Rise of Evil Flame Princess

Chapter One: She's Not Yet Evil

Ice King was passing by the Grasslands (to kidnap Peebles, as usual) when he smelled fire. He wondered where it was coming from and saw smoke arising from the tree fort.

"Finn's over cooking his dinner," he thought and flew near the said house to investigate.

He peeped into the topmost window and saw Flame Princess burning Finn. He gasped. What on earth was going on?

"BURN!" she was shouting.

Finn was already severely hurt, and he was lying on the wooden floor, unconscious. The room itself was engulfed by fire, and Ice King could see that the floor was starting to give away.

He thought. Then without hesitation, he crashed into the room through the window. Bits of glass flew all over the room, some hitting the fire princess on the head.

"Ow! What the heck-" she shouted, turning to see who dare interrupt her evil scheme. "Ice King?!"

"What are you doing Flame Princess...?" he asked, flying over her like an abnormally large bird. "Why are you doing that to Finn?"

"That's none of your business Simon!" she snapped, turned into her big and monstrous form and started throwing fireballs at him.

Simon ducked the flames and quickly used his eyes powers to temporarily freeze Flame Princess. He then picked up Finn and carried him out the broken window.


Finn opened his eyes and felt something cold behind his back. His vision was blurry, but then slowly it adjusted until finally he saw where he was. He was at the Ice Kingdom.

"Uhhh..." he groaned, touching his head. "What...happened?"

He noticed that he was lying down on a bed and a pale of cold water was put on a table next to him. There was a sponge on it.

"Why am I in here?" Finn asked no one. Then he tried to get up from his bed, but his arms gave away on him and he dropped back on the bed.

"Ow..." he groaned again.

He surveyed his arms. They looked like they were burnt. Was Ice King trying to cook him? Glob no.

He searched through his memory and finally remembered. Flame Princess was there, she almost killed him. And Jake...

Jake...

He felt his eyes water and quickly wiped them with his hand.

"Why...would she...do that...?" he asked, glaring at the wall. "She killed my brother!" he punched the wall so hard he heard his bones crack.

"OUCH! OH MY-"

"Yo Finn stop hurting yourself," Ice King shouted and came into view.

"Flame Princess! Where is she?" the boy asked, frowning. "I want revenge on-"

"-her yeah, I know, she almost killed you. Thank me that I found you."

"Wait, what?"

"She burnt your fort man! It was all on fire!"

The old wizard's words span across his mind...

Burnt.

"WHAT!"

"I got you out of there and froze that hot chick."

"Get me out of this bed!" Finn shouted, trying again but failing to stand up. "I want to..."

His voice died away and tears were falling down his face.

"Hey, why're you crying?" Ice King asked.

"She-she killed..." he tried to answer but his crying made it difficult to. "...she killed Jake..."

"WHAT! How could she do that...?"

"I don't know myself."

"But why? I mean her father used to tell she was evil but..."

Evil. That word rang in Finn's mind. Jake was right. She was evil, he was wrong, and Jake was right. And he didn't listen, now Jake...he's dead.

But there was something else troubling him. She had warned him to stay away from her. That meant...she had no control over what she did!

"No...she's not..."

Ice King looked at him like he was a psycho. How could he say that when she had killed Jake?

"...not yet."

The End of Chapter