Dan and Eric were being pulled so hard through space all the air were knocked out of them, what Eric found odd was that they were being pulled away from earth not towards it. Had I read wrong? It felt like an invisible catapult had shot them away from Earth, now Mars, Jupiter, even Pluto but still they weren't cold…They were being pulled away from their own galaxy, they were being flown backwards instead of forwards which made him feel very sick, the stars were bigger, brighter and more seeable than you ever would on Earth, but they weren't burning from them.
Dan: Something is wrong! We're going away from Earth!! (he shouted to his brother 3 feet away)
Eric: What do you mean you did something wrong?! You said God was looking over us!!
Dan: Who knows maybe I read wrong, maybe this is supposed to happen!
Eric had a face that looked like he was going to argue but they couldn't help but notice the neon stars they were going passed. Dan turned his head to see where they were headed for, a gigantic, titanic, Dan couldn't even explain it's immensity. A swirl of stars was circling one spot in the center of it all, where they going through a black hole? Dan couldn't tell, the sight reminded him of Cinnamon Toast Crunch swirls. To Dan's amazement, he wasn't scared, some how he knew he would be okay. He touched Eric's shoulder
Dan: Look ahead!
Eric looked ahead and was unable to speak
Dan: The stars will be too bright for our eyes when we get there, so shut your eyes tight when I say so. 1…2…NOW!
Quickly they both closed their eyes. We'll be okay because God is with us. Even under Dan's eyelids it was bright, he tried not to think what might happen. In less than a split millisecond they went through the swirl of stars, he had a strong feeling they were about to hit the center of the swirling stars. Something wasn't right, they seem to have hit hard ground, but he was standing on something, he didn't even feel himself land. He opened his eyes. He was sitting in some sort of train, he then looked at his hands and shoulders to check if he had hurt himself on the landing, he didn't have a scratch, he looked up at the train ceiling, but there was no hole from where he landed, then he looked across himself to find Eric who was equally confused, then they looked around themselves.
People were on the train with them, they were mostly poor people with sad faces, they didn't notice that they had landed on the train from nowhere and were occupied with themselves was if nothing had happened, such as playing with their kids or talking with friends. This was peculiar, the train wasn't like a train he had ever seen, it was made of rock. Eric looked even more nervous than Dan. Dan looked out the space which seemed to be a window, there were hilly grasslands with antelopes roaming.
Eric: Where is this train leading to?
Dan: I don't know, I think I'll ask somebody
Eric: What if these are aliens?! (he whispered) They won't understand us.
Dan: I'll give it a shot.
Dan looked at a girl in her teens three seats away.
Dan: Hey, um. Do you happen to know the train schedule?
The girl looked at him, she obviously had just interrupted her from her friend a seat away.
"Sorry, what was that?" she asked kindly
It was as if he knew her, but from where?
Dan: Do you know the train schedu- (Dan gasped)
Dan was lost for words, his dream had come true! Dan didn't know what to do, he couldn't speak, for a second he thought he might actually faint.
Dan: Katara?
Katara: Do I know you from somewhere? I'm sorry, I have a bad memory.
Dan: Yes, we are from the…um, Northern Water Tribe, we saw you only a month ago!
Katara: I think that was more like 2 months ago (giggling)
I've seen this episode, a fat guy is going to sit right in front of Sokka and Toph!, and there they were in front of them.
Eric: Is the avatar with you? (smiling brightly)
The fat guy like shown in the episode sat infront of Toph and Sokka.
Aang: Here. (depressed)
That's right, Aang lost Appa, I forgot.
Katara:
Don't worry Aang, we'll find Appa.
Aang:
It's such a big city.
Sokka:
He's a giant bison. Where could someone possibly hide him? Oh.
The train then passed through the inner wall of Ba Sing Se and enters the enormously-vast city. Ba Sing Se stretched almost as far as the eye could see, and is like a maze with many roads and buildings. The train finally came to a stop at the monorail station. All of them disembark and are greeted by great view of Ba Sing Se. It was definitely better in person than on TV. Dan and Eric, didn't know what to do, Dan decided to hurry over to the Aang Gang, he had a plan.
Dan: Hey, we don't know anybody in Ba Sing Se, can we spend the night with you guys, please?
The Gang looked at each other, Sokka called the gang over.
Sokka: Sorry, but we'll have to discuss this over.
Katara: Sokka!
Sokka: C'mon the could be Fire Nation!
The Gang rushed to a corner. Dan took this time to his advantage, he turned to Eric.
Dan: Let's say, my name is Lee and your name is…
Eric: Rui.
Dan: Right, I'm sure I heard my name somewhere. I'm sure we can teleport back whenever we want to so let's enjoy our stay for the time being (smiling)
Eric: But the school... We have to go tell somebody what has happened! (distressed)
Dan: Oh god, I forgot, we have to go back!
Dan quickly went through his book to the right page nervously, almost ripping off the pages. Dan took Eric's hand, he had to be more specific now, he had been transported to the avatar world because he wasn't descriptive enough. Take me back to my house in Buenos Aires, Argentina. They waited for the crazy sensation to grip their bodies, but nothing happened. Dan waited half a minute and still nothing happened.
Eric: What's wrong? It's not working.
Dan: I don't know.
Eric: I guess we can worry about this later when we get to the Upper Ring, you'll be able to study there. (making a grim smile)
Dan: Lets try to enjoy our stay, The police will be at the school in no time.
Then the gang came back, Dan's heart felt like it was trying to flutter out his mouth, this is so…cool!
Sokka: You can stay with is, but if we catch you doing something close to abnormal your out, got that?
Dan: Great! Thanks, I'm Lee and my brother is Rui
Toph made a disbelieving face. The gang looked at the massive view.
Toph: They're lying.
Sokka glared angrily at Dan and Eric
Dan: They're our nick names, if you want to know the truth, our names are Eric and Dan.
Toph: I can see why you wanted to change your names.
Sokka didn't look convinced.
Toph:
(sighs) I can't believe we're back in the city again. Just
Great.
Aang:
What's the problem? It's awesome!
Toph:
Just a bunch of rules. You wait; you'll get sick of it.
Dan couldn't help but notice these weren't the lines used in the TV show. Behind them, the train departed and on the other side of the track was a woman with hair that billowed in the wind from the train's departure, her robes were light green. She approached them with an unnatural smile on her face. It was the dreaded Joo Dee shown on the show, but in the avatar world her hair was shorter, and she wasn't smiling too freakishly.
Joo
Dee: Hello, my name is Joo Dee. I have been given the great honor
of showing the Avatar around Ba Sing Se. And you must be Sokka,
Katara, and Toph. Welcome to our wonderful city. Shall we get
started?
Sokka:
Yes. We have information about the Fire Nation army that we need to
deliver to the Earth King immediately.
Joo
Dee: Great, we'll get to that later. And then I'll show you to
your new home here. I think you'll like it.
Joo Dee turned around and attempted to lead Aang and his friends.
Sokka:
Augh! Maybe you missed what I said. We need to talk to the King about
the war, it's extremely important.
Joo
Dee: You're in Ba Sing Se now. Everyone is safe.
Dan had the great urge of shouting in Joo Dee's face she was a liar and get on Appa and get to the Earth King with Aang and the gang but seeing the Aang Gang had no proof that she was a liar and the King was being "babysitted" he knew he shouldn't do anything until later.
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