I'm new to posting stories online and i would like creative criticism from all of my readers so that i can learn what i need to do better! Please help me! Thank you so much! I look forward to all of your reviews!

I'm new to posting stories online and i would like creative criticism from all of my readers so that i can learn what i need to do better! Please help me! Thank you so much! I look forward to all of your reviews!
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