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Survern Pov.

Once i saw Eragon fall down from the stab, i flew away into the morning sky back to my master in Urb'ean. It wasn't long ago last night that I was order to take a shape as a crow. not long ago I was sent out to follow the shade to Eragon before dawn. it was just a moment ago that I combined my magic and strength with the dark shade to make him even more stronger. and it was just then that the shade had just faked his death.

As i flew i tried to stay concentrated at the mission at hand. fi were just to loose concentration by just a little, i could forget who i am, i would loose all memory of being human and would of became a lost and stupid bird.

I flew for what felt like an hour until i saw a city i recognized as Urb'ean. I flew over some houses, huts, and some large buildings that could be bars. When i saw a clear landing space on top of a tower, i took it. i looked around for and open window. it took a minute but i found an opening into a slaves room.

i took advantage this opportunity and flew into the room. I easily glided onto the floor. i crowed a few time before i observed my surroundings. their was bed, a desk, a chair, and a half burnt candle. nothing special.

Know here comes the hard part. I thought, Know i must sit and wait.

as i sat, i plucked some of my feathers, and stared straight at the door. It was about forty-five minutes or so until someone opened the door. before they could even look inside i flew out so quickly i was almost a blur. i herd a scream when i turned a corner, and telling by the scream it must of been a woman.

I flewand a few corners before disappearing behind a curtain. I closed my eyes and thought about being human. as thought , i felt my body changing, getting a little by little wider and taller until it stopped. i went into the shadows, taking secret passageways to get to the throne room.

I took the last passageway and stop at huge stone door. in front of the door was mirrors. i looked at myself. I had green eyes and brown hair. i was wearing armor that almost looked elven made. my sword, rival, was strapped beside my hip. I smiled as i remembered Galbatorix handing me the white riders sword.

i entered the throne room. their sitting in a red chair and black trims sat the great King Galbatoix. *sorry, i cant describe Galbatorix. don't know how he looks like.* The king smiled (more like a smirk.) deeply.

"did he we succeed?" asked the king.

I frowned, knowing i would give the king bad news. And i don't like it when give him bad news, bad news leads to bad thing, mostly like death."The shade had succeeded in stabbing Eragon. But he was killed to early, so the spell only worked half way. So I don't know how the spell will effect him."

The king, was mad. i could tell because his eyes flared black with flames while face remained normal."this will not work! Find the shade, prepare men for battle. We will attack when they least expect it, its the only way. if we wait to long can you imagine the power he could unlock. the spell was to clean all his emotions and thoughts, making it easy to control him, last time i will ever send a shade to something so simple!... WHAT ARE YOU DOING STANDING THEIR, LEAVE. I WANT MY MEN AND THAT SHADE READY TO BATTLE, WE HAVE NO TIME TO WASTE!"

I stumbled my way out.


How you like it. took a while to think of this person. And a shout out to all them Percy Jackson fans out their. if you didn't ready son of Neptune. i could start posting chapters. just give me a shout out.

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