Guarding Vale: A VPD Story

by RedShirtRicky

The City of Vale contains many characters. Some good, some bad. When trouble is afoot, it's up to the Police Department to sort it out. An alternative route for those looking to serve, but not as Huntsmen and Huntresses. But as Police Officers, maintaining order in the ever growing and changing city. For Jaune Arc, this was his opportunity to become a hero. To live out his dream.

17. Review Responses Plus

Hidi Ho their readers. After noticing the large influx of reviewer responses as of Chapter 14. I feel that it is necessary for me to respond to them all through its own separate chapter which will be continually updated until Chapter 15. I like discussing things and never having small vague responses.

Anyways...Onto some reviewer responses!

DragonTetho: FEAR NOT! NO SHIP IS CONCRETE AT THIS his newfound maturity and purpose in life.

Jaune Arc is still an adolescent teenager. Teetering on the edge between civilian life and being a huntsman. And who says a guy his age couldn't be attracted to multiple individuals? Although we've been introduced to Pyrrha first, it doesn't mean Weiss is out of the picture. She's still quite the looker so always keep an eye

Badger4567: Thank you very much! I'm glad you've recognized the references. I look forward to churning out more and more chapters

tavoxd100: Indeed, Arkos is a rare gem considering canonically it's dead and gone with the wind. Just like Pyrrha's ashes. But you're welcome I hope you enjoy the coming chapters as well.

GeneralSpade: A VERY good point you've just brought up. Huntsmen and Huntresses are quite frankly superheroes. Able to convert your body and others into small particles to move at high speed, the power of polarity, damage absorption, illusions, and mind tricks. They are LEAGUES above any regular joe on the street. Despite the department processing individuals who have powers and aura like Huntsmen. They always work within communities rather than fight Grimm or hire themselves off. The Police can and would serve as that median between Huntsmen and Civilians as most of them are just civilians tasked with something of a higher responsibility.

I'm glad you enjoy the story and stick around as it progresses. Also, I'm glad you enjoy the dance scene. What Rooster Teeth throws away for gags, I monopolize and expand

Monster King: Civil Servant shows are always my weakness. Despite their lack of attention, a lot of our modern society wouldn't be the way it is without them. From the Police, to the Fire Department, the folks in the Water Commission, Road workers, and simple clerks. MHA is a bit more tricky and less nuanced but in a world like One Punch Man the police seem to have more of a substantial role. I mean with nearly everyone under the sun having a quirk you might as well leave the majority of bad guy catching to the supes.

Champion Brother Alfar: Thank you very much I'm glad you enjoy the story. I'm not that familiar with Cyberpunk but looking it up I could perhaps see it. I always had an idea to provide that sort of story for Jaune however the SWAT aspect always seemed to be a more clique element when it came to Police work. Jaune's got a good hea don him so I'd say he'd be more of a P.I.

Gwynx: Thank you I'm glad that you find this alternative take on an AU Jaune ejoyable. I'm glad to keep this story going as there's a lot of things I want to hit up while I can that goes outside of the regular main story which already gets enough attention.