Hi all you readers out there! Thanks for sticking with me through all this time… Or more like just putting it on alerts and then coming across it in your email. Well, who's out there who's hungry for a chapter? :D I know I'm only on Chapter 5, but I'm already out of ideas! NO WORRIES! :D I'll think of something . . . Or maybe you guys could suggest something? –hint hint- Although some of the fan made characters have been forgotten and the plot of the story might change just a little bit. By the way it seems that I forgot about the alices of fan-made characters as well… Gah. Well this chapter should be a short bit longer than usual as I have spent so much time on hiatus I think you guys deserve a lot more then what I've been typing! :D–because I've been getting these god awful complaints about how short it is…- Oh and also; I need a beta reader. I'll need to view your beta profile of course… And if you won't mind getting it late. - Edit: I have found a beta reader! His/Her name is The Kookie Monster! :D Of course I'm still accepting as the more the merrier! :3
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Translations: You do know you can read this right? Apparently you can if the first and last letters are the same as long as it's the same length. Your brain works by looking at the words as a whole.
Question: Who do you want Mikan to be like? Evil sadistic Mikan? Quiet Emotionless Snippy Mikan? Glaring Mikan? Mikan turned Natsume? Please tell me your insights.
What personality should the guy Mikan likes have? Happy go-Lucky because It reminds Mikan of her old self? Emotionless like Mikan?
Who do you want Mikan to end up with? OOC/OCC or Natsume?
Dedication: To all of you guys/girls who've been here with me since chapter 1…And all of you guys/girls who waited so long for this chapter…HERE IT IS!
Disclaimer: Yea yea I know your all prob. screaming in your heads "GET ON WITH IT/STFU/OMFG! THERE'S MORE?" But Hey! Disclaimers are good! I don't own this fanfi- Just kidding. :3 I meant to say… I DON'T OWN THIS ANIME/MANGA! :D I DO OWN…the work I did to accomplish this story, the paper I wrote it on, ejtkjasldkjf etc…. All in all…I don't own the anime and some of the characters used will be fan made ones from the reviewers. Now who actually started to believe I don't own this little old fanfiction story? :D It's been so long I think I'll put a 'Previously' here.
Previously on Her Façade-Broken [I've always wanted to say this! –squeals-]:
"I can't accept this! A new girl comes in who is a no star sitting next to the school officer? I can't believe this! A no-star next to a Special. Who's also the disciplinarian!" "Who the hell do you think you are?" Mikan smirked, "What, not only do you plan on making others deaf, but your deaf also? Wow. I'm Alicia Yukihara. That's who I think I am. Who might you be…Princess?"
"That's right! That's what you should be calling me dog. I am this school's princess, Sarah Evans. O~ HO~ Ho~ ho~ So doggeh, don't come in here acting like a bitch, you no alice." She laughed.
"Oh? No Alice?" Mikan smirked, amused. Thinking Mikan was intimidated she smiled,
"Why yes, yes you. No alice-san~" Mikan smiled a small smile,
"Why dear…you have it all wrong? That's what you are." Sarah smirked uncertainly,
"Y-Yea Right! I am a pure alice!" Mikan smiled again,
"How long did you think they wouldn't notice? Child-hood alice~ Come back again~!"
Sarah gasped, "B-B-but…h-h-how did you know? Please…Please help me out! This place..It's my home…" Sarah started sobbing.
Mikan nodded, "Right. Then I'll have you do some stuff."
Sarah stopped her sniffling, "Wait. What stuff?"
Mikan stopped thinking to glare at her, "Whaa? I didn't hear what you said just now?"
Sarah started her sniffling again, "I'll do it. .A-Anything so that I can stay in here!"
Mikan nodded, "Good. Now first of all you…" At this, Mikan scanned Sarah's figure,
"Need to eat more. Eat three regular healthy meals a day." At this Sarah gasped,
"I SEE YOUR PLAN NOW! YOU WANT TO MAKE ME ALL FA-" Mikan cut Sarah off,
"Don't cut me off", Mikan glared at her. Sarah groaned, "I hope this isn't about being heal-"
"Second of all you must exercise." Mikan continued as if she didn't hear Sarah. By this time the teacher had already left the classroom and her classmates watched on in awe. "Third, Don't judge a book by its cover. By the time you finally understand them; It's too late." Sarah sighed,
"This is a long set of rules. How the heck do you expe-" Mikan cut her off again, "Be respectful to the friends you do have and don't ever take them for granted. That's it." Mikan was jabbed in the side with a edge of paper. She turned to see Alice handing her two sheets of paper, Mikan picked it up and noticed it to be a contract of what she had just said. Mikan smiled at Alice and signed it and handed it to Sarah who shivered,
"This contract…it's alice bound isn't it?" Sarah asked while she signed it, staring at Alice. Mikan also turned to look at Alice while feeling a bit melancholic.
"Alice bound? The alice of Contract. That's a rare alice nowadays… Used to help secure rules mostly…" Alice nodded,
"School rules. Troublemakers will sign a contract and if they break the rules they will be punished by an electric jolt." Mikan noted it and then smiled at Alice,
"Thanks."
"No Problem."
Mikan put the paper in her binder and was about to leave when a hand stopped her,
"Hold It! I know I signed that paper and stuff but you haven't helped me yet! In fact, you haven't even told us your alice yet No-Star!" Sarah disagreed,
"That's right~Nya~" A girl with [fake] cat ears and short brown hair popped up.
"Won't you please show us, Alicia-chan?" Another girl walked up from behind the girl with short brown hair and asked. This one, had silvery hair with gold-brown eyes.
Mikan sighed, "I suppose." She reached into her bag and took out a bulky brown leather string bag, "What was your alice?"
Sarah watched wide-eyed, feeling a pit of anticipation well up within her,
"Plant Manipulation. What are you going to do?" Mikan smirked,
"Simple." Mikan reached into her bag and groped around within the bag while she brought out a dark green alice stone,
"Let's see if your constitution can use this stone…" [AN:Have you guys forgotten that Alice stones can only be used when the maker's feelings with the person using it are together?] Mikan took the stone, put it in the palm of her hand, and pushed it gently against the area of where Sarah's heart was. The stone started to move in and disappeared from Mikan's palm. Feeling that the rock was missing from her hand she removed her hand,
"Congratulations. It seems that you're compatible. Now then about that acceptance test you were talking about…" 'I know my plan was not for me to get close to these people but yet…'
The one with Brown-Gold eyes stepped up,
"My name is Natsuki Hikari, and I am the President of this class. The acceptance exam is only given to people who recently came in. You transferred from Gakuen Alice, our American counterpart correct?" Mikan nodded slightly.
"How did you know that?" Mikan asked sharply, she hadn't said anything about that…had she? Did the teacher? She somewhat couldn't remember…
"Oh! It was in the student files! I'm sorry, the teacher handed a copy of your student files to get to know you better." Mikan nodded annoyed, 'Teachers shouldn't be allowed to do that…'
"Well just like in our American counterpart, you might have noticed our school looked a little bit the same. Or at least, the structure is. It's done like that as to not confuse transferring students. Technically, All School for alices should be made the same. As for the test, You must walk through the Forbidden Northern Forest and rescue the mysterious boy known to have wandered in there and has been trapped there for three years. Rumors is, that he's our age." Mikan smirked,
"A rescuing job is always easy. I'll start after lunch." The bell rang at this point,
"Oh, I suppose its lunch right now. Alice, would you like to eat with me? I feel like we have some things to discuss." Alice nodded as she got up and picked up her bag as she followed Mikan out the door
As Mikan got her lunch it was quite noticeable that day as she had picked it up from the Special side with Alice. Some doubted that she was a Special and was just using Alice but some deducted that she was a Special. Mikan sat down at the 'Special' table with Alice.
"You know…Alicy…I almost didn't recognize you."
"What? That was my nickname…from my childhood friend from Japan! How…you…Your name's Alicia though!"
"Well," Mikan chuckled, "I didn't expect you to recognize me. It's been so long…I'm Mikan, Alicy~ You know I have many friends here…"
Alice smiled, "Mikan! I didn't recognize you! Even your personality…" Alice dove out of her seat and tackle hugged Mikan, knocking her a few inches off to the side of her chair,
"Sheesh, Alice, you've gotten stronger. You know, you should really join the football team… But other than that… You never told me you were a 'Alice', Alice! You just suddenly moved! You moved here…didn't you?" Alice nodded,
"Well I didn't expect YOU to be an Alice either… And that's why I was named 'Alice'. My parents were so sure their child would be a alice being alice users themselves…But don't change what I was asking. What's with your 'name' and what's your alice?" Mikan sighed,
"All in good time…but it seems my cover has been blown on the first day so I suppose you'll see tomorrow." Mikan got up as she finished her food and tossed it,
"It seems the test begins now. Gather the students into the classroom. Hopefully there will be a clairvoyance alice user in the class." Mikan jogged quickly North and reached a large forest.
"This is it, huh?"
Preview:
"This…This was caused by a dream distortion user and an illusion user!"
A boy with long black hair had lain on the ground.
"Hey again! My name is Yukihira Mikan, and my Alices are Nullification, Steal, Erase, and Copy."
'I find it hard to act cold around these people… Are they registering as friends?'
"Who are you? Do I know you?"
~Omake~
Mikan sat down at the 'Special' table with Alice,
"You know…I almost didn't recognize you…"
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"NATSUME HYUUGA!
Omake thought of by xxxHazelxCrimsonxxx
~Reviews~
EXpERieNCed:
Please include what you don't understand? I don't understand what you don't understand and I can't help you understand if I don't know what you don't understand.
Risa Suzukai:
Its fine! Oh? I won't be having half human half animal in this fic but she could be a person who really loves cats!
XxDeViLsNiGhTmArExX:
Here it is for your long wait! :D
The Kookie Monster:
a) Thanks but no thanks. There is not really a way to help me write longer unless you write it, but then it wouldn't be my story now would it?
b) Sorry but character entries are closed. ^^; And there was a form, no? 3
Amai Youkaiko:
Yea, Sarah seemed like the most suitable for the position. [Gasp! You don't like your other character? :O] Sarah has definitely been given her spot but I don't know about the rest. ^^; :D Why thank you! Random~ - Can you tell me what's random about it that I might be able to fix? :D
xxxHazelxCrimsonxxx:
ITS NOT VOLDEMORT! ITS TOM MARVOLO RIDDLE! –cough- [same person] –cough- OMFG! I'LL DO THAT! :D IN THIS CHAPPIE! xD Omfg. Why didn't I think of that? :DDD THANKS! It will be credited to you as the idea of course. :3
Crimson-Midnight-Moon:
Why thanks! Although I seem to have forgotten that Mikan's fake name this chapter was Alicia. xD;
Critic: Yay! I KNOW RIGHT? :D BARNEY THE PURPLE DINOSAUR!
Natsuki: Here it is! :D IKR! Those are the most awesome part for stories like this. Their reaction when she comes back all changed, when they learn what happened, and if she has a boyfriend when she comes back then Natsume's reaction!
KashinoXIchigo4ever:
O~O
death hime:
Updated! :D –cheers-
GakuenDeath:
Yay! The seemingly climax! :D –rolls-
Thanks for reading~Aqua-san
Note:
Posted: 05-04-11
Beta-Read By The Kookie Monster
Beta-Read on 05/16/11
Republished: 5/16/11