And was never allowed to see his mother

Or at least not as much as she should

For a wet nurse looked after him

And his father taught him

How life was unfair

For this poor boy

For the age of only 3

His father threw a sword at his son

And it cut him down his back

The only father he had

His teacher called Tornac

He learnt how to wield a sword and defend his mind

Which is more then anyone ever did

On the age he became a man

The king called for him

And wished for his service

For this boys friendship

Little did he know

The king wasn't kind

And this world he wanted was built with pain

Pain and death

Misery and loss

So he and his teacher planned to run

But only one survived

For the teacher had died

So he stole a horse and named it Tornac

And went to find this new rider

And with this he travelled the lands

And soon met the rider

A boy and a dragon fleeing dras-leona

With an injured old man

Who soon died quickly

He helped travel with this rider

They even rescued an elf

But when they reached the Varden

He told the rider his secret

For he couldn't enter the Varden

By the Urgals pushed them in

And after refusing his mind to be searched

He was locked up in a cell

He was visited by his new friend

And even the leaders daughter

But when the Urgals attacked

Well I gained my trust

And was freed from my prison

But barely a week later

I was taken prisoner by the king

But when a dragon hatched for me

My only love

I was put under a oath

As he found my true name

And tortured me behind my limits

And there I was out against my own brother

The other rider

The only hope

Many more battles

Many more deaths

I hated every time I returned

And was tortured for my failure

But soon I had to kidnap their leader

The leader of the Varden

And as she was kept capture

For the king wanted her dead

But I couldn't let her die

For the Varden would be enraged

And fight among themselves

Slowly I help try save her

And free her from this pain

But that rider came to challenge the king

When I found my true name had changed

So I used the names of names

And destroyed the kings wards

And finally my half brother

Ended the kings domain

After the crimes I committed

And the hate that was felt

I fled the lands that I called home

With only my dragon with me

My self exile began


So this has been long time coming. I feel like I am willing to do some major characters as long as they aren't Eragon/Saphira but any other character I am willing to do like Murtagh and, again, hope you enjoy these 3 chapters in one day. Merry Christmas if you read this when released. Please review.

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