Have you ever heard of Blagden
The bright white raven from heaven
The bird who can read the future
But they were never straight forward
As that's no fun
They soit out riddles on what to come
They were born as any other raven
In a nest in a tree
But when it saw an elf being defeated by an Urgal
It swooped down and pecked out its eyes
The elf was thankful and grabbed the bird a gift
A life longer then humans
Intelligence as good as elves
But no spell goes correctly
And this birds feathers became white
And it learnt to sense the future
From there it lived in Ellesmera
Watched the elf who he saved
Who turned out to be king
March with an army to fight
He watched the queen cry through many night
Elves singing to the trees to protect them
And a golden dragon and and old rider return crippled
People passed and he spoke them their riddles
For this was his favourite thing
To watch them turn from exited and glad
To confused and beaten
But the blue rider soon arrived
Accompanied by the elves princess
And often he sensed when things would start
And warn them with a simple word
He told them that their fate would happen
But never what would happen
For that happened seconds after he said it
As if he made it happen
Soon a few months later
Lord Barst tried to destroy their home
And he tried and failed to peck out his eyes
Another chance rose up
And he took one of his eyes
But in return his wing was broke
And off he went back home
The elves healed him up
But soon their queen died
And Blagden felt as if his mother was now dead
But he lived the rest of his life by the new leaders side
Spitting out riddles
And watching the riders return
I bet most people will read Blagden and get confused! How many of you forgot about the snowy raven? I think this was well constructed but it is a bit shorter due to the, well lack of story so I tried to add some more detail. If you are reading this when it is released then Merry Christmas and hope you enjoyed this and the last two chapters as my gift to you. Please review!
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