Author's note: sorry for the late post. Heres chapter 4, chapter five will hopefully be done by the end of the week.
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(Snowflake's POV)
After leaving professor birch's lab, we all began on our journey to Oldale town. 'I don't really know these people that much but may seems to trust that fang person. That little girl couldn't hurt a beautifly even if she tried.' I think to myself.
(general POV)
"Blaze look!" the little girl says extending a bouquet of brightly coloured flowers to her older brother.
"Why, how lovely, rose." he says to the young girl taking out a red rose from the bouquet and hands it to his little sister.
"you know why mom and dad named you that right?" Blaze asked. Rose shook her head.
"A week before mom went into labor with you, she had asked dad where i was. When they both realized neither of them knew where i was, they panicked. They tore the entire house apart trying to find me. Eventually they finally found me sleeping in the neighbor's rose bush. They were both scared trying to take me out of there without cutting anyone. Mom cut her hand on her first attempt and dad got a scratch on his arm. When they finally got me out i had no marks, cuts or scratches. The next day there i was again sleeping with the neighbour's roses. This went on until mom went into laughbour with 's told me that story for as long as i can remember. She said she named rose, figuring that maybe i'd always be there with you just like i was with the roses." Blaze finally finished his story.
(Snow's POV)
"Aww that's so cute." I said after listening to such a cute and funny story.
"Cute? That's such a ridiculous story." Fang states trying to gain back attention.
"Wanna settle this the fun way, Fang?" said the spiky haired Blaze. "what would that be?" the less handsome Fang says as they both reach for their pokeballs.
"Growlithe, lets do this!" Blaze said releasing the puppy pokemon.
"Come forth, Cyndaquil!" Fang yelled releasing the tiny mole pokemon from it's pokeball.
*20 Minutes later*
"I totally won that" fang exclaims.
"In your dreams maybe but no I won that!" Blaze fires back.
"Your pokemon was down for at least three minutes where cyndaquil was only down for two minutes." Fang states strongly.
"Does it really matter guys?" May asked sounding annoyed.
"YES!" they both yell in unison.
"I am the greatest pokemon trainer in the world!" fang yells at stating his dominance.
"Oh really? Then prove it." An unknown voice says.
"Who's there?" I ask.
"Rise Zubat." The voice says, a barrage of pokeballs come flying towards us from all angles. Each one releases the bat pokemon known as zubat.
"Run!" Blaze yells we all began running as fast as we could.
'Things will get ugly if we stay any longer, it's basic math. Four newbie trainers with little to no experience couldn't possibly beat a horde of 20 zubats.' I thought to myself.
"Eek" May screams as she trips over a log. She then tumbled into me making a domino effect.
'We all began falling down a hill but soon i realize it was no ordinary hill, it was a cliff. "Cliff!" I yell trying to grab onto a branch or something but it was too late.
"Snowflake!" I heard May yell. *SPLASH* I fell into a river at the bottom of the cliff. I swim back up to the surface but the water had already begun moving me down stream.
'So hard to see' i think to myself as wave after wave of water splashes into my face. I could see a blurred figure falling off the cliff just as i had.
"Snow-!" i hear someone say before i black out.
To be continued...