A/N: Thanks for the reviews; I'm trying to keep in mind the tips that were given.
Disclaimer: I do not own the Inheritance Cycle
Oh, and italics are mind speaking, like in the books.
Eragon could hear Nasuada's robes moving and from behind him, he could hear Nasuada's voice, "Eragon! Angela! Elva! What are you doing here?"
Eragon turned and before he could say anything, Elva cut him off.
"You! Nasuada, you tried to keep my life the way it was, with me writhing in pain when other people were in pain, you will end up paying, and that time is now!"
The Nightstalkers immediately stepped forward, surrounding Nasuada in a protective circle that showed how devoted to they were to her. Angela's shock was apparent; her face was frozen into a mask. Elva's anger showed through her intense violet eyes, Solembum came from behind Angela, his body winding between Elva's and Angela's legs, his eyes meeting Eragon's. Eragon!
Saphira's voice rang clear like a bell in Eragon's mind. Angela's robe began to flutter, Eragon could hear Saphira's powerful, muscular, giant wings, from behind him, and, as he turned, he saw Arya on her back, an expression that he couldn't decipher. He could see Blödhgarm and the other elves running up, their bows strung and taut. Relief didn't rush over him though. Instead, tension gripped at the back of his mind, well, actually the front of his mind.
Writer's block… so ill just post this, and work some more on the plot, and hopefully ill have some more ideas eventually… yeah… REVIEW! Please?