Took me awhile to come up with some more ideas, but i manged, remember to leave a review :D It makes me feel good, and it makes me want to continue the story :P


"Robin, do you think we should go with the plan?" Chopper asked, his rumble in hand,

"Yes, Doctor-San," Robin assured him with a smile, "I think that plan will work." Chopper nodded his head, as he charged at Lucci, already transformed. Robin had her hands crawl up from behind him.

"Heh, that won't work." Lucci said, smirking slightly. His smirk vanished as the plan succeeded, Robin had grabbed hold of his feet with her hands. She then cloned herself, and they both started to fight him.


"Oi, Marimo," Sanji and Zoro were making their way to Luffy, "Do you think this is the way?"

"How would I know Dart Board?"

"...True, you probably wouldn't know." Sanji agreed

"Whats that supposed to mean?"

"Whatever." Sanji started running, "Lets just go this way."


"Usopp, the tracks end at this door!" Nami took a deep breath and looked at Usopp, who nodded. "Which means," She paused, "Luffy's in here." Usopp nodded again as she slowly opened the door to find Chopper, Robin and Lucci fighting!

"Chopper, Robin!" Usopp ran over to them and helped them fight. Nami was scanning the room for any sign of Luffy. There he was! She ran over to him and lifted his head onto her lap.

"N-Nami?" He asked, opening his eyes

"Yes. Don't Worry," Nami comforted him, "We'll get you out of here."

"W-wait." He tried to talk, but he was too weak, and his head fell back onto Nami's lap.

"Nami, Chopper, you take care of Luffy." Usopp shouted, sounding proud, "We'll take care of these guys."

"Alright!" Chopper ran over to Luffy and began to work on him.


"Franky-San, I don't think it's this way." Brooke looked at the wall in front of them with a frown on his face. (Please no skeleton jokes now.)

"True."

"Now what?"

"Lets try this way!" And Franky began to run the other way, as Brooke followed.


Zoro walked along the pathway, opening every door to check for Luffy or Lucci.

"Not this one." He said walking to the next one, "Or this one." He walked to the last one and opened it, "Or this-

"Zoro!"

"Oi, Dartboard, I found him!" Sanji ran over and looked in the door,

"Sanji!"

"You guys!" Sanji and Zoro ran over to Luffy, (Well, Sanji ran over to Nami and Robin first, but still.)

"You guys go fight Lucci!" Nami said, looking at Luffy, "We'll protect Luffy."

"~Hai, Nami-Swaaaanannnn~"

"Fine."


"Franky," Brooke ran up and down the pathway, looking left and right for any doors to any rooms.

"Maybe we should try this way next." Franky asked, pointing to a narrow pathway that was leading to a small room at the end of it, as they ran in, they saw that there was plenty of door down this pathway. They opened the first one,

"YOU GUYS!"

"Ehhh, Usopp?" Franky ran in, looking around, "So you guys found him?" Usopp nodded.

"You guys are late!" Nami complained, but her attention quickly returned to Luffy.

"How is Luffy-San?" Brooke asked, cautiously coming closer.

"I-I'm not sure." Chopper blurted out, "We have to get him back to the ship so that I can check." Brooke nodded, and took a fighting stance as he took out his sword.

"Then," He took to the battlefield, "Please forgive me for taking so long." He jumped into the bloody fight, fully prepared.


"He's finessed." Zoro said, walking over to Chopper, Nami and Luffy with a serious face. "Lets get back to the ship." Chopper nodded, turning into human mode, and picking Luffy up carefully.

"Lets Hurry." They all ran out, as Sanji overtook Zoro, who was in front.

"Marimo," He paused, "You shouldn't be in front."

"Why?"

"Just get back Zoro." Nami sighed, pointing behind her. Zoro slowed down, and obeyed, knowing Luffy needed immediate treatment.


"Hurry!" Chopper was running about, giving orders right and left, "Get him to the bed Zoro!" "Usopp, get a bucket of water and a towel." "Sanji, prepare some warm soup," "Nami and Robin, come with me!"

"How do you think he is?" Usopp asked Sanji, while filling up the bucket,

"Not sure," Sanji paused before continuing, "He seamed to have taken some damage, and adding the sickness he seams to be in a bad condition." Usopp nodded,

"Yeah, your right."

"Well, all we can do right now is hope." Zoro said, slumping against the wall as he fell asleep.


So yeah, did you like it? I know it's shorter then the other ones, but oh well :D