Haven't been writing for awhile now, but I'm finally back to rewrite my second chapter, as it was not well done :P
I made this chapter shorter, as I want to know if people are still interested in reading my story, before writing longer chapters. So, all I ask from you guys is to keep reviewing my chapters, as that's the only motivation to keep me writing more! Without further ado...
-several years later-
"So this is where Mr Ping stays?" He thought to himself. The mysterious tiger walked in, and swiftly grabbed Mr Ping by the neck, and put him in a sack. The tiger just left a note on the counter, and had promptly left the area.
-The next day-
"Finally! We're done for the week! Guys, wanna come over to my dad's restaurant for some food?" Po asked
"Sure thing!" they said in a unison, though Tigress wished that he invited only herself. She really wanted to tell Po how she feels towards him. Maybe later, she thought to herself.
"As I was saying..."
"Po, look at that crowd there"
Po was interrupted by Tigress, who was staring at the crowd forming around the entrance of the restaurant.
They walked briskly up to the entrance, and while Po went around the small compound trying to find his dad, the 5 found a scroll on top of the menu found in front of the counter.
"Po, you might want to look at this" Crane blurted out.
Po had a qualm that someone had kidnapped his father, and unfortunately he was right.
On the scroll, it wrote "We have unfinished business with you, panda. You shall meet us or never meet your father again. Xing Shen city. -Jian"
After that, Po just stared blankly at nothing in particular, shocked by the misfortune. He thought to himself, "Jian, I'm coming to get you..."
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