creativitykafune: Hey I'm back! Well please enjoy! I'm sorry it may be short but it was hard to write. But it'll get better!
Latest Reiviews
pie108
2005-07-12
ch 1, signed I vote Tohru and unknown character
Audley
2005-07-10
ch 1, signed
TOHRU+KYO all the way, man!
How can you call yourself a furuba fan if you forget the character's names? SHAME! SHAME SHAME SHAME! I sentence you to read all your manga again!
Um...other than that...I didn't really like the story. Sorry. And you ask: Why would I review when I didn't like it? Because I'm weird like that AND I like to review. That's it. No offense or anything.
pie108
2005-07-12
ch 2, signed can everyone plz pick Tohru and the unknown person cause Im tired of reading fanficts about Tohru and Kyo and Tohru and yuki
Sei
2005-07-10
ch 2, anon. Kinda short, but still very good! Sorry bout the no voting for couples. I vote Yuki&Torhu.
CallaRose
2005-07-09
ch 2, signed Intrigueing I like it. The 2nd chapter was too short need more. Start writing please. I vote for Tohru and Kyo. I have read too much of the manga to say Yuki. Hope you update soon
Please Vote for the to be couples!
Tohru x Yuki
Tohru x Kyo
Tohru x unknown character (sorry cannot tell ya yet!)
Kyo x Kagura
Kisa x Hiro
Hatori x Kanna
Haru x Rin
So far The Votes are...
Tohru x Yuki-4
Tohru x Kyo-2
Tohru x unknown character (sorry cannot tell ya yet!)-2
Kyo x Kagura-0
Kisa x Hiro-1
Hatori x Kanna-1
Haru x Rin-1
creativitykafune:Aw... poor Kagura can't be with Kyo... those two couples dosen't even have a vote!
Kagura: No way! Kyo and me are going to be together!
Kyo: Yes!
Kagura: You don't love me anymore Kyo! I hate you! (Kagura starts beating him up)
creativitykafune: okay, well Yuki is winning by 4.
Yuki: That's okay with me and at least that stupid cat won't hurt Tohru.
Tohru: ".../" (Tohru flusters)
Kyo: Who are you calling ratboy!
Yuki: You are stupid cat.
Kyo: Why you! (Kyo got out of Kagura's beating and started to punch Yuki but Kyo lost and Kagura tackled Kyo)
Tohru: That's enough fighting guys, you'll get hurt!
Yuki: Don't worry Tohru, they'll be okay.
creativitykafune: Okay... well the others got at least one vote, so please readers, please vote so that I can know what I could do later in the chapters!
Please Vote!
Now back to the chapter
An Angel Tale
Chapter 3
An hour later…
An hour later…
"Wha!" Tohru yelped as she sat up from the couch.
"Wh-What happened?" Tohru thought as she shook her head.
"Tohru, are you okay!" shouted Yuki and Kyo in unison.
"Y-yeah but, what happened?" asked Tohru.
"Tohru's an angel!" shouted Momiji.
"Huh? Momiji, how did you get here? What's going on?" Asked Tohru.
"Aw, our little flower is confused!" Shouted Shigure happily.
"Eh?" Tohru was still confused.
"Oni-san!" Kisa hugged Tohru tight.
"Kisa, you're going to give Tohru more pain if you keep hugging here." Hiro smirked.
"Hiya, I just got lost, sorry." Haru appeared from the door and entered the living room and then tugged onto Yuki's shirt.
"I'M SO SORRY! IT'S MY FAULT THAT TOHRU IS HURT AND CONFUSED!" Whined Ritsu and then Shigure kept poking Ritsu's waist side making weak and tired.
"Oh my, Yuki's little Tohru was hurt? Oh dear what'll…" Ayame kept blabbing and blabbing until Yuki punched him in the face and told him shut up.
"To-chan, are you alright! Kyo, how come you did not take care of To-chan!" Kagura started to punch Kyo's face.
"Eh? Kisa, Hiro, Haru, Ritsu, Ayame, and Kagura, what are you guys doing here!" asked Tohru confused. "What's going on?"
"You had angel wings appearing on your back and you were bleeding when the angel wings popped out from your causing two slits of blood pouring out. But there was no infection and enternal bleeding, so you'll be okay, but for some reason you have like some kind of small tattoo looking of pair of wings on your back." Hatori replied.
"Oh… WHAT!" Tohru shouted as she ran to a mirror in the upstairs bathroom and looking at her back.
'Oh my, what will Uo-chan say when she finds about my back that looks like a pair of wings of a tattoo!' Tohru thought as she slowly walked back down to the rest of the Sohma's.
"Well, it's time that everyone went home so that Tohru can get her rest." Hatori said.
"Is oni-san going to be alright?" asked Kisa.
"Yes, yes she will." Hatori replied as Kisa smiled.
"Get better Tohru-chan!" Everyone shouted minus Hiro and they ran out.
"I'M SO SORRY! IT'S ME WHO GAVE TOHRU THAT TATTOO LOOKING THING!" Ritsu shouted as he blamed himself outside.
"Shut up Ritsu!" Everyone shouted.
Later, in the house…
"Well, I guess I should go to bed now." Yawned Shigure.
"Are you going to tell Akito?" Yuki said darkly.
"UhwhywouldIdothat…" Shigure said without breaths. "Uh, night kids." Then he ran to upstairs and you could here the door shut.
"Um, I'll return to bed now night guys." Tohru said with a smile.
"Are you sure your okay Tohru?" Kyo and Yuki asked.
"Yeah, we should all get to bed and get ready for school tomorrow, night!" Tohru shouted happily and ran to her room.
"Okay, after what just happened to her, why is she so damn happy!" Kyo flustered in his head.
"I am wondering what Shigure will say to Akito, I know he is going to tell like a dog will always tell his master." Yuki thought.
Then the two boys shoved their thoughts and went to bed.
Kingdom of Heaven…
"So I have decided on two angels who shall be my daughter's guardians, and it will be Ryouji, and Hiroyuki." The King commanded to the whole crowd of angel guardians inside the throne room.
"Yes your majesty." As two men rose from the bowing angel guardians and walked in front of the crowd.
"Well, the next morning you two shall enter her school and find her. And once you find her, you must stay by her side or near her side as possible and protect and train her." The King then gave a swift of his hand and all angels flew away including Ryouji and Hiroyuki.
"My dear, are you sure about choosing only two guardians?" Asked the queen.
"Yes, but if it not work, we shall send in two other guardians and it will be your choice." The King answered sweetly.
Kingdom of Hell…
"When we are ready, we shall start our war with the Kingdom of Hell, we must start as soon as possible before they get their little princess. But now we shall practice, spar or whatever needs to get ready and to defeat the heaven with all means. We must move swiftly." Shouted the king of hell.
"Yes our majesty!" shouted the people of hell.
"Now, I shall select two devil minions to try to capture heaven's princess in a month and it shall be Aki and Aya." The King of hell chose.
"Yes our lord." Said the two as they left to think about how to capture the princess of heaven.
"Now all of you, leave me and train!" shouted the King and all the people of hell left running and cheering as the King rested in his large chair throne room.
creativitykafune: Did ya guys enjoy! Well gotta go! And please vote and review! And ask me any questions or what I did wrong!
Kagura: Please vote for me and Kyo so that we can be together forever! (Kagura hugs Kyo tight)
Kyo: Let go of me Dammit!
creativitykafune: okay... well it's getting late gotta go! Oh yeah, please review!