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A/N: This is the next chapter, please review whether you thought the story was good or bad. Some feedback would be appreciated anything is better than nothing. All I ask is that your review is respectful. Thank you and enjoy the story.

(Brock's POV)

I finally get into this story.

*At ashes house*

"Hey Brock you're gonna get schooled!"

"Hey I'm way better at this game than you." Ash thinks he's so cool, fighting games are my specialty!

"Alright we each have a round off each other, now let's see who's the best."

*Brock Wins*

"Hah! I told you that I'd win!" Ash thinks he can beat me he is sorely mistaken.

"Hey at least I have a girlfriend."

Oh he did not just go there. "Come here you little punk! I'm gonna rip your head off!"

"Hey it's not my fault you suck at picking up the ladies."

This little punk, I mean I'm happy for him but he can be such an immature, obnoxious guy. He's still my best friend, and I can't stay mad at the guy.

*Phone rings*

"I'll pick it up." Ash's mother said.

*Ash's mom picks up the phone.*

"Hello… Hey nice to talk to you again… what's wrong… oh I'm sorry… alright I'll tell him."

*Ash's mom hangs up the phone*

"What is it mom?"

"That was May's mother."

"What's seems to be the problem Mrs. Ketchum?"

"Brock, why are you talking like that?"

"I'm just trying to be polite to your mother."

"Anyway, what's wrong mom?"

"Ash, I don't know how to say this but…"

"What is it?"

"May is in the hospital, she's been shot."

"What! I just saw her last night what happened?"

"She got shot on her way back home."

"What! Mom, can you take me to the hospital she's staying at?"

Poor Ash this has to be devastating. "Ash, do you want me to come with you?"

"Yeah, I could use a friend right about now."

On the way to the hospital

I hate to see him like this he's so quiet, he's never quiet. "Ash,"

"Brock, I don't wanna talk."

He looks miserable. "Don't worry Ash I'm sure May will pull through."

"Yeah," He just keeps on staring out that window. "You know Brock, May was the first thing in my life I was sure about and now I could lose her forever."

I didn't know Ash loved May this much.

*They arrived at the hospital and walked through the front door.*

"Hi, my name is Delia Ketchum and I'm here to visit May Maple."

"Oh, May's mother told us you would be coming here with your son."

At May's room

"There she is Ash."

*May was lying in a hospital bed in front of them*

"May," *Ash walks towards the bed* "May this is all my fault, I should've never let you walk home that late at night."

I can see the tears streaming down his face because he might lose something he can't replace. Hold on a minute. *Brock leaves*

"What the hell are you putting in this story? Coldplay references, really?"

"Hey get back to the story, it's suppose to be serious."

"If you want it to be serious don't put Coldplay references and don't allow me to talk to you."

"Just get back to the story."

"Fine."

*Walks back into the scene*

This is horrible, who could have done this.

*Officer Jenny walks in*

"What are you guys doing here?"

It's an Officer Jenny! "Hello Officer let me guess you're here to take me away to your slammer." Wow my best friend is grieving and I'm hitting on Officer Jenny, I'm an asshole.

"No, Brock I was just checking on May's condition."

"Officer Jenny, do you have any idea who did this?" Ash's mother asked.

"Yes, before she lost consciousness she said the person who shot her was a person named Dawn, do any of you know her?"

Dawn did this!

"Why Dawn? I was happy, I finally found the girl I love and you had to take her away from me." *Ash storms out of the room.*

"Officer Jenny, the person you're looking for is a girl named "Dawn… what the hell is her last name? Damn it Anime not telling us her full name! Anyway she goes to Pallet High and She's 5'6 and with Blue hair, Dark blue eyes. She has a mother named Johanna."

"Thank you I'll see if I can speak with her mother."

They won't find Dawn at home, but I know where she went, into Viridian Forest, I have to find her.

In Viridian forest

"Dawn! Where are you?" where is that girl?

*Brock stumbles upon a pond and there sitting on a rock was Dawn with a gun in her hand.*

"Dawn, what-,"

*Dawn turns around and shoots at a tree next to Brock.*

"Not another move Brock."

"Dawn please listen, you need to turn yourself in. If you run from this you'll only make this harder on yourself."

"I'm not running anymore, there isn't anyone or anywhere for me to go." *Dawn points the gun to her head.*

"Dawn wait! You don't need to do this!" Shit what am I going to do do?

"Goodbye Brock… (faint voice) goodbye Ash." *click*

"Nooo, Dawn!"

*Nothing happened.*

"You're out of bullets Dawn."

*Brock took the gun from her hand and she just looked down and cried.*

"Come on Dawn, it's time to go home."

After that I brought Dawn home. Officer Jenny was there, Dawn was taken in. She confessed her attempted murder and was going to be tried for her crime. Luckily for her, May woke up and she convinced the judge of the trial to pardon Dawn.

At Dawn's House

Johanna was happy to see her daughter return home. "I'm so glad that your home."

"Me too mom, thank you May I'm sorry I tried to kill you."

"I forgive you, I certainly didn't help you get over Ash and I apologize for that."

"Dawn, even though we're not going out anymore I still wanna be friends with you. Do you think that's possible?"

"Yes Ash, I think that's possible especially since…"

"Hey guys!"

"Paul! What are you doing here?"

"I'm here for Dawn."

"That's so sweet!"

"Shut up Ash."

Everyone seemed happy but there was one thing that didn't make sense. "Hey Dawn, that gun you had at the pond in Viridian forest. I didn't know you guys owned a gun."

"I don't, Dawn where did you get that gun?"

"It's Misty's dad's she secretly gave me the combination to her father's safe."

"Why that's just idiotic, it's actually too idiotic."

"She's not an idiot, she's the one who told me Ash said he chose me."

"I never told her that."

"Come to think of it, she told me if I wanted Ash I should've taken him from you May."

"That's weird, she seemed like she was fine with us together."

Things are starting to add up and I think Ash and I are starting to understand this whole situation.

To be continued…