Okay,

This is getting VERY OFFENSIVE!

Who does not understand DO NOT OFFEND?!

A recent comment from an anonymous reader said 'Your story is badly written and character bashing is so childish'.

I'd like to ask how?

As well as the fact I AM A CHILD! 13!

PLEASE NO MORE FLAMES!

It's making me feel horrible and it doesn't help me write unless it's constructive criticism.

It's not making you a better writer so why make people feel bad?

If this continues I will have to report you.

PocKEtNiJA