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Chapter 4: a strange occurrence:
Lois Williams couldn't believe it , at eight in the morning, a man in a tattered black letter jacket and jeans with another man , who was dressed instead in the clothes common to any normal cubicle dweller, except he had a shot gun in his hand, both were covered in 3rd degree burns, every where except their faces. This certainly was a strange occurrence. Then the one in the leather jacket strode over and said "got any vacancies here baby". Lois slapped him in the face and said "follow me to the E.R and keep your mouth shut." He replied "yes mam" before flinging the other man who appeared unconscious, over his shoulder and quickly following her. Once they got there those two were rushed by the paramedics to the burn ward before she could tell him what a jerk he was.
Dean woke up in a hospital bed underneath a hospital issue gown, and the first words out of his mouth were "hell no! There is no way I am wearing this thing, I knew I shouldn't have gone to sleep on that damn gurney when I got to the E.R." Victor replied "well you better get used to it dean, because it looks like we are going to be here a long time." "No we aren't", dean replied, "because as soon as I we get our clothes and the shotgun back we are out of here, even if I have to carry you out like I when I woke up and carried you here" Victor answered "while case you haven't noticed we are both covered in third degree burns, so to me it's safe to assume that we are not going anywhere anytime soon". "Third degree burns my ass!" dean replied, and he was going to continue, when a doctor walked in. "hello Mr. Winchester" he said, but before he could say anything more dean asked him "how the hell did you know my name!?" He replied "why, your companion here told us, sir." Dean flashed victor a dirty look and demanded "well why did disturb my dream about the playboy mansion then?" the doctor uncomfortably replied, "well Mr. Winchester we just wanted to tell that we notified your next of kin that you're here", he paused, "and correct me if i'm wrong but aren't you brother to a Sam Winchester and father of.." dean interrupted him "I'm not a father, no way doc listen, this has to be wrong, I don't have a kid". The doctor replied "well according to these records you are the father of a certain…"he skimmed his clipboard "Ben Donavan"
Deans jaw dropped a mile.