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chapter 3: living souls

and the nametag said Dave Miller on it. "Come on guys we need to go before that night guard walked his ass back". Jessica said in a whispering voice after all of them got up and walked into the door without having a flashlight on. and the only one is working is charlie flashlight. "um guys my flashlight is not working" Marla said all the flashlight are not working. "Charlie can you give me your". John said charlie hand over the flashlight to John and the light switch so be here somewhere they finally got to the light switch and turn its on and the building whole turn on.(ok first it impossible for a 80's or 90's building to turn on like that and second I'm not going to make more of them turn on the light ok and the third that building possibly not having power because how old it is but remember it's fanfiction so let's continue the story). first

the arcade room

after they get the power running and it seem to be a arcade. all the arcade stuff are on the left and the prizes center is on the rights it's the first room before the stage that you go in. Jason quickly run to the first arcade he sent his eye's on. "hey get the hell back here". Marla said run off to go get him. Charlie was forced to stay away of the arcade because it was glitching out even if she in her human body. souls and arcade don't mix long time ago a possessed animatronic and did move the possessed animatronic to a better place but it quickly became chaos and few kid got hurt and company got lawsuits and so they got a plan they put up a wall between the stage and arcade a loss of money but it worked and no one got hurt or worse. last time they turn on the power most of the light is in the stage the less is in the hallway and restrooms. charlie need to go to the restrooms so she began to walked to there. where the hell she going. "Jessica said probably to take a shit chrlton" said.

ok Marla and Jason go make base at the stage and me,chrlton and John go to in the kitchen and cook some food. "Jessica said in order. what about charlie". John said "don't you worry your girlfriend well be fine"chrlton said."hey she not my girlfriend but a friend" John said in a little red face. "come on jackasses we got food to make".(but what happen if unpossessed animatronic past the arcade ok so like what they said about going to the kitchen and cook some food. what ok how the fuck do they turn on the gas building is out of gas but how do they get gas.so how many kids got hurt like 9 or 10 maybe I don't known now. the last thing is can thay you know sleep in the arcade or something because its fnaf and the animatronic here they get quirkly all night and it very creepy if they shared that you all night long ok let get going) last

the hallway with charlie

she can finally get some peace so after she washing here hand's she began to walked at the ends of the hallway she found a room it's was call the stuff room."oooo maybe I never be in a stuff room before"charlie said after she opened the door their were a coffee table with half old cup of coffee and a sofa. "why the hell we stay here" then she forgot about the stage she past by she began to walked back but then she look up and saw little girl ghost peaking out charlie turn one sec and back but it's now gone "it's her i-im so sorry Susie" she said In her head and she can't remember were she come from"is it left or right I couldn't remember" lucky she remember where she comes from and back to join up with her living friends.

in the kitchen

Jessica began to cooking in the oven "it's be done In 30 minutes so what can we talked about the animatronic or something else" Jessica said "we be damn lucky to be here and not get caught" chalton said "don't said that you known it's can happen right" Jessica said."hey what about Jason and what he said about charlie" chalton said. "what about him and charlie"John said in a confused voice. "okay well I kindof hear him while you guy and charlie talking I was sneak to the woods to take a piss and when I come back from the woods I saw Jason and Marla talked about charlie" chalton said. and what do hear them. Jessica said. shock me and Marla chalton said in a scary way." he said that when she bought the mask she put it on and her skin and her clothes become light gray and dark gray her eyes was black and little white but she took it off of her face and she became normal. both Jessica and John were scared but mostly confused. before asking chalton the hell is wrong about him the oven bell began to ring. oh the food is ready she began to take it's out of the oven." you guy get the bowls out" Jessica said.

camping spot

everyone is here Marla finally put up the last tant she was tired of the hard work she had done began to sit with everyone Jessica past the food it's was chilly with pork in brown beans everyone starts eating the meals that Jessica cooked it's charlie first spicy food her tongue began to spice up so do everyone else." man what spices do you put in" chalton said she was lucky for the 14th time but how long her luck was ran out she was giving cup of milk to help with the spice. so guy how a scary story Marla said I go first so every one was talking about horror story john had the creepiest so far chalton got the dumbest Jason got gaming horror stories but it Now my time to show what a horror story is charlie said to herself so what creepy story you got Jessica said in a happy way. got one she began. it's about a little boy in big house but that house it's on the little hill in the woods but that night his nightmare began to hunt him the there teeth were deadly there claws where sharp as knifes but in reality it's he's biggest brother and his friends making pranks but one day on his birthday his biggest brother makes bests pranks ever but its the last pranks ever he and his friends grabbed his little brother it was to put him in a animatronic mouth and the animatronic mouth began to bite of his head the boy dead but his living soul was here on earth and now hunting him like he hunt little boy and the little boy said to his brother how is it to be the hunted, it's your fault and he's said it over and over the end. "holy shit that a creepy story" john said. thank you charlie said her face was a little red she doesn't know why. "man I'm tired of all of that" Jessica said. Jason looks like he shit his pants. everyone got to tants and sleeping. good night all Marla said in a tired voice. Charlie was sleeping to but she knew someone was watching and she began to open her tant and walking to John tant