Well new story I guess it's kind of based off chakra collector by gazz uzumaki which I wish he/she would hurry up and put in another chapter in I mean seriously if anyone read that it's pretty much asking to have one more chapter.

Also this different from what I usually write where the protagonists is part of some group or uses power totally different from everyone else and ends up being better because everyone else can't counter it. This is where the protagonist uses the same power but is not the best at it and makes due with what he's got. And if you are wondering why I am explaining this to you it s more of explaining it to myself

Basically its plot line where the protagonist lives a less than perfect life at home problem comes up and then he has to fight his way across the land to find and ancient treasure to fix the problem.

Well anyways this one revolves around Naruto not having the kyuubi parents neglect him because his sister does but Naruto does training in secret and ends up becoming a badass…Fuck yeah! Sorry I got passed by a prius earlier today and had to something manly…JUST KIDDING it think that is becoming my catchphrase or something, been saying that a lot recently, usually when I get excited

Problem of the story is that Orochimaru makes an assassination attempt on his family and Naruto in all of his cannonic(From cannon…it's word I typed it, you read it, it has a definition, it's a word now) impulsiveness takes a blow meant for his sister and defeats the pedophile with a technique that'll be revealed when you read this! Well Naruto gets poisoned by some freaky ass incurable venom and the only thing that can save may not exists so he goes out and fights the world so he can live another few minutes

I do not own Naruto

Naruto looked out his window into his family courtyard where is older sister and younger sister were training his older sister is eighteen has red hair and green eyes, she's pretty much a carbon copy of Kushina his mother and is considered to be one of the best shinobi in the village her name is Narumi and her younger sister everyone knows who she is, the savior of Konoha, she who keeps the kyuubi away and the daughter of the Yondaime aka the Yellow flash, Naruko Namikaze the Jinchuriki of the Kyuubi no Yoko, also she's Naruto's younger sister by one year. She too has red hair but in some weird genetic match up has blue eyes, and her face was a mix of Kushina and Minato

Now you may be wondering why Naruto is not out there training with them and why he's in his room, well that's easy it's because it's the same reason of every other 'Naruto gets neglected fic' on this site. It's because that since Naruko has the kyuubi all the attention from the family is directed at her all the training is for her and you know what that leaves Naruto with little to nothing. It's not that he has low chakra reserves, he actually has above average. It is just that it pales in comparison to his family.

The reason was that Narumi wasn't in the same boat as him was she has been in the Namikaze family for six years longer than he has and have long since made her place in the house.

But that doesn't matter, not anymore. Naruto has long since stopped caring about training from his parents or attention. He has trained himself mostly while not being academically gifted he was rather ingenious at creating tactics and jutsus. He actually learned the Rasengan just by watching the steps that his father showed Naruko two years ago. Naruto can now form it in under a second and in one hand while his sister takes twelve seconds and needs both hands even then it's still underpowered. Speaking of which that is what they were doing in the courtyard, Narumi demonstrating the creation of the jutsu while Naruko watched and tried imitate in an unsuccessful game of monkey see, monkey do.

Naruto feeling he wasn't going to learn anything new got up grabbed a duffle bag and walked out of the house unnoticed by his parents who were watching the two with smiles on their faces. Naruto glanced over with uncaring look and continued onward. Although he wasn't forgotten by his family he was largely ignored most of the time except dinners where they asked him what he did because he was the only one not around them 24/7.

He walked down a one of the older streets leading to a path the goes behind the Hokage monument. After awhile Naruto got to a long abandoned training ground that he's pretty sure he only knows about. The training ground was old evident by the old training equipment in disrepair. The reason Naruto used this is that it was out of earshot of anyone in the village.

Naruto unzipped his bag and pulled out a katana this was actually a gift from a retired samurai who has taken a liking to Naruto and decided to train him. His name was Jiro and he could go toe to toe with a kage level shinobi, at least he could when he was young and in his prime. Anyways Jiro explained that his reasons for training him is that he saw something in Naruto he hasn't seen in someone else for a very long time. In the course of two years Jiro showed him how to use sword skillfully and coupled with Naruto quick learning ability the training went fast.

Naruto swung the katana around going through a few movements and practicing strikes and defensive moves before placing the katana down to go move on to chakra techniques he formed a Rasengan. though having mastered it he remember overhearing his father say it was still an incomplete jutsu and through some trial and error with jutsu he found he had a strong wind and lightning affinity. Since then he has been trying combine wind with the rasengan in order to make something better so far all the results having blown up in his face… literally, but that doesn't stop him.

"Okay let's see how many times I can blow myself up today" he said jokingly to himself referencing his failures. He formed the Rasengan in his hands and took the other hand but it over it attempting to channel wind chakra into it he actually started to see the shape change and looked like he might actually do it this time.

*BOOM*

But like the all the other times it exploded sending him flying against a tree "God dammit." He said in bored tone, he's use to it already so it's more of habit than anything else. He got up and tried again, again, and again each time in a different way each time ended in failure. Finally he rested after being blown back for the umpteenth time in a row, he was panting heavily with few scuffs and scrapes on him 'alright think this is the right path but it's not working, this shouldn't be this hard I can make a normal rasengan with one hand but…' naruto looked at his hand for a moment 'wait a moment….holy crap I'm a moron!' he got up and made the rasengan while channeling wind chakra from the same hand.

The result was a huge blue shuriken with the rasengan in the middle, Naruto just stared down in awe 'did…did I do it?' he thought amazed 'it looks like a shuriken…then does that mean I can…?' Naruto tried a throwing motion but the jutsu didn't fly out of his hands and threw him off balance and he almost tripped, and holding what could be a highly destructive jutsu. Not the best thing to trip with. 'So you won't throw normally, eh? Let's try this.'

Naruto tried to throw it again this time adding a burst of chakra creating the desired effect. The altered rasengan flew out of his hands towards some trees and what happened after it hit the trees was incredible the thing made a large dome with what looked liked tiny chakra blades ripping the trees to shreds "Holy crap that was freaking awesome!"

"Wow…" said a stunned voice Naruto turned and saw a raven haired haired girl with onyx eyes, it was a Uchiha, Satsuki if he remembered correctly she was on his class at the ninja academy they didn't really talk much due her being somewhat aloof and having the majority of the guys going after her.

"Hey what are you doing here?" asked Naruto worried that someone found out his secret spot she turned towards him and ran off "Hey wait!" called Naruto and tried to chase after her but fell and couldn't get back up "Ah crap can't move…used to much chakra…"

Naruto jus laid there for a while before Satsuki came back "Why didn't you chase after me?" she asked confused. Though her voice remained even.

"I tried but I'm currently suffering from chakra exhaustion and I couldn't move" said Naruto still lying on the ground trying to make an effort to get up "still can't."

"So what was that jutsu you used?" she asked interested "It was incredible."

"I'll tell you if you keep it secret from everyone. Especially my family"

She agreed, she was confused on the family part but she agreed.

"You know who my dad is right?" asked Naruto and she nodded "You know the rasengan right? Well this is a bigger and more destructive version of it using wind chakra"

"But how did you figure out how do that your grades in class aren't great" she said referencing to how the teachers usually yelled at Naruto for either sleeping goofing off or trying to escape

"Well, the academy bores the hell out of me…" said Naruto bluntly catching Satsuki off guard "yeah it's not that I'm a idiot it's more that I'm lazy but instead of sleeping it off like a Nara I actually put up an effort to entertain myself or leave."

"So why don't you want your family to know? I would think they would be proud of you" Satsuki asked.

"Well little known fact about the hokages family is that they have child ranking system meaning if you are good ninja or can obviously become you have the parents attention and if you are anything less than excellent then you get thrown to the wolves." Satsuki looked at him in shock "also could you keep that secret to I know you might not understand but it's how things are and the sad part is they don't even know they're doing it"

"I understand…" she muttered

"What was that, I couldn't hear you?"

"I said I understand my father is like that to, he focuses only on those with power" she said a little sadly "anyone else isn't worth his time, which is why I'm confused on why you wouldn't want to show this to your family to prove yourself"

"Because I didn't develop this, these past few weeks to prove myself to anyone but me" explained Naruto confusing the Uchiha girl "I did this to prove to myself that I can become powerful without my families help."

Satsuki looked at him in awe and newly developed respect "plus walking into the middle of the family room and setting one of these off sounds kind of stupid." He said in small laugh in truth Naruto really wanted to do that but he knew he shouldn't. after his laughter died down he noticed the sun was setting and it almost time for dinner. "Crap sun is setting; my parents are going to start asking questions"

"I thought your parents ignored you"

"I'm also the only person who doesn't hang around them so I'm the only interesting person in their lives, dinner is only time I become important…I freaking hate dinner…" Naruto tired to get up and got to his feet but when he tried to walk he stumbled and almost fell only to be caught by Satsuki.

"I could help you get home" she offered.

"That would be appreciated" said Naruto with an embarrassed smile on his face.

"Hmm…" she said looking at him

"What?" asked Naruto confused

"I would think you would try to be tough and move home on your own." She said

"What I need help I'm not too proud not to admit it" he said as they began walking "plus getting walked home by a cute girl isn't too bad" Satsuki blushed and looked away from him "Something wrong?" he's not being cheeky, he's just dense.

"Nothing" she said still hiding her blush.

They walked home, making small talk, their likes and dislikes and dreams. Sastuki wanted to become one of the highest rank shinobi in the village if not the best and Naruto he didn't know what he was going to do. Eventually they made it to the Hokage mansion they said their goodbyes and Naruto who could move went inside and saw his family was just sitting down for dinner. Dinner itself was the usual parent complimenting Naruko on how much progress she's made asking Naruto what he did with him giving out vague answers which his family shrugged off as they didn't really care.

The Next morning

Naruto got up ate breakfast and walked to the academy, when he got it he saw Satsuki getting hounded by most of the male population her brother Sasuke getting hounded by most of the female population the only people who weren't involved was the Nara kid who was sleeping, the Akamichi kid who was eating and the Inzuka who was looking at the Hyuuga who for some reason was looking at him. Anyways Satsuki seemed to have picked him up and broke out of the crowd of male admirers and ran up to him and sat in the chair between him and the wall "Help me" she said her normally stoic face having a look of urgency. Naruto just looked at her confused but shrugged and went with it. The boys that had her surrounded wanted to try and force Naruto out of the seat but didn't, he could here of because "he's the hokages son" and other things

'Dumbasses if only they knew'

Class was uneventful though did collect a few odd looks from the class since Satsuki was sitting next to him. After class Naruto went to his somewhat less secret now training ground to perfect his new move. When he tried it again he noticed that he could probably only do it once from full chakra reserves and that another one would completely drain him. So over the next week he concentrated on attempting to either raise his chakra level or make the new jutsu more chakra efficient, having some success with both. Satsuki also occasionally came check up on him and practice some of her Jutsu in secret and every once in awhile everything went on like this until one odd moment at home.

"Alright family, we we're are going out tonight!" said Minato "to the Golden Lotus Dragon!"

"Really!" said all the females of the family

"The what?" asked Naruto confused

"Baka Nii-san! The golden lotus dragon is the most expensive and exclusive restaurant in Konoha maybe even in the entire world" said Naruko excited, Naruto looked at her annoyed for calling him a baka. "Even the Daimyo needs to wait to get in"

"That's not nice Naruko" said Natsumi "it's not his fault he has lower chakra reserves"

"What the heck does that have to do with my intelligence!?" yelled Naruto jumping up "and I don't want hear that from someone who hasn't mastered the rasengan yet!" Naruko flushed looked away

"Hey, you haven't even started learning it yet!" she retorted also jumping up and getting in his face "I bet you can't even do the basics yet!" they had a glaring match. And Naruto was tempted to just form a rasengan right then and there.

'No…' he thought 'it's not worth it…' and he looked away

"Hmph…that is what I thought" said Naruko in her falsified triumph

"Now, now kids" said Kushina trying to ease the tension "Let's not fighting this is an important night."

"Right!" agreed Minato "Now everyone go up and get ready"

Everyone did so while the rest of his family wore rather extravagant clothes Naruto's clothes were more plain, but his family didn't say anything and they went out to go to the restaurant but on the way there they met some trouble.

They were walking down the dark streets of Konohas night time happily chatting well all except Naruto who just remained silent. All of the sudden a whole bunch of snakes burst from the ground and constrained Minato and Kushina

"Otou-san, Kaa-san!" screamed Naruko in terror.

"Kukukukukuku…." Came a creepy chuckle and out of the darkness walked konoha's most dangerous missing nin Orochimaru "long time on see Minato-kun"

"Orochimaru!" spat Minato "What business do you have here!?"

"You mean aside from destroying this pathetic village?" asked Orochimaru almost playfully "Well you see the snakes gave me prophecy that 'a child from to great ninja and with great power inside will bring peace to the world' the snakes also said that this child would kill me if it grew to powerful" the Namikaze family glared at him Natsumi protruded a blade and charged him but was knocked aside with ease and incapacitated with snakes "Now that was rude. Well regardless I thought who this could be then I thought about the forth Hokage and how their daughter holds the greatest of all bijuu" he then pulled out his place known as Kusanagi "so the only way to save myself is to kill her." He appeared in front of Naruko in a flash who was frozen in fear but as he thrusted forward yelling "cursed existence technique" but instead stabbing Naruko he got Naruto "a substitution jutsu? Well aren't you a fast thinker, but it seems counterproductive to have yourself take the blow."

"Naruto!" screamed Kushina actually giving a damn, but Naruto had shit eating grin on his face.

"Probably" he said while grinning surprisingly calm "But then I wouldn't be able to do this." In a instant Naruto formed a Rasengan in his hand and jabbed into Orochimaru's gut sending him shooting down the street and he coughed up blood a bit.

"Well, well that is impressive" said Orochimaru "But you are going to have to do better than that."

"you…you…know the Rasengan?" asked Naruko shocked, his whole family was looking at him in shock

"Yeah, so who's the idiot now?" joked Naruto but in a serious manner "excuse me for a moment" he then shot off in blue spark stopping right in front of Orochimaru another rasengan in hand shoving it into his gut and shooting him into the air "You want better?" yelled Naruto he said forming another Rasnegan but adding his wind chakra to it creating his new jutsu "then try this!" Naruto then chucked it into air colliding with Orochimaru creating a large torrent of chakra blades causing massive damage to him before dispersing and falling down dead.

The snakes dispersed after Orochimaru was killed and Naruto turned and walked to his family with a bleeding whole in his chest. "alright listen up" said Naruto in a commanding tone "pretty sure you have a lot of questions right now" they nodded "But before I you start asking I have something I need you to do." They looked at him expectantly "I'm about to pass out from blood loss and chakra exhaustion please take me to the hospital" and with that he fell forward and passed out.

Okay who likes this? Kind of a rushed start but oh well. I was going to go farther but this is more of a way to get this out of my head so i can focus on my other stories