creativitykafune: Hi! creativitykafune is here! Well, I didn't expect to have six reviews in like one day! And I had just started this story since yesterday! Well please enjoy and thanks to those readers who had helped me on the names I could not remember!
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fdiw: im sorry to say this but it sounds some what similar to another story but i have faith this is your own creation well it was good but next time plz have longer chappies
mitsukai: Hiro and Kisa
Hatori and Kana
Haru and Rin
crazylovestory89: totally awsomw! wat r the sohma's going to do? update soon plz and put in new chapters to!
Kyou's babe: Ok, Hatori and Kanna then Haru and Rin... those are the girls names... I believe... Anyway:) personally I like Kyo asnd Tohru paired together :). You are doing a great job... It is a very interesting story so far... Update Soon!
Sei: Absolutely stunning! You have a very creative and imginative mind and I'm for sure going to continue reading the stories you come up with. Keep on writing!
it dosen't matter: love the story
YUKI-TOHRU ALL THE WAY!
I LOVE YOU YUKI
Those are my latest reviews yet to come!
Flash Back...
As Tohru finished her summary and had put away her school things, it was already one minute close to Midnight and she'll be sixteen soon.
As she stood from her chair and looked at the sky, she saw within the midnight skies were sixteen stars starting form a perfect line. 'Huh?' Tohru thought. Then suddenly, it was twelve o'clock.
'I feel weird…' Tohru started to breathe hard holding herself up, she started to feel pain from her back.
"Err…" Tohru moaned then the pain had started to get worse as if someone was stabbing and slicing her back.
"ARRRGH!" Tohru screamed as she slumped back to the floor.
"Tohru!" Three Sohma's, Yuki, Kyo and Shigure came barging in from Tohru's door seeing Tohru screaming and rolling around the ground holding herself.
"TOHRU!" Yuki and Kyo screamed and started running to her but Shigure looked intrigued.
"AAAHHHH!" Tohru screamed louder hurting their ears.
"TOHRU!" Yuki and Kyo started running to her but they were block by some barrier.
"What the hell…" Kyo trailed hitting the barrier.
"Tohru!" Yuki screamed.
"Hmm… interesting." Shigure thought.
Tohru continued to scream as two slits appeared on her back and started bleeding.
"Tohru!" The two boys kept trying to get through the barrier.
"W-What's…h-happing to m…Yarrghh!" Then suddenly a bright light appeared within the barrier blinding the Soma's.
Two pairs wings started to come out of Tohru's back making Tohru screech until it was fully opened. The two pairs wings were white and fluffy, and were twice the size of Tohru.
"Tohru?" The Sohma's wondered looking at her.
"H-help…" Tohru asked as she slumped from her knees and fell to deep slumber.
"Tohru!" The Sohma's shouted out as they ran to her again and was able to pass through the barrier.
End of Flash Back...
Now onto the Story!
An Angel Tale
Chapter 2
Rejoicing and Warning
Kingdom of Heaven…
As the night of heaven slept, a bright light formed a misty cloud above the sky and the people of heaven and the rulers of heaven awakened from their slumber.
"W-what's going on dear?" asked The Queen of the heavens.
"Oh my, look up my dear! Our sky has formed a showing for us!" The King announced the whole kingdom to watch up the skies.
Vision showing
They saw a girl who appeared to be doing some reading and writing and as she packed her things and looked at the sky from her window, she saw sixteen stars a line and it had struck midnight. The girl held herself stopping herself from the pain and as the door of the girl's room barged three men, and found the girl rolling all over. As two men tried to run to her calling her name, they were blocked by an invisible barrier and were not able to run after her. Then suddenly the girl's back bleeded two slits and suddenly wings appeared from her back twice her size and she had fainted and calling for help as the three men ran right after her.
End of Vision showing
The Kingdom was once again silenced and all of a sudden, the kingdom was full of joy and the King and Queen held an embrace.
"Dear, our little girl is coming back, our little Michiko." The queen said happily.
"I know my dear, but we must wait when the time comes." The King decided.
"I know, but it could be dangerous out there! We must have her protected at all cost!" yelled the queen.
"I know, and also, she'll need some training as well and I just know who'll be her angel guardians." The King embraced his beloved wife again and rejoiced over there daughter Michiko's return.
Kingdom of Hell…
The Kingdom of hell never slept but they trained and torture for their next battle and to have fun. Suddenly a flame of inferno appeared under the crust which they live under, and they suddenly saw a showing, all of hell watched as they saw a little girl in a room reading a book and looked up the sky seeing the sixteen stars a line. As the stars a line and midnight struck, the girl shrilled in pain as hell laughed at the girl's weakness because three men appeared and two of them ran after the girl but was blocked by a barrier making all of hell laugh even harder. Then suddenly, what disgust them was that of the girl had wings, heaven wings appeared on her back making them cautious as they watched the Kingdom of heaven rejoiced shouting "The Princess has returned, the Princess has returned." They even watched as the King and Queen of heaven rejoiced and embraced each other with hope and love.
The people of hell laughed along their Lord, King of hell laughing and started to brag.
"My, my, so that's the power of the King and Queen of heaven to reincarnate their only princess of heaven eh? Don't make me laugh, but this means that the heavens will be full of joy and happiness, that can not do.
"Hope, Love, Happiness, Joy, what needs of that, all we need is Anger, Revenge, Hate and Torture and maybe loath someone, all of hell needs that quality. We hell, detest of heaven and we must make them suffer, so we must have this princess dead or alive and brought here to this Hellish Kingdom shall we? Even have war sooner or later. And I know who'll be the ones to capture this princess." The King of Hell smirked and laughed loudly to give earth an earthquake.
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