okay, hello every one. sorry i didn't post sooner, my computer stop working so had to get a new one. so for know i'am using the library computer. it sucks for me :(. in joy.

Eragon Pov

I awoke just before dawn. i groaned when i realized i had to go. i got up from the spot I was sleeping in, and went over to what was left of the fire from last night, and stomped my foot on it. Some ember scattered, but didn't start any fires.

"stikova."i said (Hide) to cover my trail or anything that gives my location away.

right before i could turn around, i was hit in the gut, i went down on my nees and started gasping for air.

"Ha ha, hello Eragon shadeslayer." said a voice as sharp as a knife scraping iron.

still gasping for air, i looked up to see who had struck me. and their standing right in the middle where the fire used to be, was a man wearing all black, but for some reason he was holding a purple sword that almost looked elven made. He had pure yellow eyes, and dark sky hair. He also had a dark cape that reached to the back of his knees and all the way up to his shoulders. He had a horrible grin on his face, showing off his almost sharp white teeth.

"Poor Eragon, so stupid. you didn't even think a shade like me would hear of the great and mighty shadeslayer's departure!"

i got up still flinching with pain and said,"how did y-you-" before i could finish, the shade took aim with his fist, aiming for my rib cage. just before he could hit me, he muttered something under his breath. Right when he finished muttering his word, his fist met my rib cage sending me eleven feet back, maybe even more if it wasn't for a tree. I hit the tree with such force I thought i broke every bone in my body.

I slowly slid down the tree, my every bone in my body burning with pain. with all my strength I stood up. I unsheathe my sword.

"brisigr!" *sorry forgot how to spell the word*

Blue flame swarmed around my sword. holding my sword with both hands, I ran at the shade, aiming for his heart. But i was to slow. He twisted his sword around before sliding his sword under mine, if he slid any further we both could of been dead, then, with little strength i saw, pushing my sword up with his. Our swords were flat against each other, forming a X. Only diffreance was he was holding his sword with one hand while I hold with two.

He started to push me back. i tried to resist but he was to strong. I left the position and stepped back two spaces before twisting my body to the left, aiming my sword for his i could wound him the stab him in the heart. but he predicted this much because he quickly raised his sword up to protect his left side. blocking my second attack as easy as the first. He then started to spin. i stepped back just in time to save my life.

But he seemed not to stop spinning. instead he started to crouch down, curving his sword a little up. Extending his sword a few inches longer, he manege to wound my leg with a three inch slice. there for, forcing me to bend down on one knee. the shade took this as a advantage. using my one good leg as a bounce pad. he then summer salt over my head. I twisted my upper self around, with little strength left. to my surprise and horror he disarmed me from my sword. and he easy kicked me back at least a phew ft, cracking one of my bones in my rib cage as i lay flat on my back breathing heavily.

"You call your self a shadeslayer! You are pathetic! I would love to dispose of you right know, but for the good of my king i must bring you back to the castle alive. and i see you have not brought your dragon, no worry she shall come to my king very soon if wants to or not, so must get her rider back right?." He smiled evilly.

the shade started to walking toward. Then i started smile and shade stopped in his tracks. using new found strength i took out my hunting knife i keep hidden in my left shoe. got up as quickly as i could and longed at the shade. to my best surprise i stabbed the shade in his heart. the shade smiled before stabbing me in my chest. almost at my heart. he smiled and started chanting in a weird language that i never herd before. as he chanted his chest started to open and then dark balls of smoke started to come out.

one bye one, the dark balls left him, until the last ball came out just before he could finish his chant. he said,"die, shadeslayer!"

after that the body of the shade fell down and started to dissolve into green mist. I smiled as i took the knife out of my chest. i smiled before dropping the black, but glowing, knife. I dropped on the ground and then all went black.

so how did you like it. please tell. i don't know when i'm going to put in the next chapter but soon. so later. :D