Hi,LSPI here.
Ok so this is chapter 2,for all you people who read the first chapter,thanks for your support :)
Ok so I'm gonna reply reviews.
Kage95:Thanks for the tips :) Hope your english keeps improving :3.
And thank you for being interested because as you know it's my first XD.
And I don't really find much wrong about your grammar :X
Ok on to the story! (excited)
Place:Mouri detective agency. Time:Morning,Saturday,10:00
Whats going on here?asks Rachel.
...Well,besides the fact that the little brat is rolling around on the floor in agony and covered with blood,everythings fine:Mouri,being the usual idiot he is,sarcastically comments.
WHAT!Rachel screams,shattering a nearby window.
Ohhhhh great...now I gotta pay for that...
Conan is bleeding like mad and you only care for the window?
Conan:CAN YOU TWO STOP ARGUING AND HELP ME?
Oh sorry Conan.
Yeah "sorry" Conan.
Conan:Hey uncle,call the police.
Why?
Notice the bullet hole at that window?
A BULLET HOLE? I THOUGHT YOU ACCIDENTLY INJURED YOURSELF OR SOMETHING.
Gimme a break uncle,I'm not as dumb as you.
SHUTIT BRAT,OR I'LL GIVE YOU ANOTHER INJURY TO CRY ABOUT.
*doorbell rings*
(sigh) I'll get it,before I REALLY give Conan another injury.
*Mouri opens the door*
Hi uncle! Three children shout at the same time.
Is Conan around?asks a cute girl.
Yeah is he around?We promised to go to Prof Agasa's house today, asks a thin boy with freckles all over his face.
Yeah!And we were going to eat unagi sushi at a sushi restaurant!says a big,chubby boy with a ten yen bald patch on his head.
Sorry kids,but Conan can't go out today.
Awwww!All three whine at the same time.
Whyyyy,asks the same girl.
Because...uhhhhhh because I don't allow him!
Why,did he get in trouble?
No...he uhhhh...
Did he do something bad?Or is he sick?
Cmon,tell us!
I CAN'T TELL YOU THREE,OK?
NOW GO.I HAVE TO CALL THE POLICE.
*gasps*
Mouri:Oooops...
Author's note
Ok,doing great so far
Still kinda inexperienced so negative reviews appreciated